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Coldfire
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Originally posted by Lana
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PEOPLE!

Enter the damn contest!

I am, I am.... but I'm a horribly slow writer *sigh* I'm tryin tho, I really am


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Originally posted by Lana
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PEOPLE!

Enter the damn contest!


I gots anotha entry


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في هذا العالم ثلاثة أشخاص أفسدوا البشرية : راعي غنم , طبيب و راكب الجمال , و راكب الجمال هو أسوأ نشال و أسوأ مشعوذ بين الثلاثة

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eek! yessss!!!

I LOVE IT!!!! entry #2 is so.... awesome!!

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Both entries rock

come on people - enter!!


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في هذا العالم ثلاثة أشخاص أفسدوا البشرية : راعي غنم , طبيب و راكب الجمال , و راكب الجمال هو أسوأ نشال و أسوأ مشعوذ بين الثلاثة

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big grin

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.....damn!!!

C'mon, we need more entries!

Feanor, you're going to enter, right?

I think I may ask Alpha Centauri to do so, too.....


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weeeeeell...i might be if persuaded, properly shifty

and yes, you should ask AC also....makes it that much more interesting to see the contrasting styles

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Originally posted by lil bitchiness
Both entries rock

come on people - enter!!
Oh my God they do!!!!! The contrasting style to the single theme is just, overwhelms me. And I actually laughed (not from because it was bad) because it just tickled me to death!!!! Awesome pieces!

Now where's the rest of you!!!

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Ya Krunk'd Floo
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I like the "O"s and "eartherns" of that first one. I also enjoy its view-askew of 'joy'.

The second one is a little above my reading level, but it certainly looks pretty.

It's certainly a shame we are limited to two choices though, especially considering the number of personal poetry threads in this forum.

Remember people...It's not the winning that counts, it's the taking part!


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Ya Krunk'd Floo
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One weird thing...

Is the first line of 'Love's Happy State!' supposed to state 'the tormentor%u2019s hand'!?!?!?!?!??!?!

I'm referring to that percentage sign and the digits...


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Full fathom five thy father lies;
Of his bones are coral made;
Those are pearls that were his eyes:
Nothing of him that doth fade
But doth suffer a sea-change
Into something rich and strange.

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Originally posted by Ya Krunk'd Floo
One weird thing...

Is the first line of 'Love's Happy State!' supposed to state 'the tormentor%u2019s hand'!?!?!?!?!??!?!

I'm referring to that percentage sign and the digits...

I was wondering about that too...


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Originally posted by Ya Krunk'd Floo
I like the "O"s and "eartherns" of that first one. I also enjoy its view-askew of 'joy'.

The second one is a little above my reading level, but it certainly looks pretty.

It's certainly a shame we are limited to two choices though, especially considering the number of personal poetry threads in this forum.

Remember people...It's not the winning that counts, it's the taking part!
I'm assuming you wrote the first one. I like to think I know you, so by submitting a poem that is unlike you, takes the spotlight away from you. But then again I could be wrong!!! Been known to happen.

Oddly enough, that first piece threw me off the beaten track when I had read it. The theme after all was "joy".

I thoroughly enjoyed the second piece, as at first it started off as something cynical and full of....hmm, hate's too strong a word, maybe disgust. But then goes on to all that is/could be wonderful about "joy"...

So far, I am very happy with two pieces. A complete gem!

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quote: (post)
Originally posted by Ya Krunk'd Floo
One weird thing...

Is the first line of 'Love's Happy State!' supposed to state 'the tormentor%u2019s hand'!?!?!?!?!??!?!

I'm referring to that percentage sign and the digits...
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Originally posted by Coldfire
I was wondering about that too...
I saw that also...I don't think it was meant to look like that. Kinda weird. yeah.

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Originally posted by NunYahBidness
I'm assuming you wrote the first one. I like to think I know you, so by submitting a poem that is unlike you, takes the spotlight away from you. But then again I could be wrong!!! Been known to happen.

Oddly enough, that first piece threw me off the beaten track when I had read it. The theme after all was "joy".

I thoroughly enjoyed the second piece, as at first it started off as something cynical and full of....hmm, hate's too strong a word, maybe disgust. But then goes on to all that is/could be wonderful about "joy"...

So far, I am very happy with two pieces. A complete gem!

And I'm supposed to compete with THOSE?! Damn I'd better get my act together then lol stick out tongue


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Originally posted by Coldfire
And I'm supposed to compete with THOSE?! Damn I'd better get my act together then lol stick out tongue
It is NOT a competition of sorts, dear!!!! Although a winner will be chosen, but it is....I feel where all the differing styles of one theme can be placed in one thread for all to enjoy!!! And yes the first two entrants has so far been a salacious treat to read (i've read both so far 10 times, and I shall read them again after this).

And you...dear Cold can do just as good as any. You just have to believe you can!

And Ya Krunk'd....you are certainly a man with many sides...."Remember people...It's not the winning that counts, it's the taking part!"

No truer words has ever been eloquently uttered!

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Originally posted by NunYahBidness
It is NOT a competition of sorts, dear!!!! Although a winner will be chosen, but it is....I feel where all the differing styles of one theme can be placed in one thread for all to enjoy!!! And yes the first two entrants has so far been a salacious treat to read (i've read both so far 10 times, and I shall read them again after this).

And you...dear Cold can do just as good as any. You just have to believe you can!

And Ya Krunk'd....you are certainly a man with many sides...."Remember people...It's not the winning that counts, it's the taking part!"

No truer words has ever been eloquently uttered!

awww thanks I'm workin on it right now, so we'll see how it goes stick out tongue


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Originally posted by Coldfire
awww thanks I'm workin on it right now, so we'll see how it goes stick out tongue
Remember!! Your first instincts are always right!!!

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Remember!! Your first instincts are always right!!!

Well I'll remember that smile Hope others are gonna enter this too...


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Originally posted by NunYahBidness
I'm assuming you wrote the first one. I like to think I know you, so by submitting a poem that is unlike you, takes the spotlight away from you. But then again I could be wrong!!! Been known to happen.


Nun, I wish I was as clever as to hide my shadow by bathing my whole self in darkness, but alas poor Yorick, I knew him well, Horatio, I am not.


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Full fathom five thy father lies;
Of his bones are coral made;
Those are pearls that were his eyes:
Nothing of him that doth fade
But doth suffer a sea-change
Into something rich and strange.

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Originally posted by Coldfire
Well I'll remember that smile Hope others are gonna enter this too...
Not to worry. I'll hunt them down, and slowy slay them with vicious rhetoric!!!!
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Originally posted by Ya Krunk'd Floo
Nun, I wish I was as clever as to hide my shadow by bathing my whole self in darkness, but alas poor Yorick, I knew him well, Horatio, I am not.
HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!! Nice!

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