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[First Movie...] Destiny Kids! First Encounters:

By: AARON ARBOLIDA... Editor: Idealist:

Chapter–0 First Encounters... [Episode—0:]
—The night sky was of a mysterious dark blue. Very few stars could be
seen in the universe. The sounds of an un—pure silence were of conception, which overtook and emanated from all around Nathan... —Ghost like voices echoed from far away and whispered in such melodies of happiness and possession. The sounds of various sports games played delightfully in the far off distances. It sounded as if there were children laughing and playing.
—The soccer field laid in the darkness of the night although, Nathan stood out there far and alone in the cometary like setting...
—Laid out before him was a huge dark green grassy soccer field which while being possessed by the earth turning and the temperatures rising and lowering a cold and daring windy breeze began to blow towards Nathan as tiny mists of raindrops began to fall slowly from the really dark cloudy skies. —Nathan had realized that he was running... Very fast actually.
—He was running from something...
His heart was beating very furiously. Out of nowhere a chain link fence appeared through the tully fog and the mist.
—With amazing agility, Nathan hurtled his body and in one swoop he bounced right over the fence and landed on the other side with no preamble.
—Almost immediately another chain link fence appeared which he likewise overcame easily. This time when he landed onto the other–side he found himself on a strange abandoned soccer field...
—Behind Nathan, he noticed for the very first time a heavy animal like breathing...
—Nathan turned to see what it was. He was unable to discern what it was yet, his instincts told him to keep on running! Which he did with renewed vigor.
—Faster and faster Nathan ran.
<“—CLINK!!”> <“—CLINK!”> All of the sudden Nathan stopped...

He slowed to a stop as he turned to look behind to where the recent noises came from. He had sawn something flash onto the ground. It appeared to be some type of long thick metal object... He drew closer to it and at once he noticed it was a silver baseball bat. ‘Huh?’ Wonder what a baseball bat would be doing out here on a soccer field?’ Thought Nathan to himself. Nathan reached down and picked it up... —The bat seemed really strong but extremely light.
‘—Must be aluminum...’ Thought Nathan to himself.

—While Nathan considered the bat he noticed all the noises of the night seemed to change. The voices and playing sounds of the children seemed to suddenly vanish... In the not to far distance Nathan could now see that the playground was abandoned. An odd new sound emanated from all around him. Nothing to make him deaf. Just enough to annoy him.
—He felt as if he were in some kind of play...
—All alone by himself. Only with the indifferent and wondering night to keep him company.
—Then out of the darkness swirled from heavenward a gray storm of spooky looking clouds began to form! A figure suddenly appeared... The figure of a person formed yet, it was so slight it was beyond abnormal.
—It just stood there in a purplish haze. Lightning flashed from all around the clouds. Behind the figure as the purple haze continued to roll forth. —Nathan was standing right in front of the figure. Still Nathan was unable to clearly discern who the figure was.

The longer Nathan strained his eyes to peer beneath the haze the clearer the figure eventually became. He was able to tell that the figure was a female, well somewhat. She was as tall as Nathan and showed no visible abnormalities...
—Nathan still couldn’t see exactly what she looked like... Her figure radiated numerous colors. All were somewhat blinding.
—Fifteen year old Nathan, could see that she wore a half an inch thick, purple dress with a winter yellow scarf around her neck. Her figure seemed somehow weird. Nathan heard and saw the swings of a playground begin to swing back and forth. The swings were being pushed by the wind. A little girl stood beside a green bushy tree. Nathan could feel the wind pushing him near and away from her... Her long blond hair looking almost golden, blew slowly in the winds as the skies grew more intense. (‘A storm was coming...’)
Nathan saw and heard more purple lightning flash in the darkness behind her again. A light that could not be forgotten, a downpour came swiftly. As soon as the rain started in then seemed like there was a cloud burst. The rain slowed and seemed to taper off some. Nathan had noticed that even the screeching noise had been silenced. (<“Is there hope?’>😉 The girl asked Nathan.
[—Then whispering this question to him again.] (<Is there hope?>😉
‘What?’ Asked Nathan. She was waiting silently in the rain for him to respond. It also seemed like the wind was waiting for another answer from him. Her hair still blowing in intense wind to the right of her then the left behind her back.
Then it seemed that she stood out tall over Nathan on a higher hill. The hill began to rise to Nathan somehow. Nathan still glanced at her shadowy figure. Her face was covered in darkness.
There was no way Nathan could see her. Nathan became frustrated.
<“I–I …Don’t know!’> Nathan replied as he tried to reply back to her. But Nathan suddenly fell quiet. He leaned backwards onto the ground with his arms out forward. He had fallen backwards. He felt himself leaving her. <“—Wait!”> <“—Wait!!”>
<‘—Who are you?!”> <‘What is happening?!”> Nathan yelled out.

