Friday the 13th part XI: Jason returns from hell (New and better)

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Devan chucked her stuff in the backpack in a hurry.

SEE YOU PEOPLE ARE DOING THINGS LIKE "OH THE WIND BLEW IN MY HAIR" AND " EWWW DONT GET MY TAN WET" ITS A HORROR MOVIE NOT A ROMANTIC KIDS COMEDY, AND JUST BECAUSE I POST SOMETHING THATS WHAT THE TITLE IMPLYS OR SOMETHING YOU CANT DO BETTER, YOU THROW ME OUT

YOU ALL MAKE ME CRY

"Ready? lets go!" Jenni and Devan reached the edge of the woods. "Theres a good place deep in here where we can stay" said Jenni, but something felt un-easy....she felt if though they were being watched. From the other side of the field stood the machete-weilding maniac ready to kill them, they would be his first victims. Jenni and Devan didn't realise that ey carried on deep into the woods

The ONes> keep fighting. fight the power 😄

~after reading this before...its kinda weak. i kinda agree with The Ones...it feel like a romantic movie with blood sheds~

see hockey horror understands, and why did you edit my posts, i didnt say throw me out, or you all make me cry. [edit]

'Well it won't ruin our time," Devan reassured him.

HELLO!!!1 HOW CAN YOU STAND THERE IDILY CHATTING WHEN YOU HAVE MADE A ROMANTIC STORY AND CUTTING OUT THE BITS THAT LETS IT BE WHAT ITS SUPPOSED TO BE, A HORROR STORY

What did I ever do to u?

Originally posted by The Ones
see hockey horror understands, and why did you edit my posts, i didnt say throw me out, or you all make me cry. [edit]
I seem to edit your post when ever you call someone names.

THEY DESERVE IT!!!!

FOR GOODNESS SAKES CRY ME A RIVER!!
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QUIT YOUR WHIGNING AND BE A MAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Devan packed up and started to load up the tent.

*Why are we packing up?*

To farther into the woods.

yes now its getting somewhere, you took my advice people

Jenni and Devan went deeper and deeper into the woods. They were so deep in that Jenni couldn't see anymore. "Hold on Devan I need my torch." Jenni went into her bag and flipped out her torch. She turned it on a few feet up and head of her. She let out a terrified shreak. Her torch had landed on a huge figure wearing the same hockey mask she had seen in the lake. She dropped her torch and it fell on the ground and switch off.

now its getting interesting lamo