A poem on how bad my life is.

A got an annoying brother, he anoys me everydayyyyyyyyyy
this morning my own brother, gave my last piece of dignity away.....
A got a famous uncle, I miss him everyday,
I always hate to say goodbye to him when ever he goes away........
I'm the saddest kid, the saddest kid to live 4th form............
(blues harmonica plays)

I'll add more later.

Catchy! I like it! 💃

sounds like me....

Awwww. You got the sympathy thing going!

Anyway, you should write more.

Thanks everyone! your all so nice!!

Heres some more:
My dad he acts like, like hes the boss of yooouuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
Oh its true................
I wish I had a car
I wish I was eighteennnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
I wish I had a dime for everybody who treats me mean........
I'm the saddest kid, that saddest kid to live the fourth form
the saddest kid who's high school year is number two........
oh it's true...................

Well whad'ya think?

It's good! Hae you got the tune to go with it?

Yes, my song orginated from the episode "Moaning Lisa" from the Simpsons where Lisa makes up that blues song, it has the same tune as mine, the first verse of mine is a little like Lisa's but I completely made up the second verse.

Yeah I recognised it.

I originate songs from others, like I do with Creed all the time.

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