Puissance

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Puissance

Puissance - Power; might.

Hi Im a noob to KMC forums. i've had this idea for a while and been working on it for a while and am only on the third chapther. Here's my Prolouge to Puissance.
It's actually the shortest of anything for what I have typed so far. Chapther 1 is much longer as long as Chapther 2.
The only thing I fear is it may be shot down for my Prolouge. You won't understand the prolouge untill about untill mid-story. At first It'll just seems like im trying to have some big bad guy march around any ways here it is tell me if you like it.

[B]Prolouge[B/]

The sun settled itself peacfully over the green grassy hills.
The hills that laid infront of, a large rapid river. The river that
was impossible to cross safely. It's rapids were so strong they
could pull anything under. It was a large river at that. It was
always making noise. Noise from the collashing of waves against the
rocks, then waves onto other waves. The stir of water as it hissed
down slumps throughout the long path it follow. What lay behind the
river was, mountains. Tall mountains that touched the sky. The clouds
hid there tops. It was rumored if you went high enough you'd die
instantly. You'd be frozen to death. The mountains arched around
expanding themselves in a behomoth circle. Between the mountains lay,
countless prairees, and other peacfull flowing rivers and lakes. The
land was called Ellen. Ellen is a Kingdome possed by King Gaddler. He
rulled all the land that lay between the mountains. The mountains
were his walls that protected his Kingdome. King Gaddler was one of
the most powerfull kings to ever exist. Certainly not one of the
nicest, or kindest though.

Gaddler slept peacfully in his bed, knowing no harm would come
to him. (Continued on next post)

Not with his gaurds waiting infront of his door. His archers
on the roof. The baricades on the castle entrance, the hallways being
patrolled. Never would he be hurt. Gaddler slept without worries,
without fears it was inhuman they way he slept and live. All must
have fears and worries it was natural, but he didn't.
He slept peacfully more comfortable then any of the Townspeaple
would ever sleep. He knew it to. He knew they would never sleep with
a bed exspecially made for him. Made out of the softest feathers in
the land. He didn't pitty them he laughed at them. There pain was his
glory. If the townspeaple life was luxjorious the king wouldn't be so
special. It was a life they could only long for. Gaddler slept untill
the sun creaked through his window landing on his eye lids. He
stirred for a moment. The next moment he creaked his eyes open, and
satup .

King Gaddler made his way out of bed. Snatching up
his sword wich lay leaning against his bed. His Swords hilt's base
color was white. But had Golden stride's around it. He glanced at his
gold incrested mirror. As he smiled. This was the face that all the
paple in this land hailed. He slipped on his belt with his Elagent
Scabbard attached. He had a strong thick white scabbard. The scabbard
had designs of golden Roses dazzling all over it. It was custom made
just for King Gaddler's sword. It blended in perfectly with the
Sword's hilt. Gaddler thought nothing of it as he slipped the sword
into it's sheath.

Then slipped on some white pance. With a white under shirt and
a gold vest. Then he threw on his over cloak. The cloak was white
except the golden borders and the golden designs on the center of it.
He walked out of his royal BedRoom. Only to be confronted by his Head
Knight. Arthdex. "Yes?" Gaddler asked.
Arthdex straightend up his back as he replys, "Sir. There
is a servant refusing to do his duty."
This came as a suprise to Gaddler. Who would dare refuse to
work for there King.
"Do you want him killed?" Arthdex asked.
"No I would like to confront him." Gaddler answered. Intrigued
by the servant.
"As you wish sir." Arthdex replied. Then leading Gaddler down
the maze of castle halls. Arthdex lead Gaddler to the Throne room.
Where there lay on his knees a crumbling weak man. He had brown
thinning hair and his clothes were practically rags. It didn't look
like he had been washed in weaks. His eyes showed fear for he
wouldn't look directly at his king.
King Gaddler was dismayed when he saw the servant. This servant
works in the royal castle and he looks like this. "How come you
havn't been bathed?" Gaddler asked agressivley. His left hand on his
hip and his right hand on his Sword hilt.
"K...k...king G..Gad.d..d..dler. I've been denied the acess of
bathing. The Royal kn...kn..knights w..wont let me." The old man
trembled in fear.
Arthdex's features shrunk in fear but no one seemed to notice.
"You lie!" King Gaddler screamed. "The Knights wouldn't do
that." King Gaddler yelled not realizing the Knights had been picking
on the old man.
Gaddler sighed as he pondered for a moment in a slightly calmer
tone he asked, "Why won't you obey your duties?"
"I beg of you sir. I refuse to because My Wife is pregant. Soon
my child will be born I want to be there. It's imporant to me."
Gaddler's eyebrows collashed together as they hovered over his
eyes giving them a darker feature. "You put your unimportant peasant
child's life infront of your dutie to me! I am your King. Realise
that now!"
The old man said not another word he knew what was coming and
it did. Gaddler quickly withdrew his sword and lashed out on the old
man. The sword's tip glided through the dirty wrinkled skin like
butter. Leaving the man's neck slit open. The dirty servant's head
bobbled for a moment, before his body went lifeless and he toppled to
the floor. The man would never to see, hear, talk, talk, taste, feel,
love or hate again. His life was gone he was dead.

