The Official Symbiote Thread

Originally posted by scibott
Fox everyone complains about your spelling because your are not following what was found in the research.
F_doomed, I [B]AM the only one that is allowed to use the Tomcat smilie. My anger and/or wrath has yet to be seen by any person on these forms. I assure you, it is not something seen often, anywhere. Believe me, this is no where near angry. Now, I have said quit using the online 'haxor' crap (i.e. wat, plz, teh, switching ng to gn, and the like). That is not pleasant, if you wan't people to listen to you make your posts gentle on our eyes and brains. This is the final time I mention this.
If anyone still would like to misspell, use the findings of the research! [/B]

And I Got something to Say to Grey Fox first u arent STAN THE MAN LEE
But UR COOL-ISH yeah the fan-fic on lesslie or Donna not getting killed would be droolio

well as veiwtiful joe woudl say LETS GET IT ON

venoms pov

i cant belvie thsi thsi suit is amazign it's speakign into my mindi can hearit's vocie or to bem roe precise a hiss you are a fake njo oen imitaztes me preparwe to die we say without meanign to

die do i really want to kill her yes the suti say's to me she tried ot steal our peter away form us she deserves to die yes i sya back to the symbyote in my mind they will die both of them carnage and it's host

but we think for a breif moment abotu hwo we met my other and i

i had simpyl been called by eddie he had told me to meeth i mat hsi palce it seemd he knew soemthgi nabout peter i had goen over ot hsi apartment and he had suddenyl dropepd ot the lfoor and the suit attatched ot us creatign a new entity no logner the suit or mary jane we are she venom i chuckle sudenyl causing a look of great fear on both petyers and canrages face

shut up screams carnage at us she then jumped at us and wrapepd her hands aroudn our throat now i will watch die catrnage said and then she whispers itno our ear ill take him all for myself that does it we snap the mask of the suit puls away allowouign her ot see our real face anger showe clearly beofre carnage responded wiht if it's maskless you want maskless youll get she siad as her mask pulled awya revleaign hte faceof .... her the women who tried takig naway our peter once before she will pay dearly

peters pov

oh my god i cant belvie thsi mary jane is venom and nwo she's ofghtign gwen oh no nononono will my life as psiderman always ruin thigns a small vocie in the bakc of mym ind sa y's think of what i ocudl do with two girlfreidns i dissmiss that thougth instantaniously now i woudl have ot watch the women i love ifght ot death

sci bot will hopefully spellcheck thsi ofrm e

ok now for leslie

the stars shone slightyl in the night they also flicker off of a closed skylight in a abondeend chemical factory a nosie echoed aroudn the whoel factory it was a vocie the vocie soudned as if it was sad and happy at the same tiem it also osudned liek two people speakign in synchrinosation "who is that pretty girl in the mirror there who can that pretty girl be" the vocie sang "such a pretty face such a pretty smiel such a pretty me" the saong ended the nosie reverbiatign a few tiems before endign up back where it statted

in a torn up washroom a women stood there the women though lookedl iek a monster her skin was a mixture of light and dark purple her hair was also the same couelr and quite long ending inches away from her butt, where her eyes should be were large white marks and her mouth was full of razor sharp teeth her figners ended with razor sharp claws but currentyl those claws were digging itno a sink she looekd into the mirror for a few seconds as the face actually receded it pulled itself away liek a liquid little traisl of it slippign away form her face seepign into her pores she palced oen of the claws on her face "what am i doign here in the middle of an abandoned factory in the middle of nowhere" the liquid skin cotninued with all of the purpel skin until all that was left was a young woemn in her early twenties at latest she looekd perfectly human nothign in the lsightest to differentiate her form a crowd

(read on in part two sorry about the spellign mistakes )

PART 2

the womens logn black hair shook slightyl at a sudden wind but the women herself didn't notice she wore simple blue jeans white sneakers and a red and black striped tank top i was goign to do somethgin with my life shem uttered runnign her hand through her ebony locks help peopel she then continued what am i allowign this living costuem ot turn me into she said she looekd odwn at a newspaper she had bougth recentyl it had a large picture of her as her 'other self' the itle itslef read in large black letters SHREIK HERO OR MENACE ? she thought about why the media woudl call her a hero on oen hand she did stop donna goign too far unlike the others she didn't want to kill anyone but she was in leuge with the lfie foundation symbyotes so that did even the scales a thoguth suddenyl entered her mind the widn whipped up agin her hair wavign a little bit but the women was still lsot in her thoughts am i goign to turn out luiek brock she said her eyes widenign sligthyl

a shadow moved behind the women it held a dagger in it's left hand that hyummed slightyl it raised the dagger reasdy to strike when it's target whirled around the purpel skin of the symbyote coverign heri n secodns

the women couldn't make out who this shadowy figure was but soemhow it's symbyote informed her of danger her amr shoto ut and grabbed the shadoyfigures left hand and twisted it making the shadowy figure drop it's weapon godammit said the shadow figure rubbing it's arm the shadowy figure then steppedo uto f the shadows

well hello leslie the figure said it's voice soft

no said leslie backign away the symbyote revealign her face

(sorry for bad spelling wait for part 3)

Originally posted by badsymbiote
KIEKAN!!!!

