New and Improved Sequel. Actuall plot!

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New and Improved Sequel. Actuall plot!

Okay, we decided to start a new sequel with a plot. only members of the potc club can post and you must do more then a few sentences. and try to make it as professional as possable (no lol or messageboardish) because this will be posted on our site. Who wants to start?

so what exactly is the plot

just a suggestion, pm me for more plot idea's dont post them on the thread, but how about the title is Pirates of the Caribbean and (because we voted that this wasnt the real story) and the legend of devil's throat. that way, we can even have a fake movie poster for it! any other idea's pm me about so we don't junk up this thing randomly with names and plots.

Come on, don't be shy.
Okay, if someone doesn't start this think pretty soon, I'll start it!

~~~~~~~~~~~Pirates of the Caribbean~~~~~~~~~~
~~~~~~~~~~the legend of Devil's throat~~~~~~~~~

(orlando_lover45 and I made this up) Flashback:
"Mother!" Will shouted.
"Will, go to the nearest lifeboat! Hurry!"
Will's mother pushed him tward the last remaining life boat.
"But-" he looked behind him, but he couldn't see his mother.
Suddenly, a cannon ball hit the deck right in back of him. Before he had any time to move out of the way, the whole side of the ship colapsed into the dark, icey water. The last thing he remembered was his mother shouting to him, "Will!"
He hit his head, and everything went dark.
(Go to the begining of the first movie, when Elizabeth meets Will)
"I'm Elizabeth Swann."
"Will, Turner."
"It's okay Will, I'm watching over you."
Will blanks out.

Will woke up in his bed. he sat up and looked around. Elizabeth was asleep next to him. Everything was the same. Everything was okay.
"Will, why are you awake?" Elizabeth had woken up.
"I had the dream again, the one about me on the ship with my mother."
Will said.
"Go back to sleep, Will." Elizabeth turned over and went back to sleep.
Will couldn't go back to sleep though. He was to shaken up to sleep. Dreams about his mother always did that to him. He missed her alot.

Finally Will just couldn't take it anymore. He decided to get up and go downstairs, trying to make little noise because Elizabeth was sleeping. When he got downstairs he heard something coming from the kitchen. He decided to see what it was.

As Will walked into the kitchen, he heard someone tapping on the window. He walked over and tried to see who it was, but it was too dark.
Will unhooked the latch and swung open the window.
"Oof!"
Will peered out of the open window, and, to his surprise, saw Captain Jack Sparrow, lying on the ground.
"Now that was uncalled for, mate"

"Jack! What are you doing here?"
"I'm obviously not here to sit on me rear, mate,can i come in?"
"Yeh, sure, go around to the front door."

"Jack?" Will said again, "Why are you here?"
"because, boy, " Jack answered, " there is someone lookin' for me, mate. if they come knocking, don't tell em' anything. I did some things that may have made them a little...angry."
"What did you do this time?" Will asked.
"Jack? Is that you?" Elizabeth came down the stairs.
"Ello, luv. I was in the neighborhood and-"
"Oh, Jack. Why are you really here."
"Some people are after him." Will turned around.
"Well, I can't say i'm surprized." Elizabeth rolled her eyes.

"I need somewhere to hide out for a little while."
"Don't you have a ship and crew to protect you?" Elizabeth asked.
"Well..." Jack answered.

"I can't find the Pearl." Jack mumbled.
"What?" Will and Elizabeth both said.
"Yeah, Me and me crew were off deck, getting supplys and what not, and then the pearl was gone." He finished.
"wasn't someone watching it?" Will asked.
"Yes, some new guy. What was his name..." Jack pondered for a moment.

" Ohh I know Bob but we call him the blob, he seemed a like a nice guy tll he stole me rum ... but that was once , therefore he couldn't get off the ship... and that's all me bloody 'ead remembers"

"So, you lost your ship, someone's out to get you, and you are staying where again?" Elizabeth asked.
"Well, it's not that i dont have a place, but i..." Jack trailed off.
Will exchanged looks with Elizabeth.
"Fine, fine, fine. You can stay here, Jack. Just, stay back in my workshop so if the person comes looking for you, you won't be seen." Will said.
"Ah, yes. Thank you very much, mate." Jack said. He got up and went into Will's blacksmith shop.
"Will, lets go back to bed." Elizabeth was already halfway up the stairs,
" I'm tired and Jack can settle in by himself."
"I'll be right up." Will said and he locked the front door and closed the window.

"Well, where's your pirate crew?" Elizabeth asked with only a little concern.

Orlilover43, you posted to late.

Sorry, it's supposed to go before yours. Oops!

Ok

You can cut out that last part I wrote. It doesn't fit.