(i hope this doesn't come out horribly I copied and pasted it from a WORD document).

Chapter 1

There's nothing more elegant then life. Life is beautiful, yet
dangerous. Life creates emotion. Passion, Pain, Hate, Depression,
Hope, Happiness that is life. Life can be dangerous when it forms the
fiery power of Desperation mixed with Strength.

Vane lay apron a haystack. A gentle breeze blew by slightly
rustling his hair. He didn't notice. Vane was asleep, lost in a
world of dreams. A world
where he can escape from the pain he called life. His lips formed a small
smile. A sign of his relaxation and escape. It didn't last long. The
rooster burst out in a stream of repetitive howls. Alarm clock to all the
castle servants. The sound went right to Vane's ears bursting through
out his body trembling him awake. Vane's eyes slowly creaked open.
Awaking to the to the thick musty aroma of Horse
Manure. He crinkled his nose as he did every morning after inhaling a
handful of the familiar scent.

Vane casually looked out the loft window. Vane so desperately
wanted to go back to sleep. To fade off into another world. The
reality and truth dawned over him as it did every morning. He couldn't
go back to sleep. So in the end Vane forced his body awake.
In a attempt to sit up Vane twisted his hips. His body turned and
rolled down off the hay face first into the dusty dirt that was his
floor. Vane gripped the dirt he called a floor and pushed his face out
of it, coughing up the dirt he just inhaled. Vane wiped his face off,
rising up. The taste of dirt still lay into his mouth he didn’t really
care though.
Vane made his way out of the horse stall he was forced to sleep in.
Throwing on a stained shirt, he looked down taking a glance at his
clothing. His cloth’s looked like they once might off been sharp but
suffered considerable damage. Normally servants had to look there
tip-top shape, but not the outside servants. They were never seen
inside the castle so it
mattered nothing what they look like. They were the ones forced to do
all the grunt work.
Vane got to the well, he pulled up a full bucket of water.
Dumping some
of the cool essence on his face Trying to wipe away his memories and his body's yearn for sleep.
He had to leave the castle grounds soon. He had to carry out the
sentence the king gave him. Normally several grown men did this job
but now he alone was forced to do it. It was his punishment for
getting into severe trouble last week.
He remembered it well.

***Memory Starts

Vane had just finished replacing the back section of the horse fence.
He wiped away a layer of thin sweat breezing down his forehead. Now
all he had to do was replace the horse hay. Pushing a wheel barrel of
hay towards the stalls he cringed at the sun's hot pernicious glare. His left hand was
starting to develop another blister. He had a nice collection already. He stopped noticing one of the horse's hadn't been let out. In fact it was his favorite Horse Kellen. Strong white coat with a black mane and substantial devilish eyes. There was something about Kellen that had always struck Vane. He was drawn to the horse with little to no reason.
Vane flashed Kellen a smile as he put the Wheel Barrel aside and stroked his mane. Then finally V Vane took a deep breath. got. "You know. I've been wanting to ride you for a long time." He continued stroking through Kellen's thick sultry mane. "I bet you'd love to have me ride you wouldn't you." Vane continued to smile to the horse as he opened the stall door. Why hadn't he been let out?
Vane lead the horse away stopping at the border between the stalls and the field the horse's had to run through. "Alright you can run around now." Then something struck Vane. None of the Castle Chiefs or guards were around.
Vane looked at Kellen's strong lean horse body. Kellen could probably run pretty far without being stopped. "No regrets." Vane whispered to himself as he grabbed a nearby saddle an strapped it onto Kellen.
He hopped on and lightly kicked her on the side running her forward, with the sun on his back and the wind in his face excitement running through his veins.

