General Fiction Discussion

Started by DigiMark007139 pages

Somehow I thought Dusty was judging....his entry came as a shock to me.

lol

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Originally posted by SpikeSpiegel
I've also posted the third part of the fourth mission of my first matrix story. It's pretty much all one big fight so it made for a very fun write. I love the ending of this part, Ush is a genius. The next part is when it was just me and San left against that agent - fun times πŸ˜›

Hehe, where we were fighting on the bus?

That was fun πŸ˜„

Did the judgeing start? I'm confused as to how this will all be decided.

The contest isn't even over for another two weeks.

Really? What's the date?

Ends the 31st.

Originally posted by Lana
Ends the 31st.
No, I meant todays date.

Ooooh.

Today's the 17th πŸ˜›

Originally posted by Lana
Ooooh.

Today's the 17th πŸ˜›

Wow....I am OUT of it.

I thought it was september.... πŸ€ͺ

Originally posted by TheKingofKINGS!
Wow....I am OUT of it.

I thought it was september.... πŸ€ͺ

Swing and a miss.... big time.

Originally posted by Lana
Hehe, where we were fighting on the bus?

That was fun πŸ˜„

I want to get to the last mission because that was fun πŸ˜„

...well the first half...when we were fighting Jericho's men again, not the bit where we had to drag the wounded out while dealing with those agents.

...Also I stick by the fact that it was a good plan!

Originally posted by LiL nAstY GirL
I think I'm going to have to drop out of this. I'm really sorry, but I can't write short stories, I always end up writing way too much.

Just to keep that in view. I had to delete the original, wrong thread. πŸ˜‰

That was a good plan, it didn't go so bad.

Meanwhile, due date closing in. 😱 I marked everyone who has contributed a story on the list of participants.

Didn't go so bad? The agent picked up the vent with me inside and kicked my ass, I only narrowly got out in what would have made an amazing end to a film...actually it was kinda like how Neo didit in Matrix 1...

*gets excited*

Originally posted by Syren
I mean the over use which is paramount to abuse mhm

Whateldiwhat? You want to be abused?

Wow, i've shot threw the lats few parts of my Matrix sotry. Now it's the bit where it was just San and me. I'll post the final chapter tomorrow, then the conclussion on Sunday - which is exactly two years after I starter writing it πŸ˜›

Originally posted by SpikeSpiegel
Didn't go so bad? The agent picked up the vent with me inside and kicked my ass, I only narrowly got out in what would have made an amazing end to a film...actually it was kinda like how Neo didit in Matrix 1...

Agents are great for drama like that, because they are stylish, superhuman, but more importantly also given to ridiculous showboating, often at the expense of actually doing their job.

I loved the ending. I remember wishing the bus would hurry up and take me home so I could find out if I had survived πŸ˜›

Originally posted by Ushgarak
Agents are great for drama like that, because they are stylish, superhuman, but more importantly also given to ridiculous showboating, often at the expense of actually doing their job.

And they get annoying as all **** after a while πŸ˜„

clapping

The competition's heating up.