Lyricist's

hey i was wondering if anyone on the boards writes lyrics, if so how bout you post some of ya work...

ok heres one of mine ive done more but hey...

its called Blade from a Child kinda freaky but.... here goes

Blade from a child

Glistening in my eyes,
My pupil gets bigger,
My eyes widen,
Like a child seeing a toy,
That they’ve always wanted,
The blade shines in my eyes;
They sparkle like stars in the night sky,
I look at it with disappointment,
Like a child who’s behaved badly,
Like a child it looks at me waiting to be forgiven,
I could forgive a child easily,
So I forgave the blade,
I would pick up the child and cuddle it,
So I picked up the knife,
And held it close,
Close to my arm and I felt the need,
The need for the forgiven blade to sin again,
To draw a thin line of red down my arm,
To make me feel the pain,
The addiction in too much for me.

You can forgive a child many times,
Doesn’t matter how many times they behave badly,
So I can forgive the blade,
I have to; I have no other choice,

It makes a little slit, on my bare arms,
Suddenly a line of blood fills, the top surface of my skin,
Where there were the scars of times before,
Of when I had forgiven the blade,
Forgiven the child,
Now it will leave new scars,
Like the times before,
How many more times can I forgive the child?
How many more times can I hold the blade?
If I let the child get out of hand from now,
What will happen when it grows up?
What will happen to the blade?

lemme know what you think, n post some of your work if you have ne..

take care
luv AS!!!
xxx

hopefully this will work now...

kool are you in a band? i play guitar/work sequencers for a band called Lead Breakfast. i co-write some of the lyrics but they're not the best.

Lead Breakfast - Skin

I've been watching you
watching me
watching you

wanna know if your feelin what i feel too
while your watching me
watching you

I wanna....get...under...your skin
get....under
get....under
....your skin

i've been feeling you
feeling me
feeling you

wanna know if your feeling what i feel too
while your feeling me
feeling you

I wanna....get...under...your skin
get....under
get....under
....your skin

so you see.....i couldnt help myself....
i wanted to touch your....skin
so bad....

(screamed) AND NOW YOUR SKIN IS MIIIIIIINE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

YOUR SKIN!!!! YOUR SKIN!!!! YOUR SKIN!!!!

(whispered) i wanna....get...under...your.....skin.......

i know it sucks but its the only one i could remeber off the top of my head.

give it time and your lyrics writings will improve

hey that was the only song i could remeber off the top of my head because its simple!!! most of our songs have much better lyrics.

hey thats kewl i dun some more but this was one of the latest nah im not in a band i just write lyrics 😄

how long u been in the band for?

i write lyrics for the band im in ill will post some later on when i have time

Originally posted by .:[Kamikaze]:.
hey thats kewl i dun some more but this was one of the latest nah im not in a band i just write lyrics 😄

how long u been in the band for?

um....bout 2 years. we toured about 2 months back and we played at a big gig in england a while back where we played live with Slayer which was kool.

you may not be in a band but your song has much better lyrics than most of our songs! seriously though there really good do you write for a band or is it just a hobby?

ill make you wait till our band makes it big but listen out for a song called
Slut fight
advanced peodipdile
parrallel dimension
and
lesbianinity

VS-
a world of hate is what is feels I liveing in,
with no solid ground to lift my spirits when I'm limp
Like the love of no other, i turn to you my brother,
and I turn it on up to listen once again.

Now hate breeding hates just an escalation,
untill somebody snaps they finally feel empowered,
with the tolerence level depleted
and corrupt leaders all wanting to lead it,
so I turn on up to listen once again.

CHRS-

rise above these hateful tries to complicate this,
to kill inoccents in any case is just forscetious
we've got children with guns,
children on the run,
children and there mums,
so I turn it on up to listen once again.

PLENTY MORE WHERE THAT CAME FROM, IF ANY ONE LIKES IT LET ME KNOW, IM A CLOSET WRITER AND THE FEED BACK WOULD BE GREAT, PEACE OUT. TIMO

Originally posted by total metalhead
um....bout 2 years. we toured about 2 months back and we played at a big gig in england a while back where we played live with Slayer which was kool.

you may not be in a band but your song has much better lyrics than most of our songs! seriously though there really good do you write for a band or is it just a hobby?

kewl, where in england?

nah i just write for me... really you think so 😄 *blushes* 😮 lol

Originally posted by must_kill_Santa
ill make you wait till our band makes it big but listen out for a song called
Slut fight
advanced peodipdile
parrallel dimension
and
lesbianinity

lol aight kewl, whats your bands name?

Originally posted by ando
VS-
a world of hate is what is feels I liveing in,
with no solid ground to lift my spirits when I'm limp
Like the love of no other, i turn to you my brother,
and I turn it on up to listen once again.

Now hate breeding hates just an escalation,
untill somebody snaps they finally feel empowered,
with the tolerence level depleted
and corrupt leaders all wanting to lead it,
so I turn on up to listen once again.

CHRS-

rise above these hateful tries to complicate this,
to kill inoccents in any case is just forscetious
we've got children with guns,
children on the run,
children and there mums,
so I turn it on up to listen once again.

