Poetry from LavaJ

Started by Laviera_j4 pages
Originally posted by BOPRecruit 16
it's free and easy to load stuff to! 😄 what does that a word in the poem mean? 😑 good luck with fp 👆

which a word did you mean Soda?

Anecdote to a Prelude

People were talking in the bathroom one day
About the facts of life
When living in a village of thousands
everybodies fraviloties is everybodies strife

The facts they spoke of were many,
But one remained an allegory
like losing a divorce trial
and giving give allimony

The anecdotes and the rumours
gave room to fuss and toil
and gave her emotional tumours
and smothered her broken soul

The whispers of the lead up to -
the prelude - the prologue
the shoutings if the real and the new
the fashion of the showdog

the communtiy shared every fable,
every feel and every joy
they shared every single christmas
and gave and took every toy

Communal bathing and shower
communal laudry day
A suffolcating experiencing tower
but they were comforted in every way

Every pimple was known to them
every gross little habbit
all of their fickle shedding
they all had to have it

Fights and fall out were not foreign,
In fact, they were known through and through
But every fight resulted in
a happier reconciliation too

A linked people by blood and love
were burned alive today
They cried and scremed so loud and high
but they never gave her away

You see, some pirates came and demanded
a girl that they could capture
but no one would give away their community
not for any exquised rapture

A fine example of stature
this village gave to show
their bonding adoration
for each other a warming glow

Now they are together
in eternity
when you die, how it happens
matter greatly

Their sacrifice was little
only a mortal coil,
and every drop if spittle they felt
was a drop of gold in perpetuity royal

And now as a community kings are born
and they live how they did in life
but now they live in royal style
nothing to harm them no more wiery strife

livining poor and together
and sacrificing all
meant dying and rising forever
and existing universally tall

Obsession

Hot. Smoldering. Suffolcating.
Exilerating. Sensual. Infultrating.

Dizzy. Free. Open Harmony.
Wet. Cold. Extreme Irony.

Focus. Inescapability.
Harness. Emotion. Predictability.

When obsession drives your thinking
Controls every movement, every whim

when it dizzies your focus
and smolders your will.

when thinking becomes reasoning
when imagination becomes circular

when your heart goes treasoning
when words become vernicular.

when hot goes wet, and wet goes cold
when feeling goes through dry and old

when thoughts collide
and pores draw sweat

trolloping and abide
the law needs no pet.

obseesion. drive. hallow abyss
feeling deprives thoughts of all.

obsession.depression. total amis
wanting. waiting. deprived. apall.

obsession. conviction. excitement
denial. anxious. enditement.

Obsession is good for the body
Obsession is good for the soul.

Obsession the wielder of everything
Obsession the ruler of all.

© DA Bergemann

Originally posted by Laviera_j
which a word did you mean Soda?

in the title, that name for some disease or disorder and what not...😆 i dunno! i'm confused! 😆

Oh, you mean asphixia. It means suffocate. 😄

Originally posted by Laviera_j
Syren, you are so sweet! 😄Thank you for the support. Hey, do you have a poetry sig here? I would like to review some of your work

http://www.killermovies.com/forums/showthread.php?s=&threadid=292473&perpage=20&pagenumber=1

My Poetry thread 😮

Originally posted by Laviera_j
Oh, you mean asphixia. It means suffocate. 😄

are you really good at remembering different names for those kind of mental illnesses? 😄 😆

Originally posted by Laviera_j
Obsession

Hot. Smoldering. Suffolcating.
Exilerating. Sensual. Infultrating.

Dizzy. Free. Open Harmony.
Wet. Cold. Extreme Irony.

Focus. Inescapability.
Harness. Emotion. Predictability.

When obsession drives your thinking
Controls every movement, every whim

when it dizzies your focus
and smolders your will.

when thinking becomes reasoning
when imagination becomes circular

when your heart goes treasoning
when words become vernicular.

when hot goes wet, and wet goes cold
when feeling goes through dry and old

when thoughts collide
and pores draw sweat

trolloping and abide
the law needs no pet.

obseesion. drive. hallow abyss
feeling deprives thoughts of all.

obsession.depression. total amis
wanting. waiting. deprived. apall.

obsession. conviction. excitement
denial. anxious. enditement.