Your last response ALMOST gave me goosebumps. You bad*ss, you! Your knowledge makes you damn-near scary to even me. And I like that very much. 😉

-bows- Why thank you. As for the me knowledge.... yeah, I tend to scare myself sometimes. Thats what reading just about everything there is on the Symbiotes does to ya, lol.

Originally posted by F_doomed
yeah the fan-fic on lesslie or Donna not getting killed would be droolio

Donna never dies.... She just kinda dissapears after 'Venom: Tooth and Claw' (Guest staring Wolverine! lol). Though, it seems she did manage to get her Symbiote under control, whether it was through her own doing or because the Sym had finally matured is unkown, though.

I've always wondered what would happen if Donna ever met up with Hybrid, and how their Symbiotes would react, seeing as they are all from the same group (for those who don't know, Hybrid is comprised of the four Symbiotes from the Life Foundation. They merged into one entity and bonded with Scott Washington, one of the Life Foundation's Guards.).

Cripes Fox, if you're sorry about the poor spelling then USE THE FREAKIN' SPELL CHECK!!!!! It's there for a reason. Your posts are making my eyes bleed, and go unread because of that.

womp womp.

Well, Fox, I enjoyed your writing. I enjoyed the way your Leslie story begins by recounting the comic canon, becuase it was interesting to me how the scene ambience is more fully expressed by your descriptions than it was by the images- your good writing showed up the rather un-inspired art in that comic.
A tip for you- write first in Microsoft Word, spell-check, make revisions, then copy the text onto your clipboard, and paste it into your posts. This way you will have plenty of time and won't lose your internet connection futzing with spell-check.
A suggestion for your She-Carnage story. I think perhaps, instead of revealing who She-Venom was in your narration, you could have let the action show us. When She-Venom retracted her mask, THEN we could have discovered she was MJ. This would have been a little "jolt" in the story.
It's very entertaining, and I'm impressed that you managed to fit both your dream syms into one story, but I suppose I should have seen it coming... LOL, good job, good fun.

Yeah and perhaps to make it more....um... Intresting,yeah Thats good Intresting include pics perhaps of the bonding process and sHE-venom mj and She-Carnage Gwen
Also MANE
I like ur new sig more then the connnan
Good chocie
fever what happened to ur sig i liked it oh well

yah good work(somewhat) fox

Originally posted by grey fox
SciBott will hopefully spell-check this for me.

- Venom's P.O.V. -

I can't beleive this! This suit is amazing! It's speaking into my mind, I can hear it's voice or to be more precise a hiss. "You are a fake no one imitaztes me prepare to die!" We say without meanign to.

"Die? Do I really want to kill her? Yes the suit says to me. She tried to steal our Peter away form us! She deserves to die! Yes... I say back to the symbyote in my mind. They will die, both of them Carnage and it's host.

But we think for a breif moment about who we met, my other and I.

I had simply been called by Eddie. He had told me to meet him at his place. It seemd he knew something about Peter. I had gone over there, and he had suddenly dropped to the floor, and the suit attatched to me, creating a new entity. No longer the suit or Mary Jane. We are She-Venom! I chuckle sudenly causing a look of great fear on both Peter's and Carnage's faces.

"Shut up!" Screams Carnage. She then jumped at us, and wrapped her hands around our throat.

"Now I will watch you die!" Carnage said. She then whispers into our ear, "I'll take him all for myself." That does it! We snap the mask of the suit away allowing her to see our real face, anger showing clearly before Carnage responded.

"If it's maskless you want, maskless you'll get!" She siad as her mask pulled away revealing the face of... Her!? The woman who tried taking away our Peter once before? She will pay dearly!

