Alright, I've gotten around to scanning my drawing in. It's fairly simple, but it took some work and I'm reasonably proud of it. I didn't use any of the similies from the poem directly, but hopefully this is a fairly good representation of what you're talking about... To me the poem is about fear, and I apologize for the crappy quality, but it's the only way I could get the file small enough and have the picture a decent size 😛
"When You Crack"
You never see it coming do you?
It encases you in grimy darkness,
It's hard to inhale,
You feel so frail,
It's like you don't exist anymore.
You never see it coming do you?
It suffocates like a plastic bag,
Wrapped around your face,
Your heart begins to race,
It's like you don't exist anymore.
You never see it coming do you?
It strangles your mind and soul,
Sucks out all your might,
You lose the will to fight,
It's like you don't exist anymore.
You never see it coming do you?
Curled up like a child on the floor,
Screams that make no sound,
You've finally hit the ground,
It's like you don't exist anymore.
You never see it coming do you?
But you feel it hit.
Oh, DR, it's awesome ✅
Absolutely fantastic, you've shown my poem from a completely different perspective, exactly as I'd hoped. The quality's fine, the picture's brilliant. I love the solidness of it, the train is an image of strength, of untouchable machinery, whilst the person portrays utter weakness, especially because they are being controlled by a 'puppeteer'. I love it!! 😉