((Ok, obviously some people cough black_goku and puddin cough don't read the registration thread.. so here's something I posted there:
Ok, quick compaint:
Not that I'm trying to pick on people, but could Puddin Pop and black_goku#1 please, please use better grammer? Seriously.
Ex. *went to the store and bought cheese*
That is wrong... Meaning, don't do that.
Sally (or your character's name) went to the store and bought some cheese.
That is right.. Meaning, do that.
Ok, that's all. And like I said. It's not really those two people alone, but those were the only two that stood out.
Thanks!
There it is.. again. Please, please take note of this. It's really annoying to some people.))
Originally posted by crzygrl6412
Jem glanced back towards the school and thought she saw Logan's face. She stared at him for a second and smiled, hoping he looked her way."That your boyfriend or something?" Ray said, pointing towards Logan.
"Huh?... Oh yeah, it is." Jem said, snapping out of it and smiling. "Look, I'm gonna go, okay? I'll see you around though." She started to jog back towards the school, "And thanks for the light!"She snuck into the office aids' room and took a pass from the drawer. She quickly filled it out and ran to the classroom the Logan was in. She knocked on the door and waited for the teacher to open it. She handed him the pass.
The teacher cleared his throat, "Ahem.. Logan, you're wanted in the principle's office right away." He handed Logan the pass.
"i usually like that class..but we werent doing anything..🙂 thanks for the free pass early. Whats up? you bored already its not even noon yet" said logan
((Okay. Scratch my last post then.))
Before Reality knew it, the door next to the boy flew open as he took a run. Reality unbuckled herseat belt, struggling to get from the vehicle as she watched the boy fall by a girl. She paused standing by the car as she watched as the girl began helping him into some door.
She stood there for what seemed like forever before car horns behind her began yelling ignorantly at her. She blinked and it seemed that her eyes had once again changed from the charcoal to the ash blue. Her head turned to the man sticking out his head yelling something to her. But she couldn't hear him, everything suddenly went deaf.
She bent over and retrieved the keys from the ignition then stepped back from the car. She walked towards the man, who began to withdraw his head leaving his mouth in awe. The car door she left open as with the car. She walked around the rear, giving the man a real glare before slamming the keys on his hood in a scary...yet casual way.
Then she walked away down the street. Back towards the boring school of hell. She was late for her next class already.
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Arriving at the school, Reality shoved her hand to her side into the bag. She pulled out a pen and began doodling on her hand. She pushed the door open with her foot, causing everyone to stare and analyze her.
"You're quite late Ms. Costiny." The Chemistry teacher, Mr. Howell, commented lwering his glasses, and dropping his model to her side.
"Reality." She told him.
"Pardon."
"Reality. Don't call my by my last name." She lifted her head just enough so her ash blue eyes could see him. "...Please." She added as she walked from the doorway to her stool second row from the front on the far end by the windows. She continued to doodle.
She could feel kids peel their eyes off from her. Many kids weren't too fond of her. Then again many didn't know her. Whence she felt they had all unglued, she lifted her head and began to stare out the window. Resting her chin on her hand. She bgan thinking of the dissapointment she just encountered minutes ago.
Now didn't I say to stop doing that. It never does anyone any good. She thought to herself.
Originally posted by a1hsauce
Logan looked around trying not to make noticeable his huge grin on his face... he got his books together and headed towards the door... as he walked out he winked at Jem and walked down the hall with her"i usually like that class..but we werent doing anything..🙂 thanks for the free pass early. Whats up? you bored already its not even noon yet" said logan
Jem laughed, "I know, but still. I was bored and didn't feel like being in theater today." She shrugged, "Plus, I knew you'd be great company." She smiled at him and kissed him on the cheek.
Originally posted by crzygrl6412
Jem laughed, "I know, but still. I was bored and didn't feel like being in theater today." She shrugged, "Plus, I knew you'd be great company." She smiled at him and kissed him on the cheek.