short poems.....

Started by RagingSilent59 pages

๐Ÿ˜‚...yes! fear me๐Ÿ˜ˆ....Buaahaha....๐Ÿ˜„.....*more laughs*

*comes racing back and hits jenni upside her head* that's for being a smartass! hmph! ๐Ÿ˜  ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜–

๐Ÿ˜ฑ well i never!.....*runs away screaming*....

shut up with that screaming! ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜†

๐Ÿ˜ฑ....

*shutsup and walks away*๐Ÿ™..

never! bwahahahaha! ๐Ÿ˜ˆ ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜ฎโ€๐Ÿ’จ

never done a poem in my life. to hard.

boppy>>>>>๐Ÿ™.....ur too damn evil for ur own good mon ami๐Ÿ˜ฑ

shadow>>โŒ..not hard at all, if u just concentrate hard on ur words and ur feelings, then the pen will start movin๐Ÿ™‚..

Have you ever wanted to succeed more then anything
Have you ever tried so hard it felt like you should be king
Have you conquered anyone who stood in your path
Have you never looked back forgetting your past fiery wrath

Did you run down the silent roads in the middle of the night
Did you climb up the mountains hoping for a near land site
Did you hack through the thorns with only your heart
Did you dive off of a cliff almost torn apart

Then when you plunge to the ground like a bolder
You turn around realizing your life went colder and colder
When did it go so forward and make that big U turn
It seems all your loved ones are being damaged in your own burn

Everything is detonating you just want it to cease
Everything around you is the opposite of sheer peace
Everything has changed since you broke the glass
Everything close makes it so hard to pass

There's not a moment where the chaos ends
There's not a second when you donโ€™t just want a friend
There's not a day that pass's by with any serenity
There's not a sunrise where your parents trust your identity

No one knows to where the path will lead
No one knows if it will bring you to victory or to concede
No one knows what you feel or what you truly desire
But really you just want to get through this endless war and retire

๐Ÿ‘† Very nice SA, I like that a lot.

much agreedโœ…......excellent job S.A๐Ÿ‘†

Originally posted by RagingSilent
boppy>>>>>๐Ÿ™.....ur too damn evil for ur own good mon ami๐Ÿ˜ฑ

shadow>>โŒ..not hard at all, if u just concentrate hard on ur words and ur feelings, then the pen will start movin๐Ÿ™‚..

well...DUH?! ๐Ÿ˜– ๐Ÿฐ ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜†

gretchen (recess): did i just get "duhed?" ๐Ÿ˜†

Originally posted by BOPRecruit 16
well...DUH?! ๐Ÿ˜– ๐Ÿฐ ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜†

gretchen (recess): did i just get "duhed?" ๐Ÿ˜†

๐Ÿ˜ฑ......i am appalled by your sarcasm๐Ÿ˜ฑ..

aren't you always? ๐Ÿ˜›

๐Ÿ˜ฑ...perhaps, yes๐Ÿ˜„

i will cease to shock you then! ๐Ÿ˜†

this one's based on a character from a movie:

Evil truth to corrupt my soul,
a bittersweet song to break the quiet.
Die my gentle spirit,
swim in the darkness you love so.
Beautiful sorrow,
you welcome me to your cold embrace,
you kill all hope to fade my freedom.
Glittering eyes of tomorrow,
your lust fades to nothing.
Chasing dreams is a forgotten desire,
you so long to immerse yourself in the bleeding emptyness of your heart.
Dying faith, you stand by me in pure misery,
you cherish my hearts' last smile.
None can save you from the echoing silence of your broken happiness.

-Everything is made to be broken.

and which character is that? ๐Ÿ˜‘ ๐Ÿ˜†

"everything is made to be broken" - iris by the goo goo dolls? am i right? ๐Ÿ˜ฑ i love that song ๐Ÿค˜

and i don't want the world to see me/because i don't think that they'd understand/when everything is made to be broken/i just want you to know how i am/i just want you to know who i am - "iris" by goo goo dolls

๐Ÿ˜„....um, Nicholas Cages character...i don't remember his name๐Ÿ˜ฎ

โœ…! spot on๐Ÿ˜„.....the last line is from that songโœ…...

annnnnd o course, the movie is City of angels๐Ÿ˜Š..

i love that song too! ๐Ÿ˜„..hence the last line๐Ÿฅท๐Ÿ˜„

what did you think of the poem?๐Ÿ™‚