Harry Potter -- Last Line!

Started by tigress12 pages

Originally posted by big gay kirk
"Bastard!" exclaimed Harry, "it was only a dream." Outside the dawn's silence was broken by the sound of Uncle Vernon'scar....
😆 love it.

Originally posted by hotsauce6548
(I heard this rumor. It's a rumored ending. Similar to Air Angel. It's a little dark, and I may have gotten a little carried away... )

Harry dropped to his knees, wand clutched dearly in his hand. He had just killed the Dark Lord. Just taken a life. Just became a murderer.

He knew it had to be done, but now that he had accomplished it, he felt as though nothing were real. Voldemort was gone. He was dead.

Harry's mind was numb as he stared at the cold hard floor. Soon his body gave up against the strain to keep awake. The next moment Harry fell to the floor, unconscious.

The next morning, Harry awoke, but he did not open his eyes. The memories of the night before came flooding through his mind, tightening his stomach sickeningly. It would be a while before the relief came. The joy that the Dark Lord was gone forever.

No, that would take time.

Now he heard voices. Whispers, just barely able to make out.

"I think he's awake, Mum."

"Be quiet."

"But look, he's stirring."

At last Harry opened his eyes, which adjusted to the dim light of the now recognizable hospital wing.

"He's awake. Look, he's awake!" came an anxious whisper, somewhere to Harry's left.

"Shhhhh!!!" This time a scolding tone was used. "Don't talk to him. He'll need his sleep."

Harry tried to move his lips. Tried to say he was fine, but that would have been a lie. He wasn't fine. He had murdered somebody the night before.

Finally, with a huge struggle, Harry managed to mumble, "Wha... happen..."

"It's okay, Harry dear. Everything's fine," said a calm soothing voice.

Lie. That was a lie. Everything would not be okay.

"Harry, he's gone. Voldemort is dead," said another voice, which Harry recognized as Ron.

Voldemort. That hateful, dreadful name. Yet once again, the sickening sensation in Harry's stomach grew. At once, he leaned over the bed and vomited.

One more voice spoke to Harry calmly, although he could detect signs of recent sobbing in it. "Harry, it's all over. He's gone. It's all over." It was Hermione. She repeated the last sentence rather weