Ok, guys, this one is back in the focus again! I need to hammer in some things.
1. Celsius, are you sure you want one that really does mean either you or your crew dies?
2. Burn, can we work on yours a little? We have that same 'get out of jail free' feel to it that I find it hard to work into the story.
3. Hammurabi, how are you doing with this? Binding back together sounds good, maybe you want a different first half though?
4. Azrael, we kinda clash with your 'death is not the end' idea except perhaps in one VERY unpleasant way we can think of... I think a different approach may work better.
5. Castor, are you ok with the new one I made for you?
6. Barbarossa, still waiting for some work there.
This needs sorting urgently! Players who are not sorted my not play after the Second Assignment!
Ok, just did a fast track analysis on that one (aren't I nice?)
It's in. I shall probably ignore the first few words as I often do because it is a given (as I said before, like telling s Rebel he will wear shades).
However, I will warn you that this Prediction will not be sued to, say, save you in a fight against a bad guy. If he kills you he kills you and the apparent contradiction will be down to interpretation. Is that ok?
I know, it is just hard for me to do it any other way. I appreciate the positiveness but first time you do badly in a fight you could 'invoke' this.
I am having difficulty suggesting a straightforwards replacement for you but I think the core of it- the faith in the apparently fallible- can be kept to keep it upbeat. I am trying to play around with
"You must have faith in the hopeless"
right now. Trouble is, that's not a prediction, merely advice. I'll keep working on it. Any ideas yourself?