BOPRecruit 16
Hunter By Nature
Originally posted by Laviera_j
Wow, Soda, you have gotta get back to work on this one! i love it so far! It is awesome! I particularly liked Draven - and his name fits the face I made him to a T! Love the shade of hair he has too. I am glad the hair colour for Aldin was cleared up too. Sandy blond/mousy is better than platimun! (like BP in INterview with a Vampire)If you want to know my opinion about anything else, you know you can PM me any time!
Love lots
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Lava the Tutamlik
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I really appreciate it that you love my story so much and the characters that I created for it. Don't worry, I will get back to work on this story as soon as I can manage! It's just that it has taken me forever to formulate enough ideas into an outline for chapter three. During the time that I'm not working on posting new content, I keep myself busy by typing up alot of notes and brainstorming. I had to put alot of thought into chapter three in advance. I even have ideas and events that won't come until much later! Also, I have some rough outlines for (about) chapters four and five.
What you must know about what went down with making rough outlines for the next three chapters, was that I needed to find ideas/events that I had noted down earlier and try to see what I could use for a chapter and what to leave for the next. Plus, plan out which events from the LOTR movies should appear as Harry's visions/dreams throughout those chapters and the rest of the story. Luckily, around that time when I was recalling which events from the movies should be visions, the extended version of the second movie was on HBO. I took plenty of notes! (Yea!) Anyways, I found the extended version quite fascinating for I had never seen the extended version before. So, this means that I will be including some of the deleted/extended footage in Harry's visions. (Just thought you should know for you might not recognize some of the visions that may come up!) I am so grateful that I had decided to watch it that day for I had needed to review the movie so badly!
With all of the LOTR 2 events in mind and notes, I had to figure out which ones I was going to use off the list and space them out throughout the next two chapters, more or less. I am trying to wrap up the LOTR 2 visions, so that I can move onto ROTK. It's very vital that Harry reaches those events within' his visions/dreams! (I am not going to spoil you by saying exactly why those events are important.) For Chapter 3, Harry is going to have three visions. The first one that I'll mention is that he'll be remembering a previous dream. That way I don't have to bother going through the event and save length so that the chapter won't get too long and lengthy. The next vision will be very brief and during a boring class. (Hint, hint: History of Magic) Last, will be vision towards the end of the day when Harry gets to bed. The first and last vision will be extended footage, so that should be fun for those who haven't seen that yet.
Like I said, the third chapter takes place about a week into the school year. Originally, my plans for chapter three were for chapter four. I had an outline for the old version of three, but the content seemed too boring and couldn't find anything good to spice it up. Plus, I got lazy and wanted to skip ahead to chapter four where more of the action would be. So, I scratched out plans for three, so that four shifted over and became christened, three. Don't worry, you really don't miss much in that chapter! Basically, it had Medical Care, Defense Against the Dark Arts, and Ancient Runes as the main classes that are focused on while I skipped and briefed the others. It's the first day of school.
By the way, Medical Care is the name that I came up with for that class where students can learn to become midi-wizards, doctors. Since there were no academic descriptions for this class available at the Harry Potter Lexicon, I had to create my own name for that class and what the students would learn. If you were wondering why I have Harry taking Medical Care and Ancient Runes, is for the fact that it has something to do with the Aragorn side of him and the curiosity to explore those new fields. (After all, the students are supposed to take more advanced classes and things that have to do with their majors.) As for the rest of his schedule and the bell schedule that I designed myself, I will explain that sometime after or during posts for chapter three.
Draven and Aldin appear in the old version of Chapter Three, but they won't come up at all in the new version that I have come up with recently. I think it would work better that way, at the rate that I'm writing/planning three. But, don't worry your pretty little head for they are going to have larger roles in the next chapter, four. Well, at least for Draven. The size and bulk of their roles from chapter to chapter will vary. They will remain mysterious for quite a while. Everyone gets to learn and know one side to both of these newcomers, but there is another side that almost no one will see. That mystery will slowly unravel along the way and won't be completely revealed until towards the end of the story. (Say the last couple of chapters...more or less.) Draven and Aldin have an unknown duty/mission there other than being a professor and student (undercover, basically). (I'll stop rambling about their mystery before I blab it all away to you guys!)
Now back to what you mentioned in your review about Draven. What is it exactly that you like about him and describe to me what his face looks like in your mind's eye? Glad you liked the name. Draven Sabatt fits him perfectly and so smooth and kick ass! All the names that I come up with for my original characters must be kick ass and fit their persona. Same goes for everything else that I name, person or not. I have to really like the name or phrase in order to use it, most of the time. If I don't like the name that could fit the character, I keep working at it until it does. For I don't want their names or anything to sound corny! (As best I try to do that...)
I thought so too, that Draven and Aldin's hair compliments them perfectly. I made sure that their hair, eyes, and facial features matched their persona. I based them off of looks on guys that I like, espeically young male celebs. Draven's hair is totally original and I always thought that would look cool. (Originally, his hair was going to be a dark brown that almost looked black.) As for Aldin, it was mostly spined off from Brad Pitt and Jonathan Jackson. I pretty much have a clear idea on who I would like to see (imagine) in the role of Aldin, but I'm still debating about Draven. Originally, I was going to use the actor who I had playing him when I used this character in my (old) rpg game, Hellsing's Exiles, but I'm not so sure now. (The reason that I'm not mentioning the actor for Draven's name is that I don't want to spoil your image of him.)
As for news on progress on chapter three, I'm typing up the outline for it and nearly half way through. Also, I'm rearranging certain events within' it in order for everything to flow smoothly. Having everything sound and run smoothly is key to me, (which can be a pain at times and cause update blockage...). Working on this outline is alot of fun and I can't wait to type it all up and then post it for all to see! There is going to alot of things happening and many discoveries to be made by some of the characters and (most of all) the readers. ^.^
Also, the title for chapter three, Not Alone, fits it so well! I didn't realize it bore the same phrase that appeared on Halle Berry's character's forearm in 2003's Gothika (movie). I didn't notice the coiencidence until I went to Blockbuster to rent movies with my friends and noticed the dvd for the movie on the shelves. Anyways, I thought that was cool.
Of course, I'll let you know if anything else comes up that I need your opinion on, Lava! (For now, I need to hear from you about this review here!) I'll try my best to get chapter three up as soon as possible. Also, I hope that you get the time to work on your poems and stories very soon!
Later, my friend and best wishes,
Sodapop Allerdyce the Sane Psycho