General Fiction Discussion

Haha, best entrance ever!!!

Even picked up on how I always call people "genius" when they're being idiots!

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Well, as soon as I figure out how to proceed, I will continue writing...

Heh, I liked Tanic's entrance!

BTW, Rex, I've deicded in flight the wings/fins swing around the pod so that the cockpit is at the top of the pod still, but the it's moved at a right angle so that...

I dunno, it just flies as if in the picture it had been swung 90 degrees clockwise, yeah? I don't suppose it really matters, unless you're plannign on a space battle. If you are, talk on AOL, I'll try and explain what I mean!

Rianna's was cooler 😛

About my Matrix story....I never said which Wednesday did I...

Nah Alana...

I guess each to their own - if I had wanted an entry like that Tanic would have been different 😛

Spike - Grrrrr

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No, Spike, no you didn't. 😛

And Tanic's entrance was more cold and merciless and cooridinated, as Fallen templates tend to be. Anything Swordsman-related has to involve big explosions!

Well, duh! 😄

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If you liked your entrance portrayal of Rianna, then you'll love her conversation with Galder...

Hahaha....

*wants to read*

Go read!

Hahaha!!!

Yeah, you've got Rianna's personality down perfectly....😂

but missed takuan completely 😛

i got the distinct impression that you were actually ordering me and rah around...takuan wouldn't take that too well....if at all 😛

Though I must say Rianna is generally a bit more eloquent than "you're shitting me" 😛 but the general sarcasm and cold bitchiness is spot-on.

Tanic seems cool!

Also, you name his ship the Shadow Blade? Or did I do that?

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Hey REX, check your PM's!

Yeah, I felt a tad blah about that too, Takuan. I might go back and touch that up a bit.

And you did that, Tanic. Ship-name wise, I need the name of your bounty hunter friend's ship.

dude! sonnets are so evil! i never want to write another one ever again! my lit teachers in college can't make me! (at least when i get there...) 😠 😛 😆