Part 4:
A green monster jumped up and landed right next to him. Peter was shocked as he looked at the figure. He’d know that silhouette anywhere. But how, it was impossible not here, not now, THE GREEN GOBLIN!?!?!?!?. “Norman. No, you cant be Norman I saw you die” Peter said confused. “True but now I have taken over his work and will finish what he started, KILL SPIDER-MAN!!!!” the goblin accelerated full speed on his glider towards peter planning to impale him. Peter did a back flip at the right time. His feet hit the bottom of the glider and knocked the goblin of it. The goblin landed on his feet but jumped toward peter from behind and wrapped his arms around him very tightly. “As you can see I am stronger than my predecessor” peter was struggling to breathe and was in intense pain. In the distance he saw a glider coming towards them. If he timed it right, with the help of his spider-sense he should be able to impale the goblin. As it drew closer and closer. His spider-sense wasn’t activating. As the glider was 1 meter apart from them he just did a back flip. But it impaled each of his 2 feet. “AAAARRRRRRGGGGGHHHHH” peter cried. The glider dragged him by his feet into a near by building and broke through the walls. Peter fell of and hit the ground unable to move. The goblin landed in front of him. Put his foot to peters head as he muttered, “Time to die”. The goblin brought his foot down as the moment rapidly drew closer to completely crushing his head
that was cool, man! That last part was the best part, and I was thinkin how it would look on the big screen, and it would be a bite-your-nails scene. there were only a few mistakes in grammar, etc..., but hey, we're not perfect, and i didn't even notice them until i read it over a second time. i'll bet i and everyone else make mistakes in our stories too. Overall, really cool!
Part 5:
As his foot was only inches away, the goblin studded back, clenching his head in pain. “NO, NO I ALMOST HAD HIM” the goblin yelled. A few seconds later the goblin replied to an invisible person, “as you wish master”. The goblin walked toward peter and lifted him up as the glider rode them away. Holding peter hostage the goblin beat him to a pulp. Peter was very weak, as he had been beaten, had his mind messed with, and been pelted with toxic gas from the pumpkin bombs. Peter lay huddled in a ball on the floor, crying like a baby. A white light surrounded peter as he was drifted into another world; dream like, but to peter it was real. He lay in a coffin as above ground everyone was mourning at his funeral. “NO, NO LET ME OUT IM NOT DEAD. PLEASE AUNT MAY, NO, NO DON’T LEAVE ME HERE PLEASE NO.!” As he repeated those words over and over again, his mind, like his powers were growing weaker and weaker. Peter looked to his side as he saw Uncle Ben. “Come peter, come into the darkness where it is safe.” Peter suddenly realised this wasn’t real. As he struggled to fight back to reality he finally broke free of his delusion. He stared up at the hideous face. “Who are you”. As the goblin took his mask off peter was shocked it can’t be it just can’t be him. “Flash Thomson?!”
part 6 tomorrow
Part 6:
Flash knocked peter into unconsciousness as he dragged him away to the master. A few minutes later flash arrived in front of a man wearing the goblin suit along with a purple cloak. “Master” flash said, “I have him”. “GOOD!” the goblin said with delight. “Leave him there.” Flash did as instructed and left the room. A few hours later peter came to his senses and woke up. “God do you sleep through everything?” the goblin said, “I was like yelling and nothing”. “I have late nights” peter replied. “Flash, you don’t want to do this…”. “FLASH?! You mean flash TOMPSON?” no how would he be me. He is just one of my servants”. “Servants?” peter said, confused. “I gassed the local college with all students still inside. I took them back here and injected them all with the serum. But the serum wasn’t strong enough to make them all like my predecessor and me. But flash on the other hand was strong already. The serum I injected into him just enhanced everything inside him including strength. Heck even brain power. He became crazy, thought of him self as the real deal. I just left him in a dark room. Unbeknownst to me that his insanity will grow deeper every hour. Next I needed money. So I robbed Oscorp and to clear any evidence I destroyed it and spent the cash on building new armour and gliders for my potential servants. Now all is complete I now have 2000 servants and 1 decoy, flash tompson. But he upgraded his armour to have spikes with serum on it. The kind that took out your spider like powers” That’s why my spider-sense didn’t activate peter thought to himself as he thought back to the fight with flash. “Now drink this” the goblin said, handing peter some serum “this will make you invincible” peter took it and under the goblins control, he put the serum to the tip on his lips and began to pour it into his mouth