Vlad was already on the lunch table many many many Like almost the whole Gryffindor House boys exept the 17 year old boys who were studying for exams "So the bludger hits me in the right arm So everybodys like Ohh his going to fall.. But I didnt I flew right up to the other Seeker tackled him so he smashed into the sitting benches and I got the Snitch!!!" all the boys were Applauding him "Kyle please show us a Patronus Please!!" whined alot of first yeared boys who never saw it because they werent in Hogwarts previous years when Kyle used it at alot of occasions "Fine." said Kyle as he took out his wand and shouted "EXPECTO PATRONUM!!!" he thought of a very good thought and a Blue-SIlver stag appeared and gallaped around the room.
(Ok, I know Lynn is popular too, but you've just gone way over the top. You're making Kyle seem perfect, and I really don't like it.)
Lynn stood after finishing her single piece of toast. "Alright, I'm off," She told the girls and boys, winking. "See ya, Heather!" She called, running out to the hall. She was still hungry, sure. But she couldn't eat a lot.
~hi im back. my internet was down and just got back online today~
Jack lay in bed wondering if it was a good idea to go to a school where everyone hated him. he was a timid boy. the door creaked open and 4 studants stood there with paintball guns and shot him simultaneously. everyone woke up and laughed at him. "I HOPE YOU ALL ROT AND DIE" jack yelled with fury jack ran out into the entrence hall. but stopped as he heard a crowd of people muttering. "Whos there?" jack asked. before he knew it he was hit with a blue energy ball and colapsed onto the floor unconcious and in pain