Servants weren’t aloud to ride Horses or even know how to. It was for the fear
they'd run away. Servants weren’t slaves. They were given food, a
place to sleep and when they turned age eighteen a small allowance
and a room in the castle was given to them. In fact most townspeople
crave to be a castle servant. Once you become a castle servant it's a
life long commitment though. All your children must be one as well.
It was somewhere high up in Vane's family line where his family
became Castle Servants. It was worst when one needed to be replaced.
All the townspeople wanted to become one so it was hectic. That was
the reason Servants couldn't leave the Castle Services. So not to create a hectic environment from the Towns People

Vane Recalled when his mother illegally taught him to ride a
horse. She told him his Father knew how to ride one. Since as far back as he could remember his mom always told him of how is his Father was a great knight, not afraid of anything. Keeping that in mind he refused to give up and learned to ride a Horse. He didn't and never knew why
his Mother had taught him to ride a horse.
Vane settled on to Kellen, with the barn door open.
The wind seemed to be passing Vane by, as he flew through the
air effortlessly. He screamed out in joy, "Woooooooooo!Hoooo!"
The joy didn't last long. Vane stopped spotting a knight in the afar walking his way. He jumped off the Horse standing still in fear from what might happen. Every breath made more sweat and more panic roll down his chest. the knight approached he seemed angry to. He had his helmet on so Vane couldn't distinguish which one it was. “What are you doing riding a horse. You mangy boy!" The knight ranted on.

Instincly Vane realized who it was It was it was his least favorite Knight Arthdex. Arthdex slung out his metal gloved hand over Vane's neck yanking him forward.
"You think you can disobey one of the most important rules!" Arthdex howled. He adjusted his arm around Vane's neck. The cold metal squeezing his Neck.
"No get off me!" Vane yelled. Trying to slip from the guards
grasp.
"Oh no. Gaddler is going to see this. A boy defying the
rules. Not only a boy but a servant boy." Arthdex almost laughed.

Arthdex dragged Vane into the royal lobby and tossed him on
the Marble floor.
"Your Majesty this boy was caught riding a horse." Arthdex easily withdrew his arm from Vane.
Vane relinquished a howl of a high tuned squeak from suffocation when he fell forward. Barely catching himself he inhaled air rapidly and painfully. Arthdex had been squeezing the life out of him. Vane felt the harsh stare of the king on him. he didn't lift his gaze from the floor. He refused to look into the eyes of Gaddler.

Gaddler was silent as well, but he watched Vane's every breath
with interest. This lasted for another few minutes before Gaddler
decided to talk. "Why? and how did you ride that horse."
"Your Sire I completely apologize. I'll never do it again."
Vane spoke hiding the anger that burned inside of him. He clenched
his fist as he forced himself to obey. His Father would never obey.
This didn't seem to satisfy Gaddler so he beckoned
on. "Apologize for what?"
Vane's fist trembled, "For riding your horse. Your Majesty."
"I see what your doing. Your hiding."
"I have nothing to hide." Vane lied.
"That itself is a lie. You dodged my first question. How did
you ride that horse?" Gaddler stroked his grizzly gray beard.
Vane didn't no what to say he didn't want to defy Gaddler by
saying no but he could never tell him the truth. So Vane remained
silent.
"Your silence troubles me. It tells me what you refuse to.
I'll ask one more time how did you ride that horse?"
Vane looked up from the golden tiled floor to his King Gaddler.
Although Vane's eyes strayed from looking directly into Gaddler's he spoke up. "I just
wanted to try and see what it was like. I guess I could ride it because it was a talent of mine."
Gaddler let out a ferocious swing with his hand striking Vane
painfully. Vane only caught a glimpse of the swinging hand before it
struck. It had come at him so fast. The strength it had implied was
so strong as well. One would underestimate it.
Vane fell back tumbling onto his butt. He grabbed his face
pressing against it in attempt to soothe the stinging pain on his
cheek. How could an old man like that strike so hard Vane pondered.
"Do not lie to me." Gaddler spoke calmly. "Now one more
time." Gaddler scooted in front of Vane and with Gaddler's glove
finger he finger up Vane's chin. "Look into my eyes and tell me the
truth."
Vane didn't stray his eyes away he looked into King Gaddler's
strong complex Grey eyes. In the Kings eyes Vane could see a deep power pull.
They struck right into your soul seizing it squeezing it leaving you withered and paralyzed.
"Who showed you how to ride the horse?" Gaddler asked.
"I...I..." Vane stuttered. He wanted to look away from the
King's eyes but he couldn't. He was locked onto them. Forced to see
the brewing storm within. Looking into them made him feel weak,
small and insignificant. "I learned from-" Vane cut himself off. His
body was trembling but he had a flash in his mind. His Father. His
father the Knight in shining armor. Who feared nothing, no man. It
was a memory of his father smiling in his armor. The only one Vane
had. "I learned from myself. It seemed so natural." Vane smiled.
Breaking free of the trance he was in.

