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DreamingWarrior
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and it was posted on my thread in the wee mornin hours!


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Old Post Jun 8th, 2005 10:17 PM
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Coldfire
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Gender: Female
Location: Vancouver, Canada

Haha nice stick out tongue


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Coldfire
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Gender: Female
Location: Vancouver, Canada

Turmoil

Emotions raging,
Rampaging,
Seething,
Controlling me,
Flooding out of me,
Can’t stop them,
Can’t fight them,
They’ve been held in for so long,
The dam has finally burst,
And all the furious anger,
The burning rage,
The drowning sorrow,
The blinding grief,
The excruciating pain,
The overwhelming feeling,
Of having the world upon my shoulders,
Never letting up,
Never letting me rest,
Knocking me down again and again,
I’m losing myself in turmoil,
And I can’t seem to find my way back….

Then I see a light within all this darkness,
And I crawl towards it,
Strength slowly coming back into my limbs,
The closer I get to that brightness,
I wonder what it is,
And how it can reach me here,
In this cold, black world,
And as I finally near it,
Tears form in my eyes,
The light that has brought me back,
Is none other than,
The love of my very dearly beloved,
Of all my old friends and new friends,
Of my mom, my dad, and my siblings,
And the strength of it makes me weep;
I am not alone like I was so foolishly thinking,
There’s always been someone there for me,
And they managed to bring me out,
Of a place I didn’t think I’d ever go,
And don’t ever want to go back to ever again.


Haha I made a poem with a happy ending stick out tongue lol


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Old Post Jun 9th, 2005 05:21 AM
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Coldfire
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Gender: Female
Location: Vancouver, Canada

Another love poem

Not so long ago it seems,
Was the day that we first met,
And now when I see you in my dreams,
I know that my heart is completely set,
On having you and only you;
No one else can compare.
I see that both our hearts are true,
In this closeness that we share.
If only the closeness was in distance-wise as well,
My life would be utterly complete;
Never could I really tell,
Just how much I want us to meet.
You haven’t just stolen my heart,
I gave it to you freely, you see,
And I don’t quite know how to start,
To tell you how much you mean to me.
When I have had a bad day,
All I have to do is talk to you,
And with every word that you say,
I feel less and less blue.
I miss you so much when you are gone,
The day just takes forever,
The hours just seem so long,
And I start to think that maybe never,
Will you come back and talk to me.
I think about you all the time,
And it doesn’t take a genius to see,
Even though most don’t give a dime,
That every word I say is true,
I mean it all, and I love you.

love lol. I have to say I like that one stick out tongue


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Old Post Jun 9th, 2005 05:47 AM
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DreamingWarrior
Knight Errant

Gender: Male
Location: Holding on tight, never lettin go!

quote: (post)
Originally posted by Coldfire
Turmoil

Emotions raging,
Rampaging,
Seething,
Controlling me,
Flooding out of me,
Can’t stop them,
Can’t fight them,
They’ve been held in for so long,
The dam has finally burst,
And all the furious anger,
The burning rage,
The drowning sorrow,
The blinding grief,
The excruciating pain,
The overwhelming feeling,
Of having the world upon my shoulders,
Never letting up,
Never letting me rest,
Knocking me down again and again,
I’m losing myself in turmoil,
And I can’t seem to find my way back….

Then I see a light within all this darkness,
And I crawl towards it,
Strength slowly coming back into my limbs,
The closer I get to that brightness,
I wonder what it is,
And how it can reach me here,
In this cold, black world,
And as I finally near it,
Tears form in my eyes,
The light that has brought me back,
Is none other than,
The love of my very dearly beloved,
Of all my old friends and new friends,
Of my mom, my dad, and my siblings,
And the strength of it makes me weep;
I am not alone like I was so foolishly thinking,
There’s always been someone there for me,
And they managed to bring me out,
Of a place I didn’t think I’d ever go,
And don’t ever want to go back to ever again.


Haha I made a poem with a happy ending stick out tongue lol


nice...


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Old Post Jun 9th, 2005 12:01 PM
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DreamingWarrior
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Gender: Male
Location: Holding on tight, never lettin go!

quote: (post)
Originally posted by Coldfire
Another love poem

Not so long ago it seems,
Was the day that we first met,
And now when I see you in my dreams,
I know that my heart is completely set,
On having you and only you;
No one else can compare.
I see that both our hearts are true,
In this closeness that we share.
If only the closeness was in distance-wise as well,
My life would be utterly complete;
Never could I really tell,
Just how much I want us to meet.
You haven’t just stolen my heart,
I gave it to you freely, you see,
And I don’t quite know how to start,
To tell you how much you mean to me.
When I have had a bad day,
All I have to do is talk to you,
And with every word that you say,
I feel less and less blue.
I miss you so much when you are gone,
The day just takes forever,
The hours just seem so long,
And I start to think that maybe never,
Will you come back and talk to me.
I think about you all the time,
And it doesn’t take a genius to see,
Even though most don’t give a dime,
That every word I say is true,
I mean it all, and I love you.

love lol. I have to say I like that one stick out tongue


haha i like it! very light on spirit in that it doesnt weigh on your heart! now, the question is WHO!???!!! hahahahaha!


