short poems.....

Started by Darth Revan59 pages

SH---> yep ✅
V---> thanks 😄 😮

thought so. pearl jam? creed? neither of them?

Darth>>>>>>awww......no prob😄.....

SH... no idea... don't think it's creed though the guy's voice doesn't sound quite right

😖 well i always get those two bands mixed up

um heres 2 more poems....

So dark was the blood which once stained your skin,
so cold were the tears you once cried.
Now a new day has dawned,
& you shall now look to a hope,
your only relief from this fallen life you lead.

You see a person,
you would wonder of their name,
their hopes,
their fears.
So as you stare into their lifeless eyes,
your gaze is frozen,
frozen from a fear that this is another soul,
as lone as you.

*applauds*

😄....tanks Darth...

😆 nice...👆 these depressing poems are starting to crack me up though

😑.......um....really?......depressing poems crak u up?....
or mebbe cuz my poems r jus sh*t.....i dunno.....

Nothing against the skill of them, its just the vast amounts of them start to numb you to what's really being said...and I find it funny that I was that depressed so recently 😆 and im not kidding

oh i c......

well i was gun post one more...but now......😖.......i'll proly send u into a laughing frenzy.....

😬 maybe, im about this close *indicates with finger* from being a legal schitzo, so post away, maybe later i'll find myself in a more...depressed mood.

🙁.........i dont want u to feel upset.....but i guess what u sed jus made me feel..stupid....lyk my poems were sh*thouse......
but......
heres de poem......

Now the rain of darkness has fallen upon you,
& your everwatchful eyes shall gaze enviously upon the joyous souls that have passed you by.
You are immortal, as dark knows no death, no peace, but only a lust for everlasting torture.
You are the shadow, walking down an endless path.

Bah...there not shit...i just change my mood frequently, so i cant tell ya how ill react to it...good poem by the way! ✅

😮...tanks.....

Welcome! 😄

😄..omg.......i'm de biggest wanka....i jus realized dat on ur sig, it had spearhead, on de dudes sword....😖...woh, talk bout being slooooooooooooow

ROFL!!!!!!!!

sorry. 😮

😑.....for what?