Gaddler's face went red. So red from even under his beard you
could see his red skin. He shot out another swift strike to Vane
knocking Vane back but before Vane could even fall Gaddler grabbed
him up by his collar and roughly tossed him up into the air.
Where was this man's strength coming from.
Vane's back landed painfully on one of the many step in the throne room. Vane's
lips formed a small 'O' leaning sideways his eyes squinting towards
the ceiling. He didn't see what was coming next. This atrocious pain
flooded through out his body he couldn't even tell where he had been
hit for the first several seconds. His whole body felt futile

"Ahhh!" Vane hollered. Realizing the steel toed boot of Gaddler had stuck
into his ribs. Vane fell off the step onto his back breathing
rapidly and deep. With each breath a whole new pain over came him.
When the pain advanced he kept breathing deeper and faster untill
Vane broke into Hyper Ventilating. This lasted for at least a whole
minute. Leaving his lungs sore and exhausted. Vane rolled his eyes up to
face the king. The king showed no emotional resent doing this. He
seemed somewhat proud of himself he manage to get Vane in a immobile
state with out barely any effort.
Vane stared at Gaddler with pleading eyes to stop. Deep inside
Vane wanted to stare at Gaddler through eyes of Anger and rage. He
was afraid though. Fear held it. Afraid that a look like that might
cost him a kick in the mouth. Vane hated his fear.

"Sit up now." Gaddler commanded.
Vane struggled to do so. After some haggling he did. Sitting up killed his ability to breath right.
"Good now since you have this natural God given gift to ride
horses. I want you to catch me a wild stallion. Next week you'll go
out retrieve one and come back simple. Yes?"
Vane choked back a wild Stallion. He could never catch a wild Stallion.
There were grown men in specific team that went out to catch a
stallion. This isn't a one man job. "Yes." He whispered.
"You won't come back without one or you'll be killed."
"Yes." Vane repeated.

That night before Vane had to go last night. Vane and his Mother
cried for fear she would never see him again. "Vane I love you." She
whispered to him.
Vane only hugged her as her tears sank into his greasy hair.
"Don't have fear. Be brave. Remember your father think of him and what he
conquered and accomplished. I see him in you." She smiled through her tears wiping back his hair, "You can accomplish anything." His mother smiled to him
as she finally let go of him and headed to the kitchen. She had stole
enough food from the Kitchen to make a small banquet that night.
When Vane devoured the food he knew he had had better food before but he didn't care. It was
more the love he was whole Hartley taking in not the food.

Memory Over***

"Thank you Mother." Vane kissed her on the forehead as he
finished remembering the incident. She had made him several food
packages so he didn't run low on food. "I won't disappoint you. I'll
come home with that Stallion." Vane spoke to her without looking back
as he left the barn stall. Why did his mother ever sleep in the barn
stall? She was obviously past eighteen and was aloud to sleep in the castle. She
had a perfect room presented to her in the castle. She said she
wanted to stay close to him though.

