The Blood Saga!
Here's a story-plot I designed for an X-men comic series I'm writing called 'THE BLOOD SAGA'; it's the first of about 13 issues which features many characters of the Marvel universe.
I'm really sorry if you guys hate my stories, i promise the other 12 issues i wrote are MUCH better.
Let me know what you guys think of 'THE BLOOD SAGA -#1'
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X-Men – The Blood Saga.
Characters: Rouge, Storm, Beast, Ice Man, Nightcrawler, Prophesier X, Cyclops, Charity, Emma Frost, Spider-Man.
The Saga is set after Magneto’s death. The X-men are re-united with their old ally Spider-Man.
Long Time No See.
A New Jersey suburb, old condemned houses have caved in and the streets are rat infested. No one lives here. All looks peaceful. All of a sudden, Spider-Man is flung through a wall by an unknown force. Spidey gets up, bloodied and wounded; the opponent reveals himself to be Rhino, who laughs at the destruction he has caused. He punches Spidey in the face and drops his unconscious body on the floor. He raises his foot to crush Spidey’s skull and finish the job.
Shocker appears in the doorway, he says, “Wait a minute Alex, I wanna waste this guy myself, after all this was all my idea!”
Rhino replies with “What ever, I was getting board kicking the crap out of this guy anyway.” He hands Spidey over to Shocker, who delivers a devastating ‘shock’ to Spidey, who is sent flying about 200 foot into the air. Scorpion enters the room and begins to punch spidey in the face. “Ok, it’s time!” he says. “It’s time we find out who this bozo is!” he begins to lift the mask off his bloody face…
-The X-men’s jet lands outside the building and Beast, Charity, Rouge and Nightcrawler get out and run into the building.
Scorpion: We got company!
Rhino: What the #%$&!
Shocker: It’s the X-people or whatever they’re called; anyway this shouldn’t take long!
The rhino and shocker dive into battle, but Nightcrawler ‘Bamfs’ behind them, and double kicks both of them in the back of the skull. Rouge punches rhino in the face and flies up into the sky with rhino, she looks as if she’s going to low blow him, they fly out of site; all you hear is “Aaarrggh!! MY NUTS!” Rouge then drops Rhino to the floor. Charity uses her powers to render Shocker unconscious, Beast then places ‘electric strait jackets’ on the two of them. Scorpion gets up; he hasn’t had time to unmask spidey, he knocks into Rouge and punches Charity. “Oh that’s it, pick on women!” Beast and Scorpion have a deadly battle, Beast begins to loose; Nightcrawler intervenes and knocks Scorpion out with a thrust kick.
They place a ‘jacket’ on Scorpion. It becomes apparent that the destruction Rhino caused to the nearby buildings with his battle with Spidey reached the national news, causing the X-men to come to Spidey’s aid.
They take Spidey to the Mansion, where he thanks everyone for saving him; he flirts with Rouge, to Gambit’s disapproval. He also has a cryptic meeting with Xavier, who reveals that Juggernaught (Cain Marko) is the brother of Man Mountain Marko and Flint Marko (Sandman), and that Tom Baker was actually Sandman’s alias.
Cyclops offers Spidey a place in the X-men. Spidey declines. Spidey and Ice Man get talking and it is obvious that they are very good friends. Spidey battles a simulation of the Blob in the danger room.
Shocker, Rhino and Scorpion are kept in special cells for rehabilitation. 2 weeks pass and Spidey has gone back to living with MJ in New York.
Beast is on his computer, all of a sudden an E-mail arrives. He reads it. It is from Forge. Beast then reflects on his past and all of his adventures and mutations. Another E-mail arrives.
Beast: Well, he replied quickly.
But this E-mail isn’t from a friend, it’s from Pyro!
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So; how good is part one of my story?
I know there's no script yet but I'm working on other projects.
I assure everyone that it all unravels into an amazing plot!!
Let me know what you think! ( please be gentile )