rose

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rose

dedicated to a lost freind who i never told this poem and will never have that chance

You are a rose in a valley of dandilions
the most beautiful of all
a vibrant red in the electric yellow
your soft petels glowing in the sun,
while your thorns threaten those around you
and although i could pick just another dandilion,
i pick you

By Jerrick Bernier

well i guess im not that populer?

A VICTIM OF HIS WORK
A MAN OF EDUCATION
A VICTIM OF HIS POWERS
HIS POWER BECAME HIS CURSE
HIS PASSION SPREAD POISON
HIS WORK BECAME HIS BODY
IN THE END, LOST FAMILY,
MURDER TO KEEP A SCARY SECRET
MISTAKEN VIOLATION IN HUMAN EXAMINATION

you must like caps too?

Nice demon hunter x ✅

very nice poem Demon🙂....i loved it🙂.

dont worry.....things go slow here...its takes a while for ppl to reply...but they will🙂....

yea i figured that 😄

although i haven't read your work yet, i just want to let you know and this is hella random, but thank you for posting this thread. the title of it gave me major inspiration to write my poem "a love for all seasons". 😄

im glad to of been the title auther to the inspiration that inspired you inspireingly

that was good!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I agree, that was sweet. Could you guys please read my story called 'Spider-Boy'?