- Peter's P.O.V. -

Oh my God, I cant beleive this! Mary Jane is Venom, and now she's fighting Gwen? Oh no! No no no no! Will my life as Spider-Man always ruin things? A small voice in the back of my mind says. Think of what I could do with two girlfriends. I dismiss that thought instantaniously. Now I have to watch the two women I love fight to the death.

its two short i think Fox perhaps add more of a stroy line to it mabye some pics why eddie called Mj how did gwen get the symbiote mabye some one should write a fan fic in which peter gets the hybrid symbiote Mj gets donnas or the Yellow who ever and Gwen gets Carnage that would be hot mabye have some one.... get venom mabye ben Rielly or wey better idea Gwen gets venom And the fight spider-Carnage

I just found Something WEIRD
[Img]http://www.genesiscollective.com/Genesis/BoxScans/Spiderman%20-%20Venom%20-%20Separation%20Anxiety%20(BS).jpg[img]

That game is awesome! One of the best Sega games ever (though, I like the SNES version better, lol). It's got the only animated versions of the Life Foundation Syms I know of.

too confusing and ifb you werent so newbish you would know about the earlier chapter

Originally posted by grey fox
too confusing and ifb you werent so newbish you would know about the earlier chapter

Originally posted by grey fox
too confusing and ifb you werent so newbish you would know about the earlier chapter

seperation anxiety sucked so bad as a game. it had terrible colision detection, had basic flavor plot added at the beggining, and thats it. it had pointless bosses and even used the same thug sprites from maximum carnage.

also, grey fox, im just sad you wont spell check, it truly lowers your writing ability. makes you seem redundant.

also, your stories need a tad more work. their not really all that refined.

Alright, dual posting is dropping yourself below that of a newbie, congratulations you have become an infant. Go read the earlier chapters that Fox posted. This will be your final warning of posting something of alliteration, as well as uneducated. Target: F_doomed
I own that exact game, it and Maxmum Carnage are the best games for the Genesis.
Fox you may want to post the ones I sent to you privately now.
I am Grey Fox's editor, for the record. He needs only to post what the basic story is, I handle the rest.

PART 2

The stars shone slightly off the relection of a closed skylight. In an abondond chemical plant, a noise echoed around the building it was a voice. The voice sounding as if it was sad and happy at the same time, as well as two people speaking in synchronization.

"Who is that pretty girl in the mirror? Who can that pretty girl be?" The vocie sang. "Such a pretty face. Such a pretty smile. Such a pretty me." The song ended the nosie reverberating a few times before ending up back where it started.

In a run down washroom a woman stood before a mirror. The woman though, looked like a monster her skin was a mixture of light and dark violet*. Her hair was also the same color, and quite long, ending inches away from her butt. Where her eyes should be were large white marks. Her mouth, full of razor sharp teeth. Her figners ended with claws, currently digging into a sink. She looked into the mirror for a few seconds, as the face actually receeded. Pulling itself away in liquid like trails of itself, slipping away from her face, seeping into pores. She touched one clawed hand on her face.

"what am I doing here, in the middle of an abandoned plant, in the middle of nowhere?" The liquid cotninuing until, all that was left was a young woman, in her early twenties at latest. She looekd perfectly human nothing in the slightest to differentiate her from a crowd.

The woman's long black hair shook slightly at a sudden wind. The woman herself didn't notice. She wore simple blue jeans, white sneakers, and a red and black striped tank top. "I was goign to do somethgin with my life," she muttered running her hand through her ebony locks. "Help people," she continued, "what am I allowing this living costume to turn me into?" She asked. She looked down at the newspaper she bought recently. It had a large picture of her as her 'other self' the title itslef read in large black letters "SHREIK HERO OR MENACE?" She thought about why the media would call her a hero. "On one hand i did stop Donna from going too far, unlike the others. I didn't want to kill anyone. But I am in liege with the Life Foundation Symbiotes, so that does even the scales. A thought suddenly entered her mind. The wind whipped up again, her hair sailing a little. But, the woman was still lost in her thoughts. "Am I going to turn out like Brock?" She asked her eyes widening sligthly.

A shadow moved behind the woman. Holding a dagger in it's left hand that hummed slightly. It raised the dagger ready to strike, when it's target whirled around the purpel skin of the symbyote coverign her in seconds.

The woman couldn't make out who this shadowy figure was, but somehow it's symbiote informed her of danger. Her arm shot up and grabbed the shadowy figure's left hand and twisted it making the shadowy figure drop it's weapon.

"God dammit!" Said the figure rubbing it's arm as it stepped into the light. "Well, hello Leslie." The figure greeted, it's voice soft.

"No!" Gasped Leslie backing away the symbiote revealing her face.

OK, you guys. Now THIS is a good idea.

Witness the beauty of perfect mastery of the English language. Perfectly spelled words, descriptive adjectives, and proper punctuation make this effortless and surprisingly delightful to read(but I'm sure that very familiar storyline and dialogue help a little).