Good idea, but I really don't want to have to read through ten pages of game to get the idea of what's going on. That, and the storyline would probably get severely messed up in somebody else's hands, even somebody who has experience running a role play. I have it written out, but I made a lot of mental changes for myself.
Falcon, Jerec takes you by the arm and cuffs you soundly across the side of your head. "Come to your senses, fool, I know this man!"