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Jedireaper
PSN ID > DarkJedireaper
 Gender: Male
Location: Manchester, UK |
Really? Really? I believe I'm DarkJedireaper. Also, that was not what happened! lol You missed out the two points where I got saviour on you, and you 'accidentally' shooting me in the back. XD
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A long time have I waited for this, my little green friend!
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Oct 22nd, 2012 06:57 PM |
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XvampbenjiiX666
Commander Cadaver
 Gender: Male
Location: Whiskey River |
Bullshit. What about last night? Hmm when you gunned me down with a silenced pistol then left me? Hmm? HMMM?! And that jeep thing was definitely true. Remember?
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Thank you Scythe. "Take one last look at your shining Heaven, Imperius. For soon, nothing of it shall remain, but my laughter..."
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Oct 22nd, 2012 07:04 PM |
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XvampbenjiiX666
Commander Cadaver
Gender: Male
Location: Whiskey River |
Something new will be up soon. Working on it. Not like anyone really reads this stuff.
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Thank you Scythe. "Take one last look at your shining Heaven, Imperius. For soon, nothing of it shall remain, but my laughter..."
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Oct 26th, 2012 05:22 AM |
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XvampbenjiiX666
Commander Cadaver
Gender: Male
Location: Whiskey River |
Viking Girl (started out as a parody of The 69 Eyes - Gothic Girl but took a whole different route)
You can see her, whenever it snows
Looking to the skies, her eyes aglow
She bares Thor's hammer around her neck
Her pale flesh covered in goosebumps
As the chilling winds wrap around her
She lets the winds caress her, shutting
Her eyes and becoming lost to the world
She smiles, a beautiful smile, as snowflakes
Land and melt on her rosey cheeks
The feeling takes her to images of
The lands on her ancestors, the journies
That they've endored, the hardships they
Have conquered like the lands they traveled
So deep in thought, she feels like she is there
Sailing the waters of the artic north,
Bringing home a cargo of loot from lands
They have recently discovered
As she sees the outline of land,
She lets the others know, grinning
And pointing to where her family
Would be waiting for her return
She turns to help the others and-
Her phone rings in her pocket,
Bringing her out of her thoughts
And back into her snowing reality
She grabs her phone, smiling at the name
And answers but continues to think
Of her heritage.
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Thank you Scythe. "Take one last look at your shining Heaven, Imperius. For soon, nothing of it shall remain, but my laughter..."
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Oct 26th, 2012 08:39 PM |
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XvampbenjiiX666
Commander Cadaver
Gender: Male
Location: Whiskey River |
Here is a summary of my writings:
Starting point
wandering/confusion
gore
gore
more gore
somewhat calmness
more gore than the other gore
some blood for equal measure
gore
creative killing/gore
calming once more
possibly some last bit of gore
ending/gore.
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Thank you Scythe. "Take one last look at your shining Heaven, Imperius. For soon, nothing of it shall remain, but my laughter..."
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Oct 26th, 2012 10:02 PM |
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XvampbenjiiX666
Commander Cadaver
Gender: Male
Location: Whiskey River |
Something new will be up soon. Give it time.
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Thank you Scythe. "Take one last look at your shining Heaven, Imperius. For soon, nothing of it shall remain, but my laughter..."
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Oct 27th, 2012 07:15 AM |
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XvampbenjiiX666
Commander Cadaver
Gender: Male
Location: Whiskey River |
Last time I was drunk, I was on skype with you. Drinking right out of a bottle while on cam. I was gone. It numbed the pain and agitation so much. It made it easier to stay on to talk. And yes, I did leave a drunk post here on kmc, saying "haha drunk comment." Thank you, Bacardi and Smirnoff.
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Thank you Scythe. "Take one last look at your shining Heaven, Imperius. For soon, nothing of it shall remain, but my laughter..."
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Nov 3rd, 2012 01:48 AM |
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XvampbenjiiX666
Commander Cadaver
Gender: Male
Location: Whiskey River |
Thinking of writing new "lyrics" for my possibly to never happen joke band.