Vane plugged the key into the hole clicking open the castle
fences. He closed it locked it and headed towards the forest which lay
down off in the distance right beyond the nearest village.

Chapther 2

Is love and passion a weakness. To glance somewhere and love what you see is that weak?

Vane walked through town taking his time. He'd been here quite
allot before but most of his work was at the castle. The town was very
important because the people lived there. Without the people to Ellen
the castle would be unimportant. The castle gives the people
protection and somewhat provides for them. They provide just as much
for the castle though.
If there was no town’s people the castle wouldn't have authority over
anything. Gaddler wouldn't be able to attend King, Queen and Emperor
meetings if he had nothing to be King over. It was a system neither
was good without the other. For the most part each hated each other.

The castle attendants despised the townspeople. They hated them
treated them like trash. The towns people hated the Castle attendants.
They were stuck up and to fancy to live in town.

Vane hopped over a tub of water that lay out next to a
house. Probably for dogs and cats. He hummed to himself. Tightening
his grip of the sack he carried over his shoulder. He watched the
morning business began to stir to life. He didn't want to run into
any townspeople he may be recognized from the castle. He'd be at the
forest soon.

Soon wasn't soon enough. Vane passed a stock trader, pulling a
donkey along. Vane kept his eyes away from the man. The man had a
sweaty sticky face. Loose black greasy hair covered his head and almost his eyes. Very
rugged. His beady eyes darted at Vane's, "Boy!" he called out.
Vane stopped in his tracks, "Yes?"
"You look awf'al famil'yer."
Vane knew well who this man was. He came to the castle
often enough to trade animals in. Another perk for the People can't
live without the castle the castle can't live without the people system. "I
don't believe so." Vane lied.
"Wait a minute now. You look like one of those fancy
castle folks!" The greasy man yelled. "You lied to
me." He took an intimidating step towards Vane. Getting awfully angry over just a small lie.
"While you get to live the life of luxury I’m down here
working in this village. Sweating and giving away my blood." He
clenched a fist. His rancid breath now breathing right onto Vane's
face. Vane noticed one of his eyes was crooked. Vane was to afraid to
tremble. He wanted to. He wanted to cower to his knee's. He couldn’t his fear didn’t allow them he was so afraid he wouldn’t move. He hated his
fear. His fear made him weak.
"What do you got to say for yourself?" The stock trader
asked. He was acting so un-rationally he must have some kind of back history with the King.
Think of Father, Think of Father and his shining armor.
Think of the dragon's he faced down-
Vane was knocked out of his thoughts by a cold hard push
backwards. He landed on his butt into the dirt looking up to the
sticky man leaning over him. Vane‘s sack tumbled open at his side. What is this guys problem! His This seemed like a repeat of Gaddler pushing him
around. "My family died because of you castle folk!" The trader
screamed. The sun burning behind him while he threw up his dirty clothed arms. His eyes were wet with tears started to form in them. His face showed painful emotion. He slammed down his fist right next to Vane. A scene was being created. The daily shuffle of life
stopped to watch around them.
The large man was cracking up as he pressed his forehead into the dirt sniffling which almost sounded like crying. He looked up his face covered in dirt but small tears strolling down it. He sniffed though and it all stopped his focus seemed to be innocent Vane.

"No." Vane whispered. "No." He wanted to fight back. He wanted to lunge out and kill this man where he stood.

"Cole! Stop now!" A far away voice yelled..
The angry crying man presumed to be Cole turned around. "Virden stay
out of this. It is between me and the castle folk."
A rugged brown haired man continued to walk this way. His
posture seemed strong, he looked strong. He stepped in front of
Cole. "No stop. This is between you and the King's Men. This boy did
nothing to you."
"His people did!" Cole screamed. He tried charging his way
through Verden. Verden jumped aside and pocketed his leg into Cole’s tripping Cole face forward. Cole coughed as he began to push himself off
the ground. Verden placed his foot onto Cole's back and held him
down. "No I won't let you hurt this boy."

Vane still cowered. He cowered as he forced his trembling
legs up. "Thank you sir." He humbly spoke.
Verden said nothing to Vane maybe he because he disliked Vane
as well. Verden let his foot off of Cole. "No go along." Verden
demanded.

