The Future

Started by hotsauce65482 pages

uberhot... he he he.... anyway, you should write the rest, im gonna read it

ill try to soon. thanks for the responses!!

I agree with hotsauce! I had an idea for this sort of thing, but I started in the year 3000, which is where your's looks like it may start. And their were colonies on mars and the moon and other various places along with aliens coming and the resources on Earth were all just about used up. Mine would concentrate more on the religious aspect how has religion changed in 1000 years! Actually i think my idea's kind of neat, its actually based on the Egyptian god system. As well as mostly everything having an Egyptian feel to it, seeing as how moons and Mars aren't exactly flooded with water... so there ya go.

Dude, I'm still waiting for the rest of the story!

hey guys i looked back over this story.. finally... haha and i noticed a lotta things wrong so once i get back on track im gonna try and fix them or start over if i have to. well ill try and post things as soon as i can. sorry for the long wait! peace out.

Ok, to start, I'm gonna start over... kinda. First of all, Im gonna write the story by highlighting various time periods of this "Future" and writing about those for a while. No telling how long this will go on for. Second, I'm gonna start over... kinda. A lot of ideas, like the actual year in Moon years, Martian years, and Earth years, well, I'm not gonna go crazy on. It's too tedious. Third, the basic ideas, destruction of Earth's atmostphere, colonization of planets (but maybe not Mercury 🙂 ), and all the wars I will keep, because its good stuff. Look for the beginning of the story real soon!

OK, here we go. Here is the first OFFICIAL post of The Future...

The sun had begun to creep above the horizon, it's large orange shape was growing increasingly higher above the trees. It's light reflected off a metallic looking building known as the CTI, or the Center for Terrorism Intelligence. The light from the sun also reflected off of another object made of metal, traveling down the isolated highway towrd this building. It was a car, a 2006 Toyota Camry to be exact. This car pulled into the small parking lot in front of the building. A medium sized man with long, dirty blonde hair and a good build walked out of the parked car and into the building.
First, here's some background info. The year is 2007. Not much has changed since 2005. George W. Bush is still President, although Vice President Dick Cheney fell ill with a fatal stroke in March of 2006, and died a few days later. Osama bin Laden has been caught, finally!! On September 27, 2006, soldiers in Afganistan pulled into a small town, and they observed a man whom they knew to be offiliated with Osama. They immediatly arrested the man, and he gave away the secret location to Osama's hideout. The man vanished from custody and is presumed dead. Osama is currently facing trials in the USA.
Scientists have developed a vaccine for AIDS, which kills off the old and new strains of the virus. However, there was a HUGE SARS breakout in 2007. The global outbreak killed approximately 25,000,000 people in all 7 continents. The outbreak was eventually contained with breakthroughs in medicines and the discovery of the host animal.
Now, in late 2007, the man who steped out of his car carries with him the most important file report that the world has ever seen. It contains the exact time and date of a planned terrorist bombing in the middle of Kansas. The bomb is an advanced form of a hydrogen bomb, manufactured in the USA and sold to terrorits by a scientist named E. Terry Mutz.
This man, named Adam Hollitzer, carried the report down a marble hallway and knocked on a wooden door labeled: "Luitenant General Marshall D. Briggs".
The door opens and Adam comes face to face with an masked, armed gunman. General Briggs is behind him on the desk, and he's dead...

That's all I got for now. Look for even more later!

And so it begins...

Lol. Good start. The only thing I can say is watch out for your tense. You went from past to present in the actual story. Also look out for grammatical errors, although I didn't see many.

Like I said, good. Keep going.

yea, i have a big problem with tense, so im probly gonna start over differently. look for more later, and thanks for the advice

OK, this is it. I am now officially starting The Future right here. Ignore the last post that I made, it was kinda random. The story starts in 2040, and scientists have just finished colonizing about 1/4 of the Moon. There is a lot of war on the Earth. The Israeli-Palestinian War sprouted into WWIII, btu other wars are being fought too. Japan and China have been locked in war since 2027, and Russia is in deadly nuclear was with the U.S. once again. All in all, the future global war situation is dismal and bleak. The story begins at the CIA Building, downtown Chicago, where a planned mass-bomb dropping is supposedly supposed to take place sometime within the end of the year 2040. The Future will not be a continuous story, it will most likely jump around the time-line. The main character of this "Chapter" is Ross Duncan, top CIA agent investigating the bomb threats. His superior is Gen. E.W. Newman, who disagrees with the threats. The President is currently Jimmy Terris, and this is his first term. There is no longer a vice President in America, and there is only one body of Congress. The Constitution has been revised at the Continental Convention of 2030. Don Ruckingburd, top NASA engineer/ astrounaut is heading the project of Moon colonization, Project "Silver Horizon". So far, things have proceeded smoothly, with only 6 deaths since the project began in 2015...

The first part will come tomorow...