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Thank you Scythe. "Take one last look at your shining Heaven, Imperius. For soon, nothing of it shall remain, but my laughter..."
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Nov 14th, 2012 03:50 AM |
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XvampbenjiiX666
Commander Cadaver
Gender: Male
Location: Whiskey River |
Not writing this because I
Still have feelings for you
Because I want you back
For the umpteenth time
Because I want to torture
Myself once more.
No, I'm writing this because
I feel the need to get stuff
Off of my my mind and chest
So much stuff held back,
An unhealthy amount of stuff.
But where to begin:
Let's start earlier this year
When you were crying to me
About things I shall not say
But will say what you asked me
"Do you know what it feels like to
Have someone that claims they love
You rip your heart out?"
You asked me, of all people, this question
With tears in your eyes and all I could
Reply with was a yes. A simple yes.
But what I should have said was
"Of course I do. You've done it to me
More than once. Each time worse
Than before. Shattered heart,
Crushed spirit." But I can't just
Blame only you for that.
I have to blame myself for being
Blinded by stupidity, not love.
Then there was the time we
Didn't speak for a few days because
I supposedly threatened to kill the
Canadian you drag around. Not once.
I only said, and can prove, that I wanted
To kick his face in. That was it. Nothing more.
But no. You supposedly read the messages
Yourself on his profile, read that I wanted
To kill him. Not sure where I said that
But it wasn't in those messages.
That little incident lead me to be
Dubbed the "killing obsessed *******"
And how shocked you get when I
Post or say something that doesn't
Involve killing someone. Shocking, I'm sure.
If you only knew the things
That go through my ****ing head everyday.
Sure that would ****ing shock you as well.
But in the end, after a long argument,
We forgave each other, something
I shouldn't have done since I haven't
Done anything wrong in the first place.
And again, I was blinded by stupidity.
How about this one:
I believe it was only a few
Days after that incident when you
Tell me that you didn't want to
Talk to anyone but you stayed on msn.
Drunk, curious, and pissed, I messaged
You and sent you a text to get your
Attention, took a bit but I won.
You claimed that I was your boyfriend
But yo would rather talk to your
"Best friend" about your problems
Than me. Makes perfect sense.
Oh how my phone corrected
Everything I spelt that night,
Masking my drunkinness and
Making me sound sober, like
I was thinking straight.
Oh how much sense I made that night
Even under the influence, and
Puking up Everclear, Kracken, and
Double chocolate vodka shortly after.
Yet said that I'm a problem drinker,
That i did stupid shit when drunk.
Not once did I say anything stupid
That night, not ****ing once.
And again, yes. I was drinking
When I posted that comment
Stating that it was a drunk post.
And yes, that means I was drinking
Right out of the bottle while talking
To you, yet you couldn't tell could you?
Damn, that alcohol sure did ease
The pain and anger I felt around that time,
Making it easier to talk to you.
Oh! How about that picture I sent
Earlier this year when I was in SC?
The one with the guy and girl chatting
On computers and it said something
About long distance relationships?
Remember that picture? I sure do.
Sent it to you, thinking about us
And how it fit us perfectly...
But you sent it to the Canadian, James
If you will, and the both of you
Changed your pictures on msn.
His to the guy and yours to the girl.
And as soon as I found out, I knew
It was going to be the same bullshit
All over again. So I confronted you
About it and you changed your picture
So fast, I thought I imagined the
Whole thing.
Yet somehow, I was the bad guy.
I was the one causing problems.
The one making things hard for you,
Complicated as always. You know me,
I never listen when you tell me not
To message someone and tell them to
Back the **** off or I'll kill them.
Whoops, there goes my obsession with
Killing people. Must be true.
No. I made nothing complicated
Or hard for you. You did.
You made things hard for yourself.
Made things hard for me.
In a time of my life when things were
Already hard to ****ing begin with.
You claimed to have been there for me
When my aunt, my best friend Cory,
My grandmother and uncle passed away.