Cole did as he was told but not without flashing Vane a
viciously angered face. Then he took his donkey and left.
The people standing around them went back to what they were doing.
Vane stood there waiting for Verden to shun him away. Verden didn't
though he turned to Vane with a whole heartedly smile.” Hello young
fellow." He held out his hand. Vane unsteadily took it. Verden
clamped onto it firmly shaking it. Releasing it. Vane couldn't help
but smile it was only brief. Verden looked like a definite farmer..
He had broad shoulders, wore a brown vest and a long flannel clothing
underneath. He had wrinkles on him but it was hard to tell if it was
from age or from working so much.
"I’m Verden. One of the farmer's in the village. I hear your
from the castle is this true?" Verden asked.
Vane wanted to lie and say 'No'. Verden already knew the
truth he was just asking to see how Vane reacted.
"Yeah. I mean yes. I’m Vane."
Verden patted him on the back, "Greetings but I’m on a hurry and
it seems like your headed somewhere to. So may we meet again." After recollecting his stuff Verden flashed Vane another friendly smile before he parted.

Vane walked at a faster pace this time he was dodging in and out
of the people passing him. He wanted to get out of the village now. He
didn't have anything to look forward to after all he'd be living in the woods
but he hated it here. It seemed like the atmosphere around him was
against him. People looked at him like he was something vulgar except Verden.

Vane continued into the forest glad to leave the village. He
hated the smell it held. He hated the community and presence it held.
The aroma of the forest was much different. It was pine and
timber. The muscle smell of grass was strong in these forest of Ellen. A rare
grass Vane didn't recall what it was used for but it could only be
found in the forest's in Ellen. With all the rare smells and aroma’s
it created a wonderful feeling. Vane had only been in the forest
once before for a mild period of time. He was helping a dig project. He
loved every minute of it despite it was one of the worst jobs he had.
It'd be painful to live on his own but he'd have to.
"O.K. Where do I start?" Vane asked himself. He looked around.
Nothing around but tree's, crickets and other crickets.
Trying to think what's smart. He should probably map out the
local area he'd be in before he started camp. That area should
probably be far enough away from the village so he didn't run into
anyone. Not to far when he had to bring the Stallion back. He
shivered trying to imagine how he'd bring back a stallion. He had a strong
muzzle the king gave to him personally. He'd brought an extra just incase. He had a
saddle he'd doubt he'd use. Some rope and other minor equipment for
capturing the horse.

Vane continued walking to map out the area. The only noise he heard to his own
ears was the repetitive rhythm of his shoe's squeaking against the
ground when they sunk into the cold dirt. He gazed up into the sky
cringing at the sun. He looked at the clouds wanting to lay down and
get lost into them. The clouds were beautiful. No matter how much he wanted to fall into there hypnotic beauty he never did, he gazed
at them momentarily before but refused to let himself get lost into
them. It was a weakness to get emotionally attached to something as
petty as clouds.

As the sun moved a quarter of it's axis from the east to
the west. Vane finally stopped. It was in front of a small pond. It
wasn't to deep because it had weeds growing out of it from the
middle. Tall weeds so the pond was probably only a few feet deep. He
emptied he sack onto the ground in front of him. A few sheets, some
wrapped up food, a bowl three curved knives. He assumed it was for
food he caught. He had some nets. He'd prefer to keep it to catching
fish instead of rabbits or other critters. There were some cement food plates and a
small box of Krystan Ash.

