Dreams

I'm going to make up a poem... jsut to see how long it takes... you'll all be able to see it develop...

I dreamed a dream of you last night.
As the cloud embraced my mind,
I saw you leaving me to die.

I felt the pain as I reached out.
You didn't take my hand.
I cried for you, as I travelled far,
without ever leaving my bed

I screamed a scream for you last night,
but you didn't turn to see.
My soul left me with you last night,
and I no longer feel.

ok, so this is it so far....

I dreamed a dream of you last night.
As the cloud embraced my mind,
I saw you leaving me to die.

I felt the pain as I reached out.
You didn't take my hand.
I cried for you, as I travelled far,
without ever leaving my bed

I screamed a scream for you last night,
but you didn't turn to see.
My soul left me with you last night,
and I no longer feel.

I don't like the first verse...

I dreamed a dream of you last night,
I smiled to see your face.
As the cloud embraced my mind,
I saw you turn to leave

this is it so far... what do you think?

I dreamed a dream of you last night,
I smiled to see your face.
As the cloud embraced my mind,
I saw you turn to leave

I felt the pain as I reached out.
You didn't take my hand.
I cried for you, as I travelled far,
without ever leaving my bed

I screamed a scream for you last night,
but you didn't turn to see.
My soul left me with you last night,
and I no longer feel.

I am luvin this poem so far, Phoe!! Well done 😄 I wish i could write as well as you!!