just tell me what you think:

so sad
so lost
i wander alone in a desert picking flowrers that turn to dust
my mind has gone
my soul lingers beyond my grasp
no where to go
no where to hide
now i'm scared
filled with hate
if i was a scale i would drop
having said this i am filled with nothing..................just space

*o and don't try to copy, i already entered it to books, and a poetry contest. sorry*

muahahaha 😛 jus telll me what ya think... please

Its nice. Very sad yet romantic.

is that a song u r writing or a poem but very good

idk, i wrote it as a poem but i could make it into a song.

look i gave insprational advice now why doesnt ne one ask for my advice on my thread i did so well i thought lol

"if i was a scale i would drop" 🤨 omg....how....contemporan *hysterical giggle*

quite good

hahahahaha, very funny, and i must congrtulate you "dexx" becasue you have no sence of humor sorry.

actually scratch that
you did give you option

Originally posted by feltonfreak
hahahahaha, very funny, and i must congrtulate you "dexx" becasue you have no sence of humor sorry.

I think its ok, could be longer and more detailed

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