Ohhh wow girl you have got some skill in writing, that was brilliant! absoulutly great
im gonna do something..just the beginning...and you guys tell me what you think
The beginning starts off with the wonderful music that you hear from the first movie, with the amazing title, all pirate like, and then you see a wide shot of the black pearl smashing into the waves of the beautiful caribbean, and then it pans in on jack whos at the wheel thingy staring off into the horizon, annamarie interupps "aye captain, where we heading off to now?" jack replies "to the horizon to find the next best ship" annamarie replies "but black pearl is the best ship captain" jack says "aye..but there is the next best ship" annamarie grins....it pans off to will and elizabeth who are getting married on the beach with the waves hitting against their feet with the royal navy aside watching, elizabeth is wearing a beautiful gown walking along the beach towards will, will wearing his feather hat and a very sexy outfit, as hes grinning ear to ear (ah the grin!) seeing her walking, whispering to himself "she is so beautiful" she grins at him, as the sun shines on her beautiful gown and she meets up with him...then you got the whole thing, and finally they say you may kiss the bride, will grins and takes elizabeth and kisses her so romantically, as everyone seems to go "aww" and guns are fired off and fireworks to celebrate, then it fades to jack who is once again looking at his compass that doesnt work, trying to decide which way to go, a young pirate girl walks to him, and gives him one that works...
ehhh i dont know, maybe that sounds bad, but i was certainly getting into it, but it might sound a little lame, also cuz im in a hurry, cuz i have to get off soon, but ill make it better