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Why is it so F#$#@@@!!! hard to live in this world?
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DreamingWarrior
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GAHH!!! that sucks yo... what happened?


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Coldfire
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GAHH!!! that sucks yo... what happened?

I think my parents decided we didn't need it anymore *shrugs* Meh, I didn't use it all that much anyway, because I think it only worked in Canada, and I don't have that many long distance people to call lol.


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DreamingWarrior
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Howdy again folks.

The warrior stands straight with a smile,
Looking down at his unborn child,
Battered and beaten but still with a grin,
Ready to do it all over again,
"This babe is mine, and honored for my brother,
Hell awaits any who harm it or it's mother"
With a grimace from wounds and a weary sigh,
He walks to the door with clouded eyes,
One battle is over, but no time to sleep,
Now the battle is waged to defend the keep,
Holy ground her footsteps, a faery sigh her voice,
His driving force, his woman, and his final choice.


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Coldfire
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Unborn child eh? Are you expecting?!?! eek!


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ah oh.........

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Council#13
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Re: Why is it so F#$#@@@!!! hard to live in this world?

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Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
Can anybody tell me, can anyone actually show me they care?
Can anyone see the pain, the weight the scars I bear?
Could anyone look into those deep blue seas of my eternal soul?
Would they be able to take the suffering as a whole?
No, I dont believe so.

I have seen you try and I have always seen you fail.
I have heard your lies and it is time for the truth to tell.
You mock me with compassion comfort and false love.
I just want to lie down and be carried off by black doves.
I think that would be nice.

The joy you have is nothing but a blades you plunge deep into me,
The happiness you garner is from my blood and my misery,
My eyes i would gouge out if just to stop my acidic tears.
My heart ripped out by you as you all display my deepest fears.
Welcome to my hell.

If not for my belief and cowardice I would rip out my own soul,
I would tear it and destroy it so that it could never again be made whole.
I would end my own wretched existence if not for the hope I have in God.
I pray day and night to see my eternal reward and be removed from this sod.
I cant wait.

Does anybody truly know what it is to feel so lowly and rent apart?
Do any of you even feel the slightest compassion in your heart?
More I believe more that i am a mockery of a man, and mocked thusly so.
God I wish for one moment one person this feeling to understand, to show.
But I am alone.


What the f**k? Freaky good


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DreamingWarrior
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WOw...... been a crapload of a while. yeah, we found out like right after we got married... and now my son is here, albeit several months preemie! He is soooo cool!@!!!! its neat.. hahahah i'll write some later,just an update to yas.
W


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Coldfire
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WOw...... been a crapload of a while. yeah, we found out like right after we got married... and now my son is here, albeit several months preemie! He is soooo cool!@!!!! its neat.. hahahah i'll write some later,just an update to yas.
W

eek! Hey hun!!! I miss you. You have to tell me everything cuz I missed out on a crapload!!


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Warning wooow, but wht all this despair?

Honestly ... Wonderful words. and the Expression was dramatically. But why all this grief? why all this Despair ? the life is sweet .. and many people need your kind soul .. maybe , the life is became very Difficult .some time but your hopes and strong will be more from anything

we wait more

good luck thumb up

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jlee17xoxo412
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Location: US / UK

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Howdy again folks.

The warrior stands straight with a smile,
Looking down at his unborn child,
Battered and beaten but still with a grin,
Ready to do it all over again,
"This babe is mine, and honored for my brother,
Hell awaits any who harm it or it's mother"
With a grimace from wounds and a weary sigh,
He walks to the door with clouded eyes,
One battle is over, but no time to sleep,
Now the battle is waged to defend the keep,
Holy ground her footsteps, a faery sigh her voice,
His driving force, his woman, and his final choice.


wow guys it's been a while huh, i guess i can say it's almost been even a year. how is every one. wonderful poem by the was DW.


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Coldfire
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wow guys it's been a while huh, i guess i can say it's almost been even a year. how is every one. wonderful poem by the was DW.