But you weren't. The friends that you didn't
Want me to be around or talk to were,
My family, a couple of exs of mine, even
Some friends from here were there for me
More than you were. Yet I was there
For you when your great grandmother
And horses passed away. Made time for you
Through my own grieving.
Was also there for you when you called
Crying because someone you asked
Out, while we were dating, turned you down.
On the phone, ready to smash in the face
Of anyone that you called a friend from
That point on. Oops, there it is again.
And you wonder why I became a problem drinker?
Why I hold so much anger and hate for you?
And yet, I'm still considered the bad guy
That ruins things, that you "once loved".
Please. If you loved someone, you wouldn't
Have done any of what I just said
Or didn't say to the person you love.
Again, I did not write this because
I still have feelings for you, because
I want you back once again,
Because I miss you. Not at all.
Wrote this because I needed to get
It off of my chest and out of my mind,
And possibly because I had an
Amazing bottle of rum and might be
A bit out of it. But oh well, right?
Not like it matters anymore because
After all of these years, these long,
Torturous, painful years, I have learned
From my mistakes and have moved on.
Finally found someone that I haven't
Compared to you. And she is perfect
In ever way imaginable.
Alright, I'm done with this stress reliever.
Gonna find some more booze and
Think of killing more people.
And James, kill yourself. It would make
A lot of us happy because no one likes you.
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Thank you Scythe. "Take one last look at your shining Heaven, Imperius. For soon, nothing of it shall remain, but my laughter..."
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Nov 25th, 2012 07:46 AM |
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Ketronake
Restricted
Gender:
Location: Account Restricted |
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Nov 29th, 2012 10:37 AM |
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XvampbenjiiX666
Commander Cadaver
Gender: Male
Location: Whiskey River |
And you are...?
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Thank you Scythe. "Take one last look at your shining Heaven, Imperius. For soon, nothing of it shall remain, but my laughter..."
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Dec 1st, 2012 03:51 PM |
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XvampbenjiiX666
Commander Cadaver
Gender: Male
Location: Whiskey River |
A Squirrely Song
Everyone hates you,
Here.
No one likes you,
My dear.
You fawned over yourself
As if you knew despair.
I'm opening old wounds
And pouring salt in there.
Cryptic hidden messages
For someone over there.
We hate you. We hate you. We hate you.
Drop dead.
Neurotically Yours: Squirrely Songs V
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Thank you Scythe. "Take one last look at your shining Heaven, Imperius. For soon, nothing of it shall remain, but my laughter..."
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Dec 31st, 2012 03:51 AM |
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Omega Vision
Face Flowed Into Her Eyes
 Gender: Male
Location: Miami Metropolitan Area |
Here's a tip I learned from my Poetic Technique professor: mind your end words. I notice you end quite a few lines on words like "the", "there", "an", "and", and "be."
End words should be strong, active words, generally nouns or verbs, and while 'be' is a verb, it isn't a very active one, unless used in specific, philosophical senses (and that's usually pretentious).
Keep it up though!
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“Where the longleaf pines are whispering
to him who loved them so.
Where the faint murmurs now dwindling
echo o’er tide and shore."
-A Grave Epitaph in Santa Rosa County, Florida; I wish I could remember the man's name.
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Jan 3rd, 2013 05:26 PM |
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XvampbenjiiX666
Commander Cadaver
Gender: Male
Location: Whiskey River |
Thanks.
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Thank you Scythe. "Take one last look at your shining Heaven, Imperius. For soon, nothing of it shall remain, but my laughter..."
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Jan 4th, 2013 06:28 PM |
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XvampbenjiiX666
Commander Cadaver
Gender: Male
Location: Whiskey River |
Well that sucked. I had something new but my ps3 decided to delete it. So tomorrow I'll try reposting it on a tablet.
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Thank you Scythe. "Take one last look at your shining Heaven, Imperius. For soon, nothing of it shall remain, but my laughter..."
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Feb 5th, 2013 03:33 AM |
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XvampbenjiiX666
Commander Cadaver
Gender: Male
Location: Whiskey River |
Pulling you by a chain
Connected to a collar wrapped
Around your petite neck,
I force you down onto
Your hands and knees.
