short poems.....

lol...yeah
my solution is to sleep in class....that usually happens during english cuz it's damn boring😖...

used to love lit before we read all this boring crap. sophomore and junior year we read better books. this year is just pure crap which sucks majorly. ugh. now economics class is what i fall asleep in. sit there too long and just watching a vid makes me sleepy. esp. the boring educational kind. 😛 😆

lol...yeah, I know what you mean....😖leep:

ok, so here's a song I wrote...it was inspired by a Mudvayne song.

Cut away:

Running from myself again,
Still no place to go,
My passion’s lost,
And the world grows so cold.

{Chorus}
Pull harder on my heart -strings,
Chase me ‘till I bleed,
(Stealing my precious breath again)
Hole in my feeble mind,
Another scar for you to feed.

Hanging by a thread,
Tear me down again,
Watch me bleed again,
Take a deeper look,
You should see yourself on the inside,
Weak and helpless over you.

Take my unworthy hand,
Damage me to death,
Follow me to the very end martyr.

{Chorus}
Pull harder on my heart -strings,
Chase me ‘till I bleed,
(Hard for me to breathe)
Hole in my feeble mind,
Another scar for you to feed.

Hanging by a thread,
Tear me down again,
Watch me bleed again,
Take a deeper look,
You should see yourself on the inside,
Weak and helpless over you.

Slowly rotting away,
Can’t fight the person staring back at me,
Secure these chains,
To hold me safe.

{Chorus x 2}
Pull harder on my heart -strings,
Chase me ‘till I bleed,
(Stealing my precious breath again)
Hole in my feeble mind,
Another scar for you to feed.

Pull harder on my heart -strings,
Chase me ‘till I bleed,
(Hard for me to breathe)
Hole in my feeble mind,
Another scar for you to feed.

Shaping one more enemy,
Forming another sickening thought,
Don’t want to be tired anymore,
Don’t want to be powerless.

Can’t fight you anymore,
Can’t play your selfish game,
I’m so cold now,
I’m losing sight.

I’m turning away
(Watch me bleed again)
I’ve lost sight.

woh...I haven't posted in here in ages.

Blood-stained skin and a head full of bad memories,
Trying to erase the past,
Trying to avoid the aching in your heart.

Tears of ash,
Grey emptiness upon your wounds of yesterday.

Time is melting away again,
The world is becoming still again,
And now there is nothing new to see.

No understanding in your eyes,
No forgiveness,
No comfort.

50,000 tears and still no dying memories.

Originally posted by RagingSilent
woh...I haven't posted in here in ages.

Blood-stained skin and a head full of bad memories,
Trying to erase the past,
Trying to avoid the aching in your heart.

Tears of ash,
Grey emptiness upon your wounds of yesterday.

Time is melting away again,
The world is becoming still again,
And now there is nothing new to see.

No understanding in your eyes,
No forgiveness,
No comfort.

50,000 tears and still no dying memories.

i like it! good tone and pace. sentence variety and all. description.

sounds familair in some ways. almost like some song i heard or something...in a way...not sure where...*shrugs*

well, keep up the good work! sorry it took me so long to come and review this!

thanks Boppy!^-^

O.o..it does?

hehe..😄will do....

nps Boppy^^..thas ok👆

no prob! always glad to read your stuff when i have time to be on kmc.

reminds me of something in a good way! i assure you. just don't know where.

😄🐰

well thas a relief^^;

I like it, Vera. ✅

'lo, Bop.

jenni: sorry to worry you! i'll word my reviews more carefully next time!
rex: hey! how are you? hoping you and jenni are having a wonderful winter break! *hugs* ^.^

Rex>> thanks!^-^😄

Bop>>hehe, nah, thas s'ok Boppy^^...and thanku^^ although..it's..summer over here😛😄hehe

hate how college and holidays suck out my desire to write even though i want to but don't! *ack*

i think i have alot to say but am i brave enough to say it?

Bop>>>hehe, I know what ye mean o.o;

Bogen>>>go ahead and say it^^

writer's block sucks so much! i do have ideas. not a problem. just the actual writing or typing it that's hard! *ack*

being bent like wire, ill stay like this
if you keep bending ill surely twist

i feel bad inside, i don't know why
all i know is it's right to die
for love, for hate, for all the things including fate

why is it me
i love to contemplate
all the things im sure to relate

mind you thats my first non school poem hope u all like

Bop>>> same-.- we gotta get back into the schwing of things boppy!^^

bogen>> hey, I really liked that^^ good work👆

thnx more on the way, sometime in the near future, look out for me! 😄

np^^

cool^^👆....hehe, will do😄