Hey girl! big grin

I've been busy as hell but good lol. How have you been??
That guy's too busy to get on here anymore it appears lol. I miss him. =(


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jlee17xoxo412
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thats good, i',ve been pretty good myself just been really busy. you can be surprised with how much things change in just a year. aww i hope he comes back on here soon.


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Coldfire
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thats good, i',ve been pretty good myself just been really busy. you can be surprised with how much things change in just a year. aww i hope he comes back on here soon.

Oh i totally know what you mean on that account lol. Thank god for spring break to cure some of my business though Happy Dance I think he's gonna be too busy with his wife and baby, which I want to see pics of!!! big grin


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jlee17xoxo412
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aww he had a baby wow i did miss alot lol. i'm happy for him


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DreamingWarrior
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Ok, ahh the ability to get online. so nice!!!!! I am back, regular like an old man on exlax! hahahhahahah! ok, some good and some bad newz... the bad first. the great f*** state of texas deemed that I was unfit (mainly due to charges that were not even researched) to be a father, and mentally insane. so my son is now in adoption. i hate texas. I hate the cps. oh, and i hate my motherinlaw who filed said charges. but, i'll get over it. so that blows. hardcore. sorry, JJ. I know that one day God'll reunite us, till then Daniel Luther is in His hands. anyhoo, the good! I and the wife, we are well even after that, and going to move back home to b'ham!!! JJ, comin to see ya bro! big grin I'll be on later this week for more poems. Peaces!


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Coldfire
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Ok, ahh the ability to get online. so nice!!!!! I am back, regular like an old man on exlax! hahahhahahah! ok, some good and some bad newz... the bad first. the great f*** state of texas deemed that I was unfit (mainly due to charges that were not even researched) to be a father, and mentally insane. so my son is now in adoption. i hate texas. I hate the cps. oh, and i hate my motherinlaw who filed said charges. but, i'll get over it. so that blows. hardcore. sorry, JJ. I know that one day God'll reunite us, till then Daniel Luther is in His hands. anyhoo, the good! I and the wife, we are well even after that, and going to move back home to b'ham!!! JJ, comin to see ya bro! big grin I'll be on later this week for more poems. Peaces!

WILL!!!!

omg that's horrible!!


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And send me a message, yo! I miss ya like crazy!


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jlee17xoxo412
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awww hey DW.
that is horrible!!
i hope your making out okay and it's good to here from you


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King of Blades
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Re: Why is it so F#$#@@@!!! hard to live in this world?

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Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
Can anybody tell me, can anyone actually show me they care?
Can anyone see the pain, the weight the scars I bear?
Could anyone look into those deep blue seas of my eternal soul?
Would they be able to take the suffering as a whole?
No, I dont believe so.

I have seen you try and I have always seen you fail.
I have heard your lies and it is time for the truth to tell.
You mock me with compassion comfort and false love.
I just want to lie down and be carried off by black doves.
I think that would be nice.

The joy you have is nothing but a blades you plunge deep into me,
The happiness you garner is from my blood and my misery,
My eyes i would gouge out if just to stop my acidic tears.
My heart ripped out by you as you all display my deepest fears.
Welcome to my hell.

If not for my belief and cowardice I would rip out my own soul,
I would tear it and destroy it so that it could never again be made whole.
I would end my own wretched existence if not for the hope I have in God.
I pray day and night to see my eternal reward and be removed from this sod.
I cant wait.

Does anybody truly know what it is to feel so lowly and rent apart?
Do any of you even feel the slightest compassion in your heart?
More I believe more that i am a mockery of a man, and mocked thusly so.
God I wish for one moment one person this feeling to understand, to show.
But I am alone.


The beat is a little off, but the final parts to each stanza is nice. Gives it a firm and even ending. The rhyming scheme gets props, and to speak of the theme of the poem: we've all be there...


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Coldfire
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The beat is a little off, but the final parts to each stanza is nice. Gives it a firm and even ending. The rhyming scheme gets props, and to speak of the theme of the poem: we've all be there...

We sure have, unfortunately. But that's life for you. Eventually we have to just have to pick ourselves off the ground, dust off our clothing, put a smile on our faces, and continue on, as hard as it may be.


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