Your pathetic whimpering
Makes me smile as I pull
You ever closer to me.
As you kneel before me
I bring a booted foot up,
Placing it on your side
And push you onto your back.
You stare at me with eyes
Filled with hate , fear, lust.
If only you knew what will happen
Next will that lust ever be gone.
Playing into your emotiosns
I kneel down next to you,
Resting a hand on your bare stomach.
Slowly moving a hand upward,
I rest it on one of your breasts
Caressing it softly, lovingly.
Your eyes close and your whimpering
Turns into lustful moans.
Watching you, I pinch the nipple
Between thumb and forefinger
Pulling it towards me.
Your moans become louder,
More sporadic between
Your panting for breath.
Your body squirms as you run
A hand down your body.
With you lost to lust, pleasure,
I let go of your nipple
And move my hand to your neck.
Rubbing it with a thumb, I remember
The sensitivity of your neck.
The soft flesh that wraps around it.
Wrapping my hand around that neck,
I squeeze tightly, watching as your eyes
Open, filled with hate and fear.
You punch me in wild attempts
To force me to let go.
The flailing of your arms makes me smile
As I feel your strength weakening
Your breaths becoming nothing
But gurgling as you try to breathe.
I wrap my other hand around
Your neck, squeezing tigher.
Your eyes bulge as air escapes
No longer rushes to your lungs.
My smile becomes a grin
A grin of a mad man
As I hear bones snap,
Feel them snap under my hands.
Your arms go limp, hitting the floor
With a dull, dead thud.
Your eyes become ever more lifeless
As they glass over and stare ahead.
With one final squeeze,
I let go of your neck, pushing
Loose strands of my hair
Out of my face.
Grinning still, I stand up and stare
Into those lifeless eyes before
I turn around and leave.
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Thank you Scythe. "Take one last look at your shining Heaven, Imperius. For soon, nothing of it shall remain, but my laughter..."
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May 20th, 2013 06:30 PM |
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XvampbenjiiX666
Commander Cadaver
Gender: Male
Location: Whiskey River |
I'll have something new up in a couple of days. Busy with wedding stuff so no time to write. Just know my next piece will be a tribute to a fallen hero of mine.
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Thank you Scythe. "Take one last look at your shining Heaven, Imperius. For soon, nothing of it shall remain, but my laughter..."
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Jun 15th, 2013 03:06 AM |
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XvampbenjiiX666
Commander Cadaver
Gender: Male
Location: Whiskey River |
Gonna attempt two writings tonight. I'm a bit rusty so yeah.
1st one:
DarkJedireaper and I, a two man squad
Sitting in wait as a scout helicopter
Flies by, searching for any sign of life
As the sound of the rotors trail off
We get into a crouching position
And rush for the closest area of cover
As we go over a plan to take out
The nuisance of a scout helicopter.
Will be hard to do since all we have
Are C4 charges, a light machine gun,
A grenade launcher and an assault rifle.
Reaching our destination, we search
The area for any signs of infantry
To our relief, we find none in the area.
DJR throws down an ammo pack
As he reloads his LMG and takes his time
I collect a few grenades and load
The launcher, looking up as I hear
The sound of the helicopter coming back.
Slipping into the building behind us,
We climb the stairs to the roof and wait.
Spotting the helicopter, I run across the roof
Knowing it will spot me and give chase.
As expected, the pilot starts shooting
Round after round from the stationary guns.
Hearing them pass by my head, I jump
Down onto another roof and go prone
Behind a wall, holding my grenade launcher.
As the helicopter swings around, DJR starts to fire
From his LMG to distract the pilot.
As the pilot flies closer to him, he pulls out a C4
Satchel and throws it as hard as he can
Blowing it up as it flew close to the helicopter.
The pilot dodges to the right, giving me time
To bring up my launcher and take aim.
As the pilot turns the helicopter to the side
And steadies it, I fire a grenade and watch
As it hits him on the head but not killing him.
DJR seeing this, throws another C4 satchel
And sticks it onto the windshield of the helicopter.
