Just a story

This is just a story I was thinking of, DBZ of course it is DBZ meets sailor Moon:

Serena walks into a house, all of her friends are there. Looking at them with a discoureged look she sits with them.
Serena: So, whats up?
Ray: Would'nt you want to know?
Minna: Ray, stop it with your attitude!

If you are going to write a story, it had better be longer than 3 short sentences...

It will I am still thinking though. AND I WISH PEOPLE WOULD POST AND TELL ME HOW THEY LIKE MY STORYS!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😠 😠 😠 😠

Mean while Reenee is walking around and is suddenly pulled into an alley. Renee looked at the person.
Renee: Mom?!
Person: Renee I need to talk to you.
Renee:why?
Mom: Becouse, your father challenged the "Z-wariors and so I came here to warn you and your friends. You father placed a bet that you and your friends would win. A saber mach is what it is.
Rennees mom gives Rennee 9 sabers glowing sabers that is.
mom: Pluto, Uranus, and Nepyune are still here write?
Rennee: yes!

Reason I don't say anything is that I don't care much for DBZ and Sailor Moon...

Make sure you read my new rule, DBZFan! Just incase!

Say what?!?