"How'd she get this?" Vane asked. He picked up the box examining it. He packed his belongings and he didn‘t recall this. So obviously he didn't put it there. His mother must of slipped it in.
Krystan Ash was rare but the king had a nice supply of it
from the Castle Sage. You could sprinkle it on wood and an instant
fire would be booming.
"Thanks Mother." Vane told himself as he
tucked the Krystal Ash away. He began putting mostly everything else
away when he noticed one other thing. A dagger. It was a very rusty dagger. In fact he couldn't
see one spot on it where it wasn't rust. "Did mother put this in here
to?" Vane asked himself He picked the dagger up by it's worn in
rubber grip hanging it in front of his face he examined it. For one
thing it smelled. Horribly bad like it'd been laying in a toilet
pit. "Why'd she give it to me?"
His mother was the only one who could of put it there. He
couldn't think of anyone else who would or even could of. Vane
rubbed his finger over the rusty dagger. Triggering for some rust to
be scratched off and fall into the grass below him.
"I shouldn't waste my time on this." Vane decided and tossed
the dagger into the open sack. As he continued putting everything
away except the net and the bowl.
He took a large scoop of water and sipped it then poured the
rest onto himself. Vane sniffed the air once more looking around. He
went over and picked up a large rock. His muscles were straining to
carry it but he dropped it into the pond. Picking up another rock
almost as big as the one before it he dropped that in the pond as
well squeezing the net under both rocks.
"I'll leave that there whatever fish are in the pond should find
there way into that net."

Vane leaned down and picked up the longest knife. This one
had a wooden handle that wasn't as comfortable as the other two but
he didn't care it‘d work. "Got to move. Got ground to cover and time to kill."

Vane sought out his way North from the pond. He wanted to be
in and out of here as quick as possible. It’d take a few days at least to get this done. If it didn’t kill him.
He has to find horse herds. It’d be a lot easier to get one horse in a horse herd then one horse on it’s own. Vane continued walking not really knowing what he's looking
for. Hoof prints, Horse droppings. He didn't see any of either. Eventually. He found a nearby stream,
likely to have allot more fish then the small pond he camped near. If
he could recall right the stream was one that ran all the way
throughout Ellen. He believed it was the Urber stream. The largest
form of water throughout Ellen. He didn't want to camp near there.
Villagers probably visited it often.

Urber was probably the most popular stream in Ellen to
Vane figured as he watched a deer bend down and drink from it before
it skipped off.

"Wait this is the most popular river. Animals have to drink.
Even though the horse's of Ellen were always on a move they have to
stop and drink. 'Perfect.'

"First thing tomorrow I'll camp out near water and stay there the whole
day and wait to spot horses."
The rest of the day Vane walked around the local area from the pond
he was camping out at. There was nothing special throughout the area
asides a small den he found. He didn't go in it looked un-inhabited so
the animals may of left because it could of collapsed. Asides that he
wasn't going to waste his time going into a animal's den.

Vane sat at the pond he originally camped out. He ran a mental picture of the forest map through his head a few times he just transfixed that image into his head. He didn’t know how long he did this for it stopped though when his stomach made a growl. He looked down to it. When he remembered the net he set out. Crawling over to it Vane pushed away the rocks and yanked up the net to see what his award was.
To his disappointment it was a small mino. Chucking it back in the water he laid back forward against the grass. Planning out tomorrow’s procedure. The sun was drifting away before him. It’s glory leaving him alone to the night.
After later gathering some wood he piled it together to finnaly try out the Krystan Ash. Smiling he dropped a little bit of it silently over the wood. Instantly it ignited a small jet explosion shooting up. Vane tumbled backwards laughing. He had a nice strong roaring fire to comfort him for the night.

For a little while Vane just starred into the core of the fire. Where it swept back and forth with bickering flickering flames. Vane’s eyes grew big as he realized what he was doing. Losing himself into something as bliss as fire it was a weakness.
He lunged out and with his right arm he plunged it Into the core of the fire. Smashing the wood away from underneath it hitting the wood sending each piece into a different direction. The wooden pieces flew off around them now single. Since each piece was signally alone the fires went out. It obviously didn’t happen naturally just another perk from the Krystan Ash

Vane was heaving in breaths of anger over just that. His arm was covered in black fire lint all the way up to the elbow and half of his face was covered in it. “I have to stay focused.” He stated.
Instantly he pulled out the rusty dagger that had mysteriously been packed with his supplies and drew onto his arm. He placed the tip of the dagger into the belly of his forearm. Vane closed his eyes tightly as he began to let the tip pierce his skin. “Pain will not control me!” Vane demanded. Then tightly and quickly he drew the blade back making a long slice down his forearm with the rusty blade.
He tossed the blade away rubbing the rust on the border of his cut into his blood stream, he cringed even harder holding back tears. “I vow to your Mother as long as this rust is running through my veins my debt my promise to you to get a stallion is also there.” I have to stay focused.