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Sarah was in a tide of Ravenclaws and pushed past them all. Hurriedly she climbed the girl's dormitory and slammed the door. Those people wanted to hear the kidnapping story from the top. They heard it at least twenty times and even Sarah was getting sick of reliving it. The people loved it that she pulled a spell on Malfoy.

"Will they ever leave me alone? Never had much interest in me before," muttered Sarah as she slammed herself on the bed. Pulling the curtains around her she took out all of her school homework. She better get started on it. Pulling out a squashed parchment and ink bottle she heard sniffling from nearby.

"Who is that? I have a right to know."

Quickly Chang pulled back her curtains and moved along the rows until she came to another canopy. Rapping on one of the posts the sniffling stopped.

"What do you want?"

"To know who you are." Sarah pushed back the curtains and caught a glimpse of another Ravenclaw girl. The green eyes were pouring with tears and hidden by layers of brown hair. "And what's wrong?"

"Nothing." The other girl scuttled over so her back was to Chang. "Why does it matter?"

"It does," said Sarah. Putting a hand on her back she turned her around. "Aren't you Hermonie's sister, Evan?"

"It's Erin. No one gets it right," muttered Erin. She pushed back some of her brown hair behind her ears.
(Does that help you start Paddy? I thought it might give you a good begining)

(YES! Thank you so much ^^)

Erin then wiped away a few tears that stained her face, trying to look the other Ravenclaw in the eyes. But when she found it too difficult, she walked over to her own bed, the one next to Sarah.

Still sniffing a bit, Erin pulled out a book and a piece of what looked like wet parchment. In fact, the book was wet too. Erin gave the two soaked items a worried and sad look before throwing them to the end of her bed. If they hadn't throw it in the lake, she wouldn't have a wet book and ruined potions essay, which she had worked on for days on end.

Erin glanced back at Sarah. She recognized her, for she had seen Sarah about in the halls before, talking with the many friends Erin didn't and most likely wouldn't ever have. She was destined to be a loser, or at least that what they said, the ones who ruined her belongings.

"Erin, is that an essay I can help you repair it. Repairo!" said Sarah. Her wand acted like a hairdryer and smoothed out the essay and in seconds it was dry.

(Ok now thats a wrong spell.. Repairo repairs things which are broken.... not dries them... You can use a drought charm I saw one in the alphabit of spells http://www.hp-lexicon.org/magic/spells_b.html)

(Let's say i did that spell I don't really care)

((lol cool.))

"Vlad don't worry." Said Stephen, Van's dad. "Van's not going anywhere. Although this shall not be overlooked. As for the match today he has been suspended. For how lo.g is not to be known."

Van bowed his head in shame.

"I hope you'll find the new brooms effective against Slytherin." Stephen said grinning. "Originally I came to see you in action on them but then it became more of a grave manner."

Stephen looked at Van who shifted his eyes away.

"Anyways gentlemen we must attend the Quidditch match." Dumbledore said chestily. "However, you Lucius shall be attending it from the confines of Azkaban."

As he said that two wizard guards walked in and grabbed Lucius Malfoy, who left without a fight.

Suddenly there were some loud noises outside. Everyone rushed out only to find two burn marks.

"Malfoy's escaped!!" Stephen exclaimed examining the burnt areas.

"DAMN!!!" shouted Vlad as he looked at the right and found an old Nimbus he got on to it and saw a cannoe going throu the lake "Thats Malfoy!!!" Vlad flew out of the window and headed for the ship. He saw Malfoy taking out his wand wanting to Strike Vlad but Vlad said "SILENCIO!!!" Malfoy tried to speak but nothing came out "EXPELLIARMUS!!" shouted Vlad and Malfoys wand went onto Vlads hands. Vlad cast a Boogy Hex and Malfoys legs and hands sticked together. Vlad picked Malfoy up on his broom and headed back to Hogwarts and landed on the quidditch field.

