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The Big O
The Original O

Gender: Male
Location: In the midst of it all

Cool My Stories

These are some of the things that I felt and went through when I was younger. I admit that they don't quite make sense the way I wrote them, but you all will get the gist of them. Enjoy smile


Fish
Swimming deeply as time goes by
Staying down there, they'll never die
When they come up to see the world
They survive.
Why can't I?


Why Aren't You Here
Why aren't you here?
I'll never know.
But let me guess just to show
How I feel about you now
Even though it was long ago.

The day you left I cried so hard
That my tears turned into sand,
Cause I thought the hour of your return
Would be quite close at hand.
But our father/son relationship
Has never even started,
Because you were so self fish
And even cold-hearted.

Why aren't you here?
I'll never know.
But let me guess just to show.

I don't need you as much as people think
Because my life's not ready to sink.
And even though you're not here,
I'll grow up with better years.

Why aren't you here?
I'll never know.
But let me guess just to show.

I shed a lot of tears for you
After you had gone.
And you even forgot who I am.
Well it's me,
It's your son.

Why aren't you here?
I'll never know.
But this is what I had to show.
How I feel about you now
Even though you left long ago.


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The Big O
The Original O

Gender: Male
Location: In the midst of it all

Why I Promise
I promise because I love.
I promise because I want.
I promise because I have to.
I promise because I need to.

I promise to soothe the pain.
I promise to ease the rain.
I promise to make life easy.
I promise to let life please thee.

I promise because I promised.


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~Forever*Alone~
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Gender: Female
Location: EveryWhere And NoWhere

my dad left me too, we have that in common


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The Big O
The Original O

Gender: Male
Location: In the midst of it all

I was quite surprised when I wrote "Why Aren't You Here" because I didn't think that the fact of him not being in my life affected me in any way. I just wrote it one day because I was feeling alone and neglected and I didn't know why until I reread the poem.


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Location: EveryWhere And NoWhere


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The Big O
The Original O

Gender: Male
Location: In the midst of it all

Awww shucks. *giggles*


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The Big O
The Original O

Gender: Male
Location: In the midst of it all

Just to Let You Know

It's been so long
But now you're back
Asking for my forgiveness
I just don't know what to do
Because this is all too new

You were never there
Even when I cared
Now you're making your return
Confusing me and upsetting me
Well you have a lesson to learn

What do you want from me
You don't know me
And you never even took that chance
I have nothing to give you
Not even respect
Because you don't even deserve that

It's too late
Now you have to wait
Things are finally on my terms
You hurt me once
But never again
Now you'll know the burn

I hope you know that this will never be easy
And nothing you do will ever please me
You have a lot to make up for
A lot to explain
And a hell of a time to rid me of my disdain

But just to give you some idea
Of how I think I still feel
You are still my father
And there is no one other

This is dedicated to Raymond Porter, The invisible man who helped make me.


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The Big O
The Original O

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I was really going through something when I wrote this. It only took me 5 minutes to write this.


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~Forever*Alone~
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Location: EveryWhere And NoWhere

i have written a similar poem for my father too.

or at least has some of the same elements.

so what happened?


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The Big O
The Original O

Gender: Male
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He randomly called me after 19 years of not being there and said that he missed me and hopes that the feeling is mutual. 19 YEARS!!! Come on. He doesn't even know me enough to miss me. I've recently been having dreams that he was sick. I hope he's not calling to ask for a kidney or something or to tell me he's dying. I don't think that that would be respectable in any way.


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