Make a horror movie

Started by Stormy Day2 pages

The Fog
I know theres already a movie called the FOG but this is one I want to make.

The movie opens up with a little girl waking up one early morning hearing her dog bark.She goes out there to shut him up so he doesnt wake anybody.The dog never barks so shes a little weirded out.She does out there and sees him in the middle of the street.She goes and get him and brings him back to the doghouse.When she goes back in the dog starts barking again.Shes goes back out to throw her slipper at him ,but when she goes out he back in the middle of the street.She walks slowly while hes barking at nothing but the fog.She gets to the sidewalk then sees the fog woosh over her dog making him invisible.Then the girl sees blood dripping from the air.

15 years later shes living in denver colorado after spending 5 year in the psychiatric ward because people thought she was crazy for saying the fog was alive.She has made a living writing and selling
cookbooks.She sees a new report on tv of a man who was killed in her old town.She sees that he was kill on her same street.She goes back to her hom town to destory the fog once and for all.

here is my movie idea
we make a squal to The Blair witch project
we make is staring no name actors
we dont promote it good
we use crappy camra works and bad actors
we set it in the woods
we make a crazyish guy be the hero

OH wait its been done not a good idea then not one now

Dark Wind of Fire

It opens up as a woman named Traylin is watching Halloween H2O. Just when Michael Myers exits from the bathroom with a lady's purse and keys in the begining of the movie her television shuts off. The lightsx go on and off. The telephone starts ringing. Treylin was really scared. She ran outside and saw that a person or what appears to be a person exit from her friend Kraycy's house. She tries to investigate but she hears screaming from some other house. Now while that screaming stopped, she has a feeling that someone is looking at her. She turns around but nothing is there. She hears breathing on the side she regurally was. So she turned back around and she sees it. A big black shape coming towards her. She stands there petrified from fear when the shape speaks. It says,"If you run I swear I will kill you. So being the sarcastic person she is she says,"Do think I can move? I am to afraid to move." That just made the shape laugh and say,"Sarcasim, I love it." Treylin is now just about to pass out when the shape says,"My name is Vargis Itima. If you tell anyone what my name is I will not think twice before I kill you. Do you understand?" Treylin was overcome with fear that she couldn't talk so she simply nodded and started trembling with fear.

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Ok now for the ending of Dark Wind of Fire...............Treylin justs looks at Vargus, just staring in the hope of him leaving. Just then when Vargus was just about to pull out a trident to go ahead and kill Treylin, a noise was heard. A noise so frietening that it woke up the dead. The dead people crowded around Vargus and Treylin. They started to moan and fall apart. Vargus just looked at them evilly and smiled. "Here is my army of the dead. Welcome to the Dark Wind of Fire. Hell is waiting for you!" Treylin not knowing what to do said, "I Treylin call upon the spirits in the Heavans to help me defeat this evil demon!" Just then light splattered the ground around the the dead and Vargus. Spirits from the Heavans poured out and started chanting,"Leave and never return to earth you demon! Or you shall suffer the wrath of the All Mighty God!" Vargus ran like a chicken with no head, running for all eterninty. Treylin look up at the spirits and says her thanks. She asks how can she repay them. They says your soul. The End! (or is it?)

You guys have got some great ideas & imaginations, I myself am working on original characters but would love to see where some of you can go with these matchups.
Michael Myers vs. The texas chainsaw clan.

That would be cool

I am thinking of another horror movie too.

When I was in year 5 I thought of a movie that was called "Death around the corner" I am now 15 and would like people to hear me out.

It would open up to a fast paced camera movement revolving around a young boy surrounded by an adult dinner partyand the child blinks and blood splatters to a black fade out and opening credits.
the scene opens up to newspaper clipping of alley way murders in which a police officer is investigating.(Newspaper clippings help to realise the title and the murderer).
to fast forward abit the cops son Mitch is the main character being 15-20, a rebellious young man with nothing to live for until his got everything to die for. the alley murderer kills Mitch's father in an alley which leads to M to investigate with some school nerds(stereotypical) to workout who this killer is.
I haven't got an ending but I have some thieries:
-there is no connection between killer and mitch(like blood or revenge)
-the killer is the traumented, neglected boy at the beginning
-the killers name is Edward Thorne "the Thorne in our sides" (tagline for sequals LOL)

so watcha think. by the way you are all pretty imaginative.

