Lighting is wrong
Integration of the render is weird.
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Background is a nice attempt, but blending is a little iffy sometimes
Layout is really unbalanced
Barker's sig is better overall. What The deciding blow was Thorinn's overintegration of the hair on the render, but not the face. The render is then enveloped in a background that is too underdevelped to be the main focus of the piece.