PLENTY MORE WHERE THAT CAME FROM, IF ANY ONE LIKES IT LET ME KNOW, IM A CLOSET WRITER AND THE FEED BACK WOULD BE GREAT, PEACE OUT. TIMO

hey Timo that was really kewlies i like the chrs the best tho but the whole thing was good 😄

keep writing

take care

luv AS!!!
xxx

hey this is another one called Addicted check it out n lemme know what you think

Addicted

Lost it all at your mother’s funeral,
Felt so alone,
Needed something to keep it real,
So you tried it once,
Didn’t thing you’d get addicted,
But it’s too late,
That’s you fate.

Feeling so alone,
So you turn to it again,
Start to burn it in a spoon,
Look straight into the burning flame,
And remember your childhood with your mum,
Then you feel the heat and come back to reality,
To what you was doing.
Nearly done…
Take out the syringe,
Fill it with the solution,
That you’ve come out with,
Pull on the tourniquet,
And inject your life into your skin,
Or is it your death?

Felt so alone,
Needed something to keep it real,
So you tried it once,
Didn’t thing you’d get addicted,
But it’s too late,
That’s you fate.

Feel the buzz, the high you’re on,
The blood rush inside,
You can’t remember anything,
And you pass out.
You finally awake,
But to your surprise,
You are in a cemetery,
People around you are dressed in black,
The priest recites ‘Jack Donald has sadly left us…
After his mother’s death he couldn’t cope…
Only at the age of 20.’
You look around and see that people are crying,
Laying flowers on the coffin in front of them,
There’s darkness around you,
And you’re lost within.

Felt so alone,
Needed something to keep it real,
So you tried it once,
Didn’t thing you’d get addicted,
But it’s too late,
That’s you fate.
The last of Jack Donald,
With heroin.

R.I.P

take care

luv AS!!!
xxx

ONE FOR ME MATE AS-

You confidence in me makes me glad,
like a kite you gave me flight when I was bad,
It just took a little longer than I though it would be that all
we all fall dont mind the call

No I dont care about the naegative words that you say,
if there directed at me couldn't care any way,
you mean nothing, zero, zip,
hope it makes you feel good,
makes you feel like the shit.

Exponentially Im increasing in speed
soon the atmosphere will have gone so I can breathe
because to unify me must try no dont deney
No dont despise a brother just because of family ties
because, man your just like me'hehe
and me as well I'm just like she,
yes where all ****ed up in our own little way,
trying to make it day by day.

try imagine it with based around 4 jazz chrds, acoustic guitar, rapped/sung. Aloha Timo

Originally posted by ando
ONE FOR ME MATE AS-

Exponentially Im increasing in speed
soon the atmosphere will have gone so I can breathe
because to unify me must try no dont deney
No dont despise a brother just because of family ties
because, man your just like me'hehe
and me as well I'm just like she,
yes where all ****ed up in our own little way,
trying to make it day by day.

try imagine it with based around 4 jazz chrds, acoustic guitar, rapped/sung. Aloha Timo

that was well good, i liked this part the best, i can hear it rapped in my head but could be good sung too... nice very nice keep it up

take care

luv as!!!
xxx

if your still on let me know would love to chat....

well ima b off soon no i'll chat proper when im back yeh,, anyway take care

luv AS!!!
xxx

Hmmm Kamikaze....

I look at lyrics and they never really mean much to me without music. Reading yours I cant imagine it with music, they sound very much like poems. Very good poems though.

When you write them; do you actually write them with a instrument?

When I had time to write them I used to sit down with my acoustic guitar.... it can help you focus on more that you are writing for a song.

Do you ever actually write music for your words as well?

Lyrics dont become lyrics without music; my opinion.... but still a good use of language within your text quite original and complex. 🙂

THe only persons who I could see with music are actually Metalheads....although they dont read as great lyrics I can see some very powerful heavy music behind them. 😛

heres one of my songs that i wrote it may seem wierd with out the music though since theres a shit load of music that gos with it

L.S.D

come with me
and ill take away
all your pain
make you feel free again
close your eyse
count to ten come with me

feel it deep with in your spine
peace has been denied
slowly your brain frys
deeper and deeper you fal
so now you convince your self your fine
that everything is all right
knowing damn well your lifes a lie
but no ones there to hear your calls

so know you hide away from your self
slowly turning away everybody else
fear is all you have left
all you have left is to pray for death

lost slayer of decentcy
drugs replce our familys
caged in my insanity
untill the day i die

feel the sting
watch it bleed
tap the vayne
lost slayer of decentcy is me
to fast to think
jsut cant sleep
strung out on crank
in me you will find your end
see you week
see you crumble
brings me joy
seeing you in pain
hearing you scream
is how i feed on you

part of you left behind
suffering thats so divine
lost with in a ****ing line
deeper and deeper you fall
now your all out of time
kiss your ass goodby
one last twist of my ****ing nife
but no one there to hear your calls

slowly you fade away
see it on your ****ing face
such a dirty disgrace
but thats the price we pay

now you wonder endlesly
a victim of my insanty
never ending tragidy
following you till the end of time

feel the sting
watch it bleed
tap the vayne
lost slayer of decentcy is me
to fast to think
jsut cant sleep
strung out on crank
in me you will find your end
see you week
see you crumble
brings me joy
seeing you in pain
hearing you scream
is how i feed on you

now im done with you
move on down the line
find another
just like you
one more time
one more time

Originally posted by .:[Kamikaze]:.
kewl, where in england?

nah i just write for me... really you think so 😄 *blushes* 😮 lol

no in the states, mostly around arizona though.