Obsession is good for the body
Obsession is good for the soul.

Obsession the wielder of everything
Obsession the ruler of all.

fits the mood of my van helsing story 😄

Hey thanks girl! and yep - pretty much know every metal condition there is!!! lol

Originally posted by Syren
http://www.killermovies.com/forums/showthread.php?s=&threadid=292473&perpage=20&pagenumber=1

My Poetry thread 😮

Hey I loved the very first one! Really funny and creative! I will get thorugh the rest as soon as I can!

Originally posted by Laviera_j
Hey thanks girl! and yep - pretty much know every metal condition there is!!! lol

don't you mean mental and not metal? 😛 😄 😆

lol, yah! Typo.... 😮

sure, sure, lava! 😛 i believe you! 😄 😆

lol - well actually..... 😮 😆

there is such thing as spell check, i believe.... 😄 😆

hmmmmm........me thinks you think me cannoooooot speel...?

lol

Yesterdays Benevolence

Readily achieving and yet loving. Forgiving.
He sits on his thrown and watches.
Beginnings and endings and life-living,
his linnen shirt he starches.

Beneath the oaken wood of his thrown
and thorugh the leather throngs,
His feet lie tapping in a dull tone
and his servants sing him worshipping songs.

His hair is an orange from the sun dripping down,
His skin is a deathly white.
His name is the ultimate NOUN,
and his bark is as bad as his bite.

Season to season, rains to rain,
The fall of the sun in the night.
He sees all sin and sees all pain,
and puts them all to right.

A man you say,
who lives this way,
Impossible, improbable indecent!

A man this day?
A man hooray!
Possible, wonerful, apparent!

But then you turn your head to the side
and see the tall wall mirror.
The reflection you see does not abide
with the laws of reality - and you shiver.

All in black with a long gaunt head,
you've seen the all impossible.
For the man you see is what will be
if every man got his ultimate fantasy.

Women who bow and sing their praises,
and women who scrub the floor.
Well typical really - a man who lazes,
and women shoulda all adore!

But a dreams a dream -
thank goodness for that!
And now I shall go,
and bow, and take off my hat.

Originally posted by Laviera_j
hmmmmm........me thinks you think me cannoooooot speel...?

lol

want me to break it down so that you can understand more clearly, oh slow one, mon ami? 😛 👿 😆 😮‍💨

Originally posted by Laviera_j
Yesterdays Benevolence

Readily achieving and yet loving. Forgiving.
He sits on his thrown and watches.
Beginnings and endings and life-living,
his linnen shirt he starches.

Beneath the oaken wood of his thrown
and thorugh the leather throngs,
His feet lie tapping in a dull tone
and his servants sing him worshipping songs.

His hair is an orange from the sun dripping down,
His skin is a deathly white.
His name is the ultimate NOUN,
and his bark is as bad as his bite.

Season to season, rains to rain,
The fall of the sun in the night.
He sees all sin and sees all pain,
and puts them all to right.

A man you say,
who lives this way,
Impossible, improbable indecent!

A man this day?
A man hooray!
Possible, wonerful, apparent!

But then you turn your head to the side
and see the tall wall mirror.
The reflection you see does not abide
with the laws of reality - and you shiver.

All in black with a long gaunt head,
you've seen the all impossible.
For the man you see is what will be
if every man got his ultimate fantasy.

Women who bow and sing their praises,
and women who scrub the floor.
Well typical really - a man who lazes,
and women shoulda all adore!

But a dreams a dream -
thank goodness for that!
And now I shall go,
and bow, and take off my hat.

ooh! 😱 wonderful, one more, mon ami 😊 it 🤘 -ed!

hmm...i wonder whose it about... 😖hifty: 😆