"Erin, there's a quidditch match and a boy that likes me is there, Van. Want to go?" asked Sarah.

suddenly an owl with a big package came down to where Vlad and Malfoy where. Vlad took the package he opened it and saw a Firebolt 3001! There was a letter he read it "From😖irius. To: Vlad Potter.
Hello, Vlad this is you godfather Sirius well anyways see I put a charm on this letter so only you and Harry can read this. I heard that tommorows the match Gryffindor vs Slytherin huh? Well Vlad I know you can do it because you got Jameses Blood And with Jamses blood you got 90% of winning! I saved up all these years to get you a firebolt 3001 I had alot of trouble of getting it. It hasnt came out yet its a prototype I got. I tested it dont worry it works like a charm! Anyway I bought it because your birthdays in a week and I think that a seeker has to Differ from the rest of his team. I heard Lucifers got into Azkaban. Im sure glad he did!

With Scincerity and hugs

Your godfather, Serius

((before above post))

"Say Vlad, that's not Malfoy." Van said pointing as a fake Malfoy turned into snakes and slithered away.

"Post pone the match and send everyone to the Great Hall until we have found Malfoy or the grounds are safe. Van, Vlad spread thew word. Nobody is to leave the Great Hall. Mr. Snape I'd appreciate it if you accompanied my son and Potter to the Great Hall." Stephen said staring at Snape.

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(In the Great Hall when everyone's been assembled)

"Hey Vlad you gonna come and find Sarah and Jules?" Van motioned for Vlad to follow as he walked off towards the Gryffindor and Ravenclaw crowds.

"You mean your girlfriends?? I mean I saw how your eyes met on Sarah I should Say Jules likes you too! Anyway check out this I got this from a friend its a prototype but a tested one" said Vlad as he showed Van his Firebolt 3001

"Dude that's awesome. When this whole mess clears up maybe we can go out for a quick practice match so the team can get used to the new brooms." Van grinned at Vlad and chuckled at his remarks. "They're not my girlfriends Vlad. Even though I wouldn't mind."

"Get used to it your the Captain of Gryffindor, Just look at me a Seeker and not a single luck with girls" sais Vlad

"Hey I dunno, your bro was seeker and look at him. Plus I hear a few girls in Sarah's sister, Cho's year think you're pretty hot. They even asked me which window was yours in the room." Van laughed to himself. "I did of course give them all a broom and the safest directions to your window, and told them what time you get up and go to bed."

"Oh really??Coool!!! I mean Ill have to put a charm on my window" said Vlad "So what do we do now??"

"Ummm go find Sarah and Jules I guess. Hey there's Sarah now. HEY SARAH!!!" Van shouted running through a crowd of people. "Hey Sar'. Hey you're Hermione's sis' right?" Van said turning to Erin. "This is my friend Vlad. Seeker for Gryffindor and one of the most eligible men in the house."

Vlad blushed at the remark and said "Hello" as he made his way throu the crowd/

"Van, you meet Cho, my sister? I think your a seventh year and have a crush on Potter," said Sarah. Those simple words made Cho's cheeks turn bright red. "Just joking, Cho."

"You better be," hissed Cho. She smiled at Van and Vlad.

(Can I control Cho to because she's Sarah's sis?)

Erin watched as Sarah dried her book and paper. She didn't think that this was actually happening. Everyone hated her, so why was this girl actually helping her? It was quite confusing, but Erin had to thank her. If not for Sarah, she'd have to start all over with her essay. "Thanks a lot," she said, sticking her paper in her book, which she put on her bedside table.

She couldn't help but stare. "I wasn't planning on going, but are you sure?" she asked. She was not sure if this was a joke or if Sarah meant what she said. Then again, she did save her belongings..."I'll go," Erin muttered. She didn't have anything else to do.

((yeah thats fine wit me))

"Hey Cho." Van waved at her. "Say do you guys know why we're in here?" Van said in hushed voice looking around him.