someone battle rap me

Originally posted by metal face
ahhh so mah wants to step and brawl/lets go homie we'll go one on one till i watch ya fall/me angry nah you're just a sissy with no attitude/mommy didnt give you enough hugs? no pony?/you're gonna have to step up with disses/ you like some photocoppied money you're a phoney/you prolly roll around in a vw bug/flower wallpaper/think you the best thug/go ahead bite my lines i hope you choke/wooo im angry but we all know you tape queer as folk/but this has been fun so please respond son/trully be man? you're the one thats wishin he was one/

Me fall? Nah, you're the one going down bro/ much like you do each night to your fave male ho/ Heh, you're all talk, but now it's time to chalk the walk/ and (damnnit) trim your mohawk! (umm) /Shlt I've seen chipmunks packing more heat/ you're a dead beat/ makin listeners fall asleep/ You're merely a boy, pal/ but I'll give you a helping hand/ You'll find friends your kind over at the ranch Neverland.

nice madsci.

Mah is the best right now on this thread..really good rhymes and good choice of words!

you're right im all talk that's how i got your girl/snathced her from right under ya like her virginity made her toes curl/oh ok the MJ similies come out now/well let me try/im fondaling your rhymes an career like MJ no lie/yo you one of the lost boys that let MJ in the back door/special ed tell me about neverland you the one that didnt come back from the tour/how was that? son ive got more heat than ten supermodels ina row/
and this one goes out to warn hockey for the next time he wants to diss my flow/

he brought out the MJ similes

it's over

Metal face, or was it The Dull Disgrace?/ either way you shouldn't talk too loud/ like with MJ anyone could point you out in a crowd/ Prancing around in a turquoise hip-hugging get-up/ salivating over the next Pee-Wee Herman set up:/ Damn, it's okay to be a fan of the guy, but not like this!/ stalking a fruity star is a hit-or-miss!/ sure there's a fraction of a chance you'll end up in a bliss/ and fulfill your dreams of a PeeWee Herman-kiss/ but more likely is/ that you'll end up drowning in that same PeeWee's jizz.

mah thats was nice.

some of my old rhymes from when we just started:

you just another homie with no rhymes/ you smell so bad people give u dimes/ time for u to take a shower/ you breathe smells too just like ur sisters/ ---(cant read handwriting 🙁 lol)
thinkin u the best but u just gettin stabbed in the chest/ Im at the highest point in life/ but i dont stab my enemies with knives/ i just use my rhymes/ ima **** up your blood cells/ and break down ur brain cells. You have manly breats/ you ate too much and had a cardiovascular arrest (lol)/ ---cant read the rest

ill try reading my hand writing but right now i g2g

happy thanksgiving guyz.

h0ck3yh0rr0r if you work more on your choice of words and not repeate using lines like " im just,im gonna,your a " you know kidna sounbds repeative..but who am i to judge..its just my opnion!

Originally posted by mah
Metal face, or was it The Dull Disgrace?/ either way you shouldn't talk too loud/ like with MJ anyone could point you out in a crowd/ Prancing around in a turquoise hip-hugging get-up/ salivating over the next Pee-Wee Herman set up:/ Damn, it's okay to be a fan of the guy, but not like this!/ stalking a fruity star is a hit-or-miss!/ sure there's a fraction of a chance you'll end up in a bliss/ and fulfill your dreams of a PeeWee Herman-kiss/ but more likely is/ that you'll end up drowning in that same PeeWee's jizz.

started out great but in end its a bit drowned !
my opinion 😄

in flames those are my old lyrics as i said. when i just started lol
i couldn't even read my handwriting so its not the whole thing 🙂
and yes i USE to sound repetative. i think i'll post some new stuff. but i dont really have time to rhyme. 🙂 lol

lol..u know try to give it more passion and make the subject matter less gangsta u know..lines with out am killi uand and im better and shit..im not a good lyricst but ive been into the rap world for a while

like i said before...those lyrics up there that i posted is when me and my friend just started.

i gotta question for u guyz. you guyz think Notorious B.i.g is overrated or underrated?

one of the best!

thats what i say...but it seems to me he's underrated. maybe im wrong

biggie's dope

f*ck 2pac!

...y u against tupac? i dont see anything wrong with him. they both great IMO. tupac was good cuz he rapped with both hate and love.

Originally posted by h0ck3yh0rr0r
...y u against tupac? i dont see anything wrong with him. they both great IMO. tupac was good cuz he rapped with both hate and love.

2pac is the most overrated mc that has ever lived

every single one of his albums was average at best with the exception of the makaveli album which was def good.

u can make the case for all eyes on me,but that was just a party album(s)

to me,2pac was an average mc.dont get me wrong,2pac is good and he didnt suck by any means,but people ride his jock way too hard.

the best thing about 2pac was his charisma.he was an entertainer,and a very good one at that.

he had some very good songs that i like a lot,but on an album to album basis,they just werent that great top to bottom

his greatest hits discs was his best,and that was just put together.

the reason why i dislike him is because waaaay too many people ride his jock harder than anything.saying he's the greatest that's ever lived and blah blah blah to the point where its just made me dislike him.i just got sick and tired of hearin it,and it made me tired of him.that and everybody plays his shit 24/7 here in this ghetto ass town,so i'm beyond sick of him.

2pac was a good mc.but he's nowhere near the best.he has some classic songs for sure like "dear momma" and a few others,but there's also some artists who have a classic song here and there and they're not the greatest.i'm not tryin to put him down even though it sounds like it,but to me,he never really had a classic album.even if he did,i dont think 1 would make him the best ever.tribe had 3 classic albums in a row and two of the best albums ever made period,and i dont see many ridin their jock anywhere near the way peeps ride 2pac.and they actually deserve it.

lots of great rappers rap with love and hate.and many more average and below average mc's rap with love and hate.so love and hate doesnt make u a great mc by any means.

back to the subject at hand.**** some writtens,i'm gonna freestyle.not just some ol' freestyle s***,but some battle type shit for whoever wants some

why dont you battle me and lets see who's king/but we both know you aint ready for the intensity i bring/pens and papers,stage and mic/i kill haters,and never come less than tight/not because i try,but i have a natural gift/i could be high,havin smoked a fat ass spliff/and i still wont miss a beat/i could be drunk off my ass and still bring that arizona heat/so let me know when you're ready to step/cause i'm always down to build up my rep