Great thread here! Every horrorfan must imagine making a film themselves sometimes. I'm cooking on a idea about 2 gangs of tough criminals chasing each other, leading them to a haunted old execution ground. There they get across the ghosts of brutally executed criminal madmen, still craving for the smell of fear and pain which they caused in their lives. As ghosts they continue to pray on human victims, using their pain as a drug to soften the agony the ghosts are in, as they are plagued by the hurt of their deaths for all eterity. The living crooks soon discover that they have more to worried about then their rivals and will have to try to fight of the ghosts ar well as the other gang.
The spirits can't harm humans directly, but express themselves by possessing real word materials, like earth, trees and walls, disfiguring their forms into horrible tortue devices.
One of the gangs discover the motivation of the spirits as some of their men are being captured by them to be tormented as long as they can last, the ghosts stalling their deaths to the full extent for the best pain output.
Soon they will find out that there is no way to exterminate the ghosts, only the matter they possess can be destroyed, so they can only slow them down for a short while.
That's when they cook up the plan to lead the other gang in the clutches of the undead maniacs to keep them occupied long enough to make an escape. This will lead to frenzy in which no human is safe, evil humans and even more evil ghosts all having one thing on their mind, hurt as much humans as possible. One big very bloody sadistic mess!
I'm not yet sure if the plan should work and some men will get out alive, that would be sort of a 'happy end', but ending up with no survivors might be unsatisfying too.... Maybe somebody has an idea for that?
I'm especially using really twisted criminals in this as victims cause I'm pretty fed up with lame podhead teens just running around screaming as the bodycount increases. Not to mention their custom to not finishing their stalker off when they get the rare luck to pin him down temporarily.
These guys will be just as evil and murderous as the ghosts, only pitifully mortal, which in my thought will lead to more suspense, more action and far groovier deaths.
I already have a cool location, a real former execution field, now a small swampy forest, some ruins and shipwrecks ornamenting the landscape, very spooky.
The whole shebang is still in the oven and needs more work and thought, but please tell me how I'm doing so far...

The worlds insane, while you drink champagne I'm living in black rain. Ya try to ban the AK? I've got ten of em stashed with a case of handgranades!

Bodycount

Originally posted by Stormy Day
Sounds a little like IDENTITY.

The only part the sounds like identity is the motel part
I think it is good!

Once upon a time there was a boy at the age of 8 he was a Gothic and killed animals he swore"I'll kill only animals never humans LORD OF LIFE AND DEATH my name is Derrick Eliv. Two years later Derrick was kidnapped by a Black muscular man with a gun "get down on the floor!!!!" The man called the boy's parents.They talked about the price of the boys life then a knife went through the man and blood was everywhere the boy felt good as the man screamed cried and gasped for air. The boy smiled and said "Death has a new soul." At the age of 18 a gang of people came holding knives "we are the cambians you killed cords best gangster get a weapon let's test your skill big man" Derrick grabbed 4 knives duck taped the to his fingers. They fought until one cambian was left, the last one looked in shock straing at the other cambain corpes. "wana join us you have the skills" "no" Then the cambian pulled out a gun and then Derrick killed him. Overwhelmed Derrick turned Christan.Two months later Derrick's brother Joe called him to the basement "yes" he called "hay brother" Joe said when he turned on the light and knocked Derrick out. When he woke up he was chained up in a tub filled with water Derrick screamed "help help" Scream all you want Derrick No ones gonna hear you oh look a toaster lets drop i t the tub" then he did Derrick got a electrocuted and died. Joe collected the insurance and living the good life. One year later Joe stared coughing and through up a chain smoke rolled across the floor and a black lighting bolt struck and a man with a black cowboy hat, long leather jacket, a black shirt, black pants, black boots, had 5 finger blade claws and had long black he grabbed Joe cut his head off and drunk his blood he tried to walk out the location but couldn't then he had tried everything he could to get out but couldn't. Two weeks later Derrick was stabbing himself to get enjoy ment of it. Then he saw a group teenager pull up they got and started throwing a rave. then Derrick killing a bunch of teens stabbing them, slicing them,cutting them, and using power. Some got away. But Derrick Got a idea.He got in the car and drove out of the barrier and he smiled and said "one by one they all go down and shall you to when the bell sounds.

That story is called DEATH WISH

If you like the story tell me

while i have thought of many ideas, that i dont really feel like typing, anyone looking for a successful original thought remember, the key to GOOD horror, (all the classics have done this and were at that time inventive), is to take something, someplace, someone, that ppl would associate with happiness saftey and fun, and then flip it around and exploit the hell out of it. It's not about what weapon the villian carries or how he got that way--these things are all too often the main foucus of the scare-- its all about the audiences feeling vulnarable where they would have felt safe before viewing the movie!

I wouldn't share any ideas on the internet, if the treatments are good enough, like some of mine are, someone could take it.

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Sorry. good topic though.

When I was writing in school as part of my creative writing in English class about two years ago , I wrote a short story titled 'Demons From The Unknown' and I would want to know wot you guys think of it.

Basically, the story revolves around one man, Jake Smith. Jake has been looking to exact revenge on a demon that killed his parents when he was young. he sets out to learn about its origin and he tries to make out what it is, after all the years of sorrow and pain he finally tracks it down. After mass unknown killings in Russia, Jake goes to Moscow and he finds help from a professor, together they try to destroy the demon before it destroys them.

Not very long, what ya' think?