Originally posted by Mane
NEWS ALERT!!!!in less than 48 hours, my name will be changed from "Mane" to "Sarsaparilla". why? because Sarsaparilla is the greatest drink ever.
Alright, but Nataku is right. This new name opens you up to a number of different insulting possibilities--some of them very likely but harmless like calling you sassafrass or Saskatchewan or Saskatoon--some of them meanerlike the--nevermind, I don't wanna give anyone any ideas. It will take some getting used.
Too bad it's not just "root beer", though, because the best root beers in the world are Thomas Kemper's, A&W, and Buck and Opie's Old-fashioned rootbeer. Any one of those are good names, too.
I was gonna try to convey all this using only smilies, but I lacked enough creativity. I'm sure it could be done, though.
(an evil demon arrives causign weirs stuff to happen on this thread welcome to one more with feeling)
bad symbiote : Every single night the same arrangement
I go out and fight the fight
Still, I always feel the strangest estrangement
Nothing here is real,
Nothing here is right
I've been making shows of trading blows
Just hoping no one knows
That I've been
Going through the motions
Walking through the part
Nothing seems to penetrate my heart
I was always brave and kind of righteous
Now I find I'm wavering
Crawl out of your grave you'll find this fight
Just doesn't mean a thing
vamp: She ain't got that swing
bad symbiote : Thanks for noticing
vamps and demon: She does pretty well with fiends from hell
But lately, we can tell
That she's just
Going through the motions
Faking it somehow
She's not even half the girl she...
ow (holds sword embedded in chest)
bad symbiote : Will I stay this way forever?
Sleepwalk through my life's endeavour
How can I repay you?
Whatever
I don't want to be
Going through the motions
Losing all my drive
I can't even see
If this is really me
And I just wanna be
Alive
koto k : I've got a theory
That it's a demon
A dancing demon
No, something isn't right there.
fever red : I've got a theory
Some kid is dreaming
And we're all stuck inside
His wacky Broadway nightmare
robo: I've got a theory we should work this out
All: It's getting eerie
What's this cheery
Singing all about?
robo: It could be witches
Some evil witches,
Which is ridiculous
'Cause witches,
They were persecuted
Wicca good
And love the earth
And women power,
And I'll be over here
symbiotica : I've got a theory
It could be bunnies
[crickets chirp]
fever red :I've got a--
symbiotica : Bunnies aren't just cute like everybody supposes
They got them hoppy legs and twitchy little noses
And what's with all the carrots?
What do they need such good eyesight for anyway?
Bunnies, bunnies
It must be bunnies
maybe midgets?
all :I've got a theory,
We should work this fast
G&W: Because it clearly
Could get serious
Before it's passed
bad symbiote :I've got a theory
It doesn't matter
What can't we face if we're together?
What's in this place that we can't weather?
Apocalypse
We've all been there
The same old trips
Why should we care?
All: What can't we do if we get in it?
We'll work it through within a minute
We have to try
We'll pay the price
It's do or die
Hey, I've died twice
All: What can't we face
What can't we face?
If we're together?
What's in this place
That we can't weather?
We're together
There's nothing we can't face
Except for bunnies
Well. I have to say that I liked that. Very nice, fox.
It represents a good amount of observation and objectivity to identify the characteristics and have the confidence to write such prose knowing that our individual parts are supposed to echo or mirror our own unique attitudes and natures.
Grammaticlly perfect, and typed just as well, this was effortless to read.
Looks like you're really absorbing all of Koto, Symbiotica and Red's advice. Anything that's well-written just rolls off the tongue, which is how I read(I don't know how everyone else does)--with inflected tones as if I were reading it all aloud.
But, I think you make me sound kinda sad and emotionally detached--I cry during Pokemon--bet you didn't know that, did you? If I just watch any of my kids for too long, I'll tear up, just becoming overwhelmed by their beauty and sweetness. I love my life. I am NEVER bored because I can always occupy and entertain myself (and anyone else), and I love being by myself, but scarcely get the chance.
"...I'm gonna kill you for not updating it."
Haha... yes it's been a long time since I've updated the story. I'm almost through with part #4, too.
I've mainly been working on my "Being Rene' Deladier" story that I'm gonna put up on Superstories pretty soon. (For anyone out there that doesn't know who the Marvel comic villainess Ecstasy is, I suggest you go check her out... she's kind of a French Drug Czarina meets Mystical She-Venom character.)
I'm also working on a few stories that feature the Riot and Scream symbiotes that should be done fairly soon. Keep an eye out for them.
Also to the guy that posted WAYYY back at the beginning of this thread that HE was the writer of "Bereft of Peter".... are you who I think you are? Just remember who tossed the idea at you if you are, bud...