okay...it took me a while...(took..hee hee) but I read it! It's good. There are like...two or three typos...but it's good. i got into it. I know what you were taking from though. I have to admit that I took from something you posted once for one of my love scenes, but it didn't quite work out the way I had hoped....it was better, but not what I had hoped for....anyways...
It was really good....finish it and send it to me...😄