I clicked your banner and was not impressed......at all.
Whoever that guy was, for one- Sounded like he had a Nasal issue going on, Maybe he needed to blow his nose not sure...But also his metaphore's were complete trash, No good punchlines what-so-ever.
Not to mention that beat is from an 80's sitcom, And we don't need another p.diddy in the rap game.
Problem is with people like you, you don't really KNOW what rap is.
Just for the record- I'd rather be tied down to a chair and forced to listen to air supply for 16 hours straight then listen to any of that trash you sent me to.