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Old Post Jun 9th, 2005 12:02 PM
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Coldfire
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Gender: Female
Location: Vancouver, Canada

quote: (post)
Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
haha i like it! very light on spirit in that it doesnt weigh on your heart! now, the question is WHO!???!!! hahahahaha!


You wanna know who eh?? Well I know and he knows hahaha stick out tongue


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I really like them both big grin
happy The love poem really inspired me... I want to write one now, but it's already so late..

Old Post Jun 10th, 2005 02:43 AM
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Coldfire
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Gender: Female
Location: Vancouver, Canada

Lol ya get some sleep, then write a great poem tomorrow happy


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D-Double
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Great poems, Coldfire. I especially like Betrayed and Sinking... smile

They seem very raw and straight forward. I really like them.


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DreamingWarrior
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Gender: Male
Location: Holding on tight, never lettin go!

quote: (post)
Originally posted by Coldfire
You wanna know who eh?? Well I know and he knows hahaha stick out tongue
hahahaha well... I shall have to send out my minions to find him! haha!!!! LOL wink


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DreamingWarrior
Knight Errant

Gender: Male
Location: Holding on tight, never lettin go!

So hey, write more! hahaha


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Coldfire
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Location: Vancouver, Canada

quote: (post)
Originally posted by D-Double
Great poems, Coldfire. I especially like Betrayed and Sinking... smile

They seem very raw and straight forward. I really like them.


Thanks DD! The sinking ones I actually did for an English project lol stick out tongue


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Old Post Jun 12th, 2005 04:37 AM
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Coldfire
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Location: Vancouver, Canada

quote: (post)
Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
So hey, write more! hahaha



Lol I think I have some stored away on my comp somewhere haha. I'll go look.....


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Coldfire
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Gender: Female
Location: Vancouver, Canada

Lol yay I found some stick out tongue haha these are some I wrote when I was pissed at this one girl for being a total uncaring ****, as you can see stick out tongue

I feel up the guys,
I make up lies,
I already have someone,
But this way it’s more fun,
To have one on the side,
And go along for the ride,
I have no heart,
And haven’t even from the start,
I love no one but me,
And show myself for everyone to see,
I’m a dirty little whore,
And you don’t need to know any more.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I’m a ****, I’m a whore,
And you all know the score,
My innocence I have lost,
With no care about the cost,
I break my boyfriend’s heart,
Everytime I start,
Getting it on with another guy,
I’ve made him feel like he wants to die,
But I don’t really care,
Cuz the love he feels I don’t share,
I’ll just keep using him again and again,
And if I ever stop, I won’t know till then.

Lol some of the words are repeated in both, but oh well happy


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DreamingWarrior
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Gender: Male
Location: Holding on tight, never lettin go!

Ouch. some experience with girls like that is why I have broken my fists a few times in youth... dont get like that now. I will just leave their slutty-ho-bag-scrog-anyone self at the club and drive home, like I did last time... haha cool stuff yo! Gotta get that dragon poem going !


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I saved that one..big grin
That was really good.... people like that sicken me. no expression And I hate it when people start rumours about me about stuff like that^^

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Coldfire
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Gender: Female
Location: Vancouver, Canada

quote: (post)
Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
Ouch. some experience with girls like that is why I have broken my fists a few times in youth... dont get like that now. I will just leave their slutty-ho-bag-scrog-anyone self at the club and drive home, like I did last time... haha cool stuff yo! Gotta get that dragon poem going !


Lol that's the way to do it big grin Oh the dragon poem... I have it somewhere.... crap have to find it in my room hahaha


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Coldfire
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Gender: Female
Location: Vancouver, Canada

Free

Sudden awareness,
A burst of consciousness,
Dragged out of dreams,
Best immediately forgotten,
Dreams of her past,
When her whole entire life,
Was utterly pointless,
Incredibly, unbelievably worthless,
Her heart pounds,
At the terrible memories,
That just can’t be erased.

Strong, reassuring arms,
Wrap around her tightly,
Bringing comfort,
Inspiring peace,
She sighs in relief,
Rolling over,
Cuddling against him,
He who found her,
And made her whole again,
Who loved her undeniably,
And whom she’d love forever.

He opens his eyes,
And holds her closer,
His cheek against her forehead,
Radiating his love,
A shield against the storm,
A barrier against her fear,
She lifts her head,
Kissing his smooth cheek,
Then his soft lips,
Breathing his familiar scent,
Drinking in his utter beauty.

His hand moved down,
To rest on her belly,
Not yet large and swollen,
With the child she carries,
His child, their baby,
A sibling for the child,
Already asleep in his bed,
In the room nearby,
The one not his real son,
But his in every other way,
So he may as well be.

She once had nothing,
Now she has everything,
And couldn’t be happier,
Even if she tried,
A wonderful love,
A beautiful child,
Another on the way,
Many caring friends,
She’s free of fear,
Free of pain,
Free of entrapment.

I posted this on another thread, but oh well lol stick out tongue


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DreamingWarrior
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Gender: Male
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Hey glad you put it here, too. I like. very sweet and sentimental.


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