(<“It is your destiny...,” ‘—Nathan!”>😉

—Her voice had whispered silently to him. It was and only him as if she was sitting right next him one side and then appeared on the other side of him. But she looked as if she was far away.
She was whispering it right into Nathan’s ears quietly from a far off distance. She sounded as if she was relying on him for something important, previously agreed upon. It seemed no matter how far away Nathan went from her figure as he flew backwards and to the left through the trees and to the right, she was always right there besides him somehow...
[<Where ever I’d go, wherever I went.>]
Nathan thought.
[<She’d always be there watching me, waiting for me silently.>] Nathan thought over and over again as he was traveling far backwards flying away from her in a rewinding motion again.
—Everything flashed white as Nathan was traveling backwards farther and farther away, then up into the sky he saw the ground far below him and he was still being pulled backwards. What is this supposed to mean? Nathan thought...
—[<Why am I being pulled away from her?!>] What is this force that keeps us apart? [<‘What is the purpose of this all...?’>]
What is the reason of this? (...Everything became black!)

(“—… …Nathan, ...Nathan...”) (“—…Nathan…”) Something was calling Nathan’s name. In his dreams… (“—… …Nathan… …Nathan.”) The voice seemed sneaky and creature—like.
<“Huh?’> <‘—Who’s there?”>

(“—Ni–tri–on...!”) It replied.
The voice seemed deep and monstrous this time. Nathan could still hear the lightning striking in his head. <“What?’> <Who are you?> <What do you want?>
—Nathan asked it he turned in his bed. Whatever it was, it was waiting patiently for a reply back subconsciously.
(<‘—…Your destiny..., The lake!’>😉 It had replied as if giving some kind of commanding advice.
<“—Wait!!’> <“—I still don’t know who you are!”> Nathan demanded in his dream. (<“I’ve been waiting...’>😉 (<For a very long time...>😉

(<‘…Search harder.’>😉 (<You’ll find me...>😉 (<Until then!>😉
(<‘—Your journey will begin...’>😉

(<‘…Ni-tri-on!”>😉 Lightning bolts of thunder and statically sounds simultaneously struck and flashed rapidly in Nathan’s mind. Nathan could sense himself rising out of a murky surreal world. Somehow he felt as if he were perceiving another type of reality or perhaps a new dimension. The clearer the his understanding of where he was the more fictional the one world around him seemed. It was almost like he could imagine drowning would be, fighting for air trying to break the surface. Yet, he wasn’t fighting for air. He was struggling for clarity. Seconds before breaching the surface he woke, from his odd dream.

—Nathan raised himself forward... His mind was overtaxed, wondering if he just had a dream or was he really somewhere else just then. A deep sense of confusion perplexed mind. Nathan had looked out once again through his bedroom window. The night seemed extremely dark. The stars of the night were all clearly visible in their familiar constellations. Nathan looked outside, beyond his neighbors... beyond the highest roof tops... Far beyond the highest mountain ranges... far into the horizon... he peered...

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interesting, very mysterious, and foreshadowing i suppose, still good, keep going on it

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