Originally posted by RaventheOnly
Ravenclaw Entry:
Can I just say that the form in which the Ravenclaw entry was submitted is totally bogus, unfair, and unprofessional. I request that it be submitted in a more coherent form so that the judging, which is due tomorrow, may be done fairly. It would make it easier on the judges, and on the Ravenclaws....
Originally posted by tracygarrett
Can I just say that the form in which the Ravenclaw entry was submitted is totally bogus, unfair, and unprofessional. I request that it be submitted in a more coherent form so that the judging, which is due tomorrow, may be done fairly. It would make it easier on the judges, and on the Ravenclaws....
thats why i din't want them to be posted like that. 😬 i put them on notepad documents so that we could easily convert them to MS Doc.
“Hello. Come in you three, just up the stairs” said an elderly woman sitting in a throne with long flowing hair the color of snow. The woman had fair skin, pale blue eyes, and wore a long fluid pearly white dress that glowed with a beautiful radiance. “Ah, the Three have finally come to visit! Come now to my table!” the woman exclaimed, “I was beginning to wonder what had taken you.” “You knew we were coming?” asked Elondra. “Of course, child. I know everything! Sit down for some wine, lets have a chat! I am Inwe Nolatari, I am the Oracle,” the woman said. “So, you want to know how to save your friends?” inquired the Oracle. “Actually, the reason we came to you is about the Manticores in the passageway,” interrupted Angel. “Ah, yes…Thorondor, still longing to be free, I suspect” said the Oracle looking into a pensieve. “They told us that they were being kept here, and that they long only for their freedom,” said Elondra. “You would let those creepy creatures wonder free? They are so dangerous, and attack with no warning. The world is a much better place without them running-a-muck,” said the Oracle leaning her head back. The girls didn’t know what to do or say. The Oracle rose from her throne and glided effortlessly towards the table. “Here’s the problem, if that’s what you want to call it. I have two things I could do for you, but you may only choose one. Either free the Manticores from bondage, or I could teach you what to do to save your friends from pain,” said the Oracle pouring herself a goblet of wine. “Well isn’t it obvious?” Exa said to her sisters under her breath, “Neo and Blues and Miya and Tracy and Starshine. We have to help them, who cares about the Manticores?” “Exa, we told them we would ask for their freedom,” said Elondra. “Yes, but if it is a choice between them and our friends, I’m sorry, but screw the Manticores!” exclaimed Exa. “Let’s just think about this for a minute, we’re smart girls. The book told us that three with goodness in their hearts, not seeking information would find the truth to set someone free. We know that Thorondor and his brothers are held in some sort of bondage and need to be set free. The Muse told us that Thorondor would help us. Maybe what the book said has nothing to do with the people affected and we just have to help the Manticores. I think Thorondor would help us if we helped them,” deduced Angel. “You choose those smelly things over Tracy and Starshine?” asked Exa in disbelief. “I agree with Angel,” stated Elondra. “If we set the Thorondor and his brothers free we aren’t seeking intellect beyond our own. We’re helping someone be free,” she continued. “How can the Manticores help our friends?” asked Exa, her voice getting louder. “Have you come to a decision?” interrupted the Oracle. Angel and Elondra looked at each other and nodded, Exa reluctantly followed suite. “The Manticores ask to be freed,” said Elondra. “Interesting choice,” said the Oracle. “And all of you agree with this?” she inquired. Exa knew that the Oracle was referring to her. She stepped forward and told her of her initial reservations, but that she did agree that Thorondor and his brothers should be free. “It shall be done. Thorondor and his brothers are no longer rats in their cages as Alar so eloquently put it!” said the Oracle. “Go now, you three. I can do no more for you,” she said. The girls went back the way the came, through the man-hole.
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Thank you for freeing us. Here are the ingredients to save your friends. Give them to Sangle, he’ll know what to do with them. Then bring it to Inwe Nolatari.
~~Thorondor
The girls picked up the ingredients and left the passageway, walked through the halls, and down the stairs to Professor Sangle’s office. Professor Sangle looked at the items, the girls, and back to the items in disbelief. He then grabbed the ingredients and proceeded to make a simple potion. Ten minutes later it was finished, and the four of them walked back to The Muse. “That was quick!” exclaimed The Muse. They continued on to the drapery, pulled it back and entered the tunnel again. Professor Sangle transfigured a rock into a ladder so that they may enter the chamber of the Oracle. When they reached the room, the Oracle was sitting at the table, drinking from her goblet. “I suppose this is for you,” uttered Professor Sangle. He handed the Oracle the potion and she drank it. “Thank you very muchly,” she replied with a hic-cup. “Give me a minute or two,” the Oracle said. The Oracle stood up and started walking, beckoning for the others to follow. She walked straight to the Hospital Wing, bent down and kissed everyone’s foreheads and then began to sing the Hogwarts School Song. She did have the most awful voice. The bed-ridden students awoke from their painful sleep and were cured. Professor Dumbledore entered the room, proud of the Gibbous girls, and called for a celebration. The Great Hall was decorated in Ravenclaw’s colors, blue and bronze, and a great feast appeared on the tables. Exa, Elondra, and Angel Gibbous were awarded five hundred points each for their goodness of heart, making the House Cup a sure thing for Ravenclaw.
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i'm so sorry it had to be sent this way, it's just I don't have enough time to enter these into the story before the deadline (as its today. . .) and again i'm sorry!
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