As the pilot sees this, he tries to jump out
But too late, with a distinct beep, the helicopter
And pilot turn into nothing but a ball of flames,
Plummeting to the ground below.
Meeting up with DJR, we run from the buildings
Heading to our next destination, an enemy objective.
Looking at the time on our HUD,
We realize that we are in for a long day.
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Thank you Scythe. "Take one last look at your shining Heaven, Imperius. For soon, nothing of it shall remain, but my laughter..."
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Aug 27th, 2013 05:43 AM |
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XvampbenjiiX666
Commander Cadaver
Gender: Male
Location: Whiskey River |
And 2nd is a tribute to a hero that passed away a couple of months ago.
Slipping into their open window,
The Night Stalker pulls out his .25 caliber pistol
And finds the husband of the couple,
Sleeping next to his wife.
Walking up to the husband, smiling menacingly,
The Night Stalker places the barrel of the pistol
To the skull of the husband and pulls the trigger
Waking up the wife as blood and brain spatter
Covering a small area in red and pink.
Grabbing the wife, The Night Stalker covers her mouth
Stopping her from screaming as he mounts her.
Ripping at her clothes, he beats her with his fist,
Trying to keep her subdued and still.
With her slightly unconscious and laying still,
He pulls his pants down and begins to rape her
Fulfilling every perverted fantasy he could imagine.
As he finishes and pulls his pants up,
He stands over her and fires a round
From his pistol into her head and smiles.
Grabbing a stick of lipstick, he stares at the wall
Above the bed of the dead couple.
Grinning like the mad man he is,
He draws a pentagram on the wall
And above the two upper points of the pentagram,
He writes "JACK THE KNIFE" and drops the lipstick.
Grabbing anything of value, he walks out of the house
And slips into the night, ready to kill again.
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Thank you Scythe. "Take one last look at your shining Heaven, Imperius. For soon, nothing of it shall remain, but my laughter..."
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Aug 27th, 2013 06:25 AM |
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XvampbenjiiX666
Commander Cadaver
Gender: Male
Location: Whiskey River |
The Stench of a virgins body
Decaying in the dimly lit crypt
Barely distracts me as I slit
The flesh between my fingers,
Dipping a pen into the gathered blood.
With steady hands, I sign my soul
To the Lord of Hell, in blood, forever more.
Staring from under my hood,
I walk over to the corpse
And rest my hands on the hilt
Of the knife lodged in her chest.
Tilting my head back, I start to chant
"In the name of the Whore of Bethlehem,
I sacrificed this this virgin, carving
Your mark into her stomach.
In the name of the Dark Father, Satan,
I have used her blood to mark
Your unholy presense. And in the name
Of Azazel, I now light this body aflame
As a sacrifice unto you. Accept the
Ashes of this whore to be!"
Laying a thin veil over the corpse
I take a lit candle and place the flame
Against a corner of the veil,
Smiling as it soon catches flame.
As the flames rise from the body,
I kneel at it's head and softly pray.
"Oh mighty Satan, save me
From the treacherous and the violent.
Mark with vengeance those who would
Hinder me for I am youe humble servant.
Thou art the Lord of the darkest pit
That brings my soul to greatest joy.
Thou art the one and original innovator
Of humanity, those who can not see this
Deserve no pity. I ask that you place in
My path those who will be destroyed
By me, grant me the power to do so.
I ask that you place in my path
Those puzzles that I am to solve,
Grant me the wisdom to do so.
I ask that you place in my path those
Challenges that I am to overcome,
Grant me the strength to do so.
Be my path left or right, my final
Destination is your kingdom.
That which is to die, will die.
That which is to burn, will burn.
He who is to find salvation in the arms
Of the Dark Lord shall do so.
For the Lord of my destiny is Satan!
Ave Satanas!" My echo reverberates
In the crypt as the body continues to burn.
Rising from my position, I blow out the candles
And take one last look at the burning corpse,
Smiling as I leave the crypt into the night
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Thank you Scythe. "Take one last look at your shining Heaven, Imperius. For soon, nothing of it shall remain, but my laughter..."
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