Well, I tried again...and it worked. There's a space in my password- who knew?
I'm now up- but I didn't know at first how to put it in order. Nataku, could you fix that, if possible? Thanks for giving me a place to post it.
Folks, please read AND review. Please read the Writer's Comments before reviewing, so you know my concerns. I'm gratified when someone will take the time to read...but it's reviews that are valuable. They help me figure out what readers like and hate, and what works in a story.
Promiscuous the past few days have been. I see that my previous perception of your charater was inaccurate, Red. I have been vastly disconcerted by the last posts of yours.
A friend and I have been planning to start a company, we are deciding on a comic or flash anime as our first project. I am requesting the aid of sensible members here, of what we could persue, and what non-fad, uncopywritten plot/story we should take. I don't have any timeframe I can post, but I would appreciate thoughts of our pilot, once it has been revealed. Here is a teaser http://www.freewebs.com/night/
I will do my best at getting that "underwieght symbiote" ready for display.
Originally posted by Koto K
Research question for the ladies- I got an E-mail the other day posing a very interesting question, one which I wasn't qualified to answer. The sender was essentially talking about my fanfics, and asked what it was about the symbiote that girls seem to like? And so I got curious. Being a man, I only know why I like girl's in symbiotes. So what is it about a symbiote that is so appealing to some of youse?Your answers will help me for future She-Venom fics, as it'll give me a little bit more insight into the female psyche I'm sure.
I just typed out a long response to this & it got nuked. 🙁
I was going to post this on Nataku's board in response to Fever'a fic, but I'm not a member, and registration is "not allowed." Soooo....
First, I am glad to see someone else writing fics that do not feature heavy action, because mine usually dont & I was feeling like the Lone Ranger. I'm looking to evoke intense visual and tactile sensation with what I write, not necessaily have 20 huge fist-fights and here's somebody else doing that and doing it well. Validation!
Second, Fever writes Carnage's dialog so well and gets into his head so perfectly, I am scared to try it myself because I know I will not be that good. EXCELLENT.
Many times while reading fics I encounter literally horrible dialog. NOT HERE. It is never cheesy, never corny. Never stupid or out of character. GOOD WORK FEVER! PLease post more ASAP and forgive any mis-spells here because I'm typing lying down and that is a total ***** let me tell you what! [back problems, those not in the know.]
Oh, but that story's over... Seriously, that last line was intended to be the end. Not much of a knock-out, is it?
__Speaking of your writing style (which I love) I want more of that Brock/Patricia fic, and I know you have more, so quit holding out.
__I know you'd do a good Kasady. I think you'd be suprised how he comes to life INSIDE you- it's actually a bit inconvenient. Compassionate healer by day, symbiotic serial killer by night. This is your brain on fan-fic. Sometimes you find yourself less yourself than you'd like to be!
__Typo-away all you want, you'll still be legible. I can read Fox, you know.
__I'm planning to revisit an incomplete short story and maybe work a bit on the Big Mess- or there's 2 new plot bunnies on my ass. I could try to kill those off.
I am 3/4 done with Brock and Patricia, but the events of the past 2 and a half weeks have kept me very much out of action. I wasn't in the mood for it, I was in too much agony. I will try to get that done as soon as I can sit upright for longer than 30 seconds again. Still convalescing. I think i am gonna have to switch majors - REALLY UNHAPPY about it. VERY.
I guess your fic was so good I didn't want it to end. 😈 Its fine the way it is, I wish I had time to draw these plotlines out and make unofficial cmics out of them. Think how lovely that fic would look drawn up.
where would this patricia brock fic be
Also i have found one of the funniest cassidy brock lines ever written
Lay low? Bah! Let’s trash up the place right here and right now!”
“No.”
“Killjoy Venom is here to wreck the day yet again.”
“Fine, fine, fine maybe a little fun isn’t out of the question. But first, we need to make a stop. We have the biggest craving for-“
“Brains!” Cassidy said with excited eyes. Brock simply shook his head.
“No,” there was pause as the disguised symbiote smiled.
“We want a slurpie.” There was yet another awkward pause. A younger Cassidy slowly nodded.
“Um, you know what? That sounds really good right now. Hah, becoming a teenager again has brought the craving back. Too cool.” Cassidy laughed in amazement. They both began to walk off in search for a convenient store.
“Yes, becoming a teenager has opened our mind again as well. Tell us, do you notice how as you get older you never actually ‘go’ specifically to a convenient store for a slurpie?” Eddie asked actually seeming serious.
“So true dad! I mean it’s always, I’m getting some gas, ‘OH let’s get a slurpie!’, or I’m buying some Spam, ‘Oh let’s get a slushy! It’s always an after thought.’”
“That’s what we’re saying! You’ve noticed that too?”
“Of course! Ah, what we ‘grown ups’ were missing out on. You know-” The ‘random’ conversation stopped as Eddie and Cassidy’s attention was taken by a couple of screaming kids.
Where did you get that one grey fox? I don't recall having read that one before, but that might just be because I haven't had any coffee yet this morning.
Fever! Why didn't you tell me you wrote so good, girl!? Your fic is very well done. You've got a serious handle on the written word. The pace is quite good in your fics, and your dialogue is very believable. And you know your characters as well, which is great to see in a fanfic writer. I've seen too many fics in the past where the writers obviously didn't know enough about the character's personality, and they wrote them so out of character it was dispicable.
I can't really say I found any faults in your work, Fever, and believe me, I looked. In any work, I always try to find fault in it, just so I can make the writer aware of it, not to put them down, but so they can correct it and in doing so, become better writers. The only thing I can really even think of is just the format makes it seem a little disorganized, but that may simply be because of the doc-to-html translation.
Let me know what your E-mail is fever. Maybe we can work on something together in the future if you'd be interested.