Poem/story.......

Started by Veralidaine4 pages

um, here r two, altho dey short.......

In the memory of the past that brought sorrow and hatred, we shall grieve over the lost souls, and pity the lone soul that was deserted...
( can u guess what dis is exactly bout?)

and.......

trappedc in a world of grief, hope has not found his soul, for his past holds shadow ans sorrow. He only lomgs for freedom from his cruel life. As darkness falls, he shall protect the innocent fromthe evil at heart.
He is lone. His heart...it is broken

i like both, some of those lines can be useful for my potc fic. if you don't mind if i borrow some of your poems. of course, if and when i do, i'll get permission first and give/note your credit to work.

ey man o course i dont mind...u ma pal after all๐Ÿ˜Š if anything i'm flattered...โœ… coz u wanna use my work...๐Ÿ˜ฎ......

coolies...๐Ÿ˜„

i rather use yours than have my brain fried/die off when i make some sad attempts to make my own...๐Ÿ˜†

*squints eyes...*
Boppy......tisk tisk, such a doubt shouldd not be a thought, as it is not truth..โŒ

sorry. i'm just so critical of my own work and a perfectionist!

naw, dun b sorry, but you should not worry yourself with such degrading thoughts......

i know! but...can't help it!

lol.........yes u can...say it wit me..๐Ÿ˜„..yes i can!

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lol....me jus jokin...sorry if i freeked u out.....๐Ÿ˜„

yah didn't ^.~ i've heard far worse! *grins* ๐Ÿ˜†