uhhh...well, I dunno if you saw this one.....but, it's my most recent...
Strong & Powerless:
No steps to follow the greed,
No silence to awaken the living.
Silken words of the treacherous,
Pity for their heartbreak,
And music for their dreams.
Imagine the world of yesterday,
What tears melted the hopes of the weak.
Perfect enemy,
Kill my self-esteem,
Kill the dreamers,
Just to lose yourself.
Reflection of the broken heart,
Precious circle of truth,
Run from the face of tomorrow,
And know the rhythm of your lies.
A dollar for your soul,
One chance for isolation,
Comfort the doubt of envy,
Imagine the dying survivors,
I wonder if you would try.
Need for hunger,
Laughing eyes of hollow,
Playing dead,
For the ability to love.
Burning touch of peace,
Gaze of the quiet angel,
My freedom for your smile,
Endless sleep,
Rescue the cautious one.
Roaming the night,
To live the shattered whisper of today,
Send poison to the frozen,
Save diamonds from the long dead hope.
A veil to break darkness,
Staining hatred with undying scars.
Gentle savior to the innocent,
Drifting knives of venom for the cold,
The clear,
The cruel.
The voice of reason,
Safe from pain,
Ashes of a worthless possession,
Create a new day for all to see.
-Imagine your freedom.
Originally posted by RagingSilent
uhhh...well, I dunno if you saw this one.....but, it's my most recent...Strong & Powerless:
No steps to follow the greed,
No silence to awaken the living.
Silken words of the treacherous,
Pity for their heartbreak,
And music for their dreams.
Imagine the world of yesterday,
What tears melted the hopes of the weak.
Perfect enemy,
Kill my self-esteem,
Kill the dreamers,
Just to lose yourself.
Reflection of the broken heart,
Precious circle of truth,
Run from the face of tomorrow,
And know the rhythm of your lies.
A dollar for your soul,
One chance for isolation,
Comfort the doubt of envy,
Imagine the dying survivors,
I wonder if you would try.
Need for hunger,
Laughing eyes of hollow,
Playing dead,
For the ability to love.
Burning touch of peace,
Gaze of the quiet angel,
My freedom for your smile,
Endless sleep,
Rescue the cautious one.
Roaming the night,
To live the shattered whisper of today,
Send poison to the frozen,
Save diamonds from the long dead hope.
A veil to break darkness,
Staining hatred with undying scars.
Gentle savior to the innocent,
Drifting knives of venom for the cold,
The clear,
The cruel.
The voice of reason,
Safe from pain,
Ashes of a worthless possession,
Create a new day for all to see.-Imagine your freedom.
as always, well done, jenni! 😎 👆 so what was your source of inspiration for this piece and what or who was it about? sorry if that seems like a dumb question right now. i'm tired and it's late. it's always late in the evening when i talk to you. so i get tired fast then...not always though. also, forgive for all of the times that i didn't read your stuff whenever you did mine. well, i finally got around to it!
Originally posted by BOPRecruit 16
as always, well done, jenni! 😎 👆 so what was your source of inspiration for this piece and what or who was it about? sorry if that seems like a dumb question right now. i'm tired and it's late. it's always late in the evening when i talk to you. so i get tired fast then...not always though. also, forgive for all of the times that i didn't read your stuff whenever you did mine. well, i finally got around to it!
🙂...thanks alot boppy...😊...
my inspiration came from a song....strange song...heh...by a perfect circle...some of their lyrics are out of the ordinary...hence the oddness of my poem😄...
my poem is about the people of this world.....everything you see in it represents what the world is made of these days, and also, what kind of people exist....... the greedy, the corrupted, the cruel, the love stricken, the innocent, the hopeful....etc.....no, no..lol...that wasn't a dumb question🙂...it was a good one.....and thas why i answered it😄...
that's alright...🙂..
hehe...yes you did..👆
Originally posted by RagingSilent
🙂...thanks alot boppy...😊...
my inspiration came from a song....strange song...heh...by a perfect circle...some of their lyrics are out of the ordinary...hence the oddness of my poem😄...
my poem is about the people of this world.....everything you see in it represents what the world is made of these days, and also, what kind of people exist....... the greedy, the corrupted, the cruel, the love stricken, the innocent, the hopeful....etc.....no, no..lol...that wasn't a dumb question🙂...it was a good one.....and thas why i answered it😄...
that's alright...🙂..
hehe...yes you did..👆
i might try to do one like that too. types of people and the not so great stuff that america is going through these days. perhapes. not sure. maybe make it punkish like song or based off of some green day song, perhapes? 😑 not sure....been out of the writing game for so long...gotta wait until inspiration strikes me. 😄
Originally posted by BOPRecruit 16
i might try to do one like that too. types of people and the not so great stuff that america is going through these days. perhapes. not sure. maybe make it punkish like song or based off of some green day song, perhapes? 😑 not sure....been out of the writing game for so long...gotta wait until inspiration strikes me. 😄
👆 cool...
✅ that sounds good.....you should go with what you want though🙂
hehe.....it'll strike🙂...
Originally posted by RagingSilent
👆 cool...✅ that sounds good.....you should go with what you want though🙂
hehe.....it'll strike🙂...
i have had inspiration this week, but i'm keep putting it off until sometime this weekend while i'm away or next week. this week i can't because i've got finals to do. bites. 😠