alrighty!.
i'll watch what i can in the marrow.
then i'll let you know what i think.
its the only reason joel keeps writing with me, its because i dont bullshit him on his work.
if i think it sucks, i straight up say "this sucks, do a ****ing re-write"
and he does.
its not about being a jerk, its about helping him improve his overall writing, and its worked because he has gotten better, even writing freelance now doing reviews of local talent and has applied for writing gigs on websites.