Poetical Justice

Started by D-Double33 pages

^Yum-yum, Delicious one. Very sweet.

😊 Thank you D-Double

I'm starting to right a book and this is one of the poems in a chapter.

No Longer Pure..

Against the darkest background,
Fiery red eyes lit the night.
Her body starts to tremble,
Overtaken by her fright.

A scratching noise so loud,
Scrapes at the paving stone.
Whispered words of hatred,
Reminds her she is all alone.

Clench her eyes tightly shut,
She gasps desperately for air.
And slowly as her eyes open,
She screams at the nightmare.

Blood red eyes stare at her,
Skin peeling off each second.
Boney fingers long and black,
To him they did beckon.

The clean air she once breathed,
Had turned so poisoned cold.
Eyelids fighting to stay awake,
To the devil her soul was sold.

And with his black red mouth,
He placed it to her lips.
Sucking out her pure soul,
Placing a nightmare kiss.

Black bone fingers sliding down,
Tracing her every curve.
She had become his evening meal,
To him she had been served.

Hands flitting across her thighs,
Then scraping across her ribs.
And as he ripped away the skin,
Blood drew from blood pen nibs.

In the dark of the evening night,
He left her on the floor.
Telling the cold dead body,
What she had had been so pure..

Tear Drops
Walking all alone she cries
No one sees her downcast eyes
And the rain starts pouring down
Her eyes still pointed at the ground
Many people pass her by
No one knows or sees her cry

And so she slowly walks away
And no one knows her silent pain
Her teardrops covered up by the rain

She gets home and flops in bed
She tries to sleep but thoughts fill her head
She closes her eyes as teardrops fall
“What if no one wants me at all?
All I want is to be loved,
Hugged and kissed, not pushed and shoved”

And so she quietly sleeps away
All her fears and silent pain
Her teardrops falling from her eyes like rain

One day while walking a stranger she meets
He wonders why this pretty lady weeps
He buys her a flower and makes her smile
Tells her jokes and she laughs all the while
He walks her home and gives a gentle kiss
She waves good-bye, finally in bliss

And so she smiles her night away
Thinks no more of all her pain
No more teardrops falling in the rain

Two years later, still with the same man
They stand at the altar holding hands
When they smile and say “I do”
Everyone cheers and claps for the two
As they leave the church the rain pours down
But her eyes are no longer cast at the ground

And so she gets picked up and carried away
Crying again, but not from pain
Her teardrops covered by her smile and the rain

I really liked "No longer pure". It gave me all kinds of visuals in my head. If I find some time I'd like to do a picture for it. Good luck with the book. It'll be great.

Thank you very much 🙂

Originally posted by D-Double
I really liked "No longer pure". It gave me all kinds of visuals in my head. If I find some time I'd like to do a picture for it. Good luck with the book. It'll be great.

I'm going to put it in my Poetry Personified thread so you can do that D, hope that's ok Ash?

sure! that would be great!

Originally posted by Delicious1
sure! that would be great!

Girl, check it out. You're famous hug

GOING HOME

Hey, do you remember me
I'm going home
for now I can see
No longer will I roam

I have drunk my fill
and I fell down ill
and was blinded by light
and I was not alright

So much left to do
so much to say
lost in every way
thought I always knew

Much sadness, so much pain
thought I could never gain
the peace of mind
that you would love my kind

But I see that I'm going home
In pain I will never roam
no more rough road left
to them I am deaf

With You I will know
only lasting peace
so easy - forgot to reach
so hear me teach me

I coming home so coming home
easy to see only me
that's not what it is about
with Your light I will see
my way home, my way home

by- trent howie

I AM A ROSE

I am a Rose,

the darkest shade of red,

bleeding from the memories

I have tried my hardest

to bury in the past.

For only a season

my pedals will glow vibrantly

filling me with both

love and happiness

until the next winter's breeze.

by- tiffany thornburg

puke these suck.

then you show me a better one hon.

I looked at her to see
mascara running down the sides of her face
Mixing with a lot of tears
Of frustration mostly

She glanced at me through tear glass eyes
Like a rain showered wind shield without window wipers
Stopping to take my hand
playing with my fingers
carefully fingering my rings

Then, something happened that surprised me
She smiled at me
A little smile
On her little face
What could I do but
Just smile back.

I took a tissue and wiped up the rain,
took her hand and walked with her to the playground
where she gladly played for hours on the swings

I sat and watched
perched
on slanted monkey bars
and knew better than to leave my makeup just laying around.

Ugh, Mane, do you have to be so crass? Everyone is welcome to post their efforts, please try to appreciate the guts it takes, ok? Cheers.

This is dedicated to Linkalicious. I love you baby. You are my world.
Perfection in my Eyes

All I ever wanted was to be part of your heart,
And for us to be together, to never be apart.

No one else in the world can even compare,
You're perfect and so is this love that we share.

We have so much more than I ever thought we would,
I love you more than I ever thought I could.

I promise to give you all I have to give,
I'll do anything for you as long as I live.

In your eyes I see our present, our future and past,
By the way you look at me I know we will last.

I hope that one day you'll come to realize,
How perfect you are when seen through my eyes.

awww.... 😍

You're a lucky man, Link.

Originally posted by Silver Tongue
I hope that one day you'll come to realize,
How perfect you are when seen through my eyes.

This part is perfect, I loved the entire poem but the way you end it is very important, and I'd call that polished. Well done chica 😉

Help me by JAKK

Help me when my faith isnt ready to be faithful
help me when my strength isnt ready to be strong
help me when my peace isnt ready to be peaceful
help me when my right isnt ready to be wrong.

Help me with your patience when my patience isnt here
help me with your wisdom when the ansers arent so clear
help me with your presence when im feeling lost and lonely
help me with your spirit cause you are my one and only.

Died and went to hell.....by JAKK

I wait for nothing and nothing comes and sorrows all i find.
With a foothold on my happiness, now im really in a bind.
The foul stinch of death rolls in and the vultures start to fly.
I take my last breath of fresh air and slowly start to die.
I see a bright light coming in and all who came befor me
who tried to make me into a person they wanted me to be.
They yell out mean obsinities and slander to my face.
I scream for a release from this dreadful gastly place.
I wake up from this nightmare and slowly start to blush.
Reach behind me on the toilet and quickly turn the flush.
Go away bad obsinities and deaths terrible smell.
Go away terrible nothingness that had me in this spell.
I wipe and spray and I have to admit it really does sound silly.
But i'll never again eat a cicken sandwich with side of black hole chili.

Thank you