ok first off u got mad skillz when it comes to drawing...but as far as story lines go...thats were u need help...now me, personally i absolutely love making stories and know exactly how to do it and i know how to do it well....now...if by any chance u are interested i can write one up for u...i made a 26 (double sided notebook paper) page story one time...and that was about one eigth of it that i wanted to complete...i lost it but i will try to find it...hopefully i can write it all down and i will give u a copy of it....that is if u are interested in it....i could perhaps be the writer and u could be the drawer...think about it man.
yeah the dialog is confuseing, but this is a story takes place after five full length series that me and a buddy wrote a while ago, unfortunatley it would be far to difficult for someone to read all of them. Im just trying to show how this guy was insane way before death got inside his head and there are other characters who actually make sense and i will be introducing them soon and also the action will pick up.
and by all means send your story.
ill post a summary of this guy soon
Name: Ultimate Maverick
Age: n/a
Sex: Male
Hair Color: black
Hair length:medium spiked strait back
Eye color: currently none
Powers: you will see soon enuf
Father: created during a mass cloning operation
Mother: n/a
Brother/s: every other Maverick
Age of Brother/s: n/a
Sister/s: n/a
Education: heavy combat training, no real education(they were made to be easily manipulated)
Note: He is of the three new Grim reapers
Nationality:clone, looks white
Maverick was the last clone created during a war some time ago. right as he met the leader of the Mavericks to get his mission, James killed there leader. After the war was over Maverick decided to kill all of his "brothers" for letting down there Leader. after words he tracked down James to try and get revenge but James beat the absolute **** out of him becuase Death itself would not let Maverick fight back. basically dead Mavericks broken form layed in the middle of Seatle were it was found by a orginization calling itself Providence a right wing evangelistic company trying to restart the Apocolypse.
((this is now))
They reconstruced his head with a unbreakable mask that can only be removed from this inside. Any other method would be fatal, but instead of thanks Maverick broke out but had become a schizo becuase Death tries to use him as a tool to inflict wrath upon the wicked. Maverick has since then put aside his hate for James and now needs his help seeing how Providence has resurected another Maverick with power rivaling Judgement itself.
((dont expect them to be buddy, buddy))
hey i am about to get started on it again...after i complete the first chapter i will send it to u...assuming it isn't too long to send...lol....but yea i will give u a low down off it...nothing spoiler or anything like that just the simplest most basic thing i could possible give.....ok there is 3 main charecters....2 arch vilians...multiple battle scenarios...which i will describe very very clearly....my mthod of writing has yet to be seen in books....so my literature teachers tell me so...i have yet to read a book with as much dialoge in my 26 pages as i have ever read in a 200 page story...lol...but yea u will find that charecters travel from every kind of terrain to every kind of place on earth that could be fought in....or maybe outisde of this world in ways we have yet to discover...but i have to decide if i will add upon this matter...but yea this is a low down of how many charecters there is how many vilins there are, where battles will be fought, what kind of ground will be covered...this IMO is the shit when it comes to stories...not saying this just because i am the author but because multiple soureces tell me this....and with ur drawing i think we might just be able to get this thing published!!!
good news man...i think i got about 3 1/2 pages done so far out of what i would say about 24...so things are looking good...if u want i can send u a copy of it as is...or u can give me another day and i might be able to finish the first chapter...only thing is i don';t like to call my chapters "chpaters"....i call them shifts...because at the end of one segment or sumthing i like to switch it up a bit...ya'know give it a radical change or sumthin....but nothin way out of praportion...but hey lemme know if u want it as is or if u want another day or sumthin
ok i finished yet another page...i have about half a page left before the first chapter is copleted...i think u might like it...it has a little bit of everything...its great..although i use alot of things that i have seen or done to relate to the story...so u might be able to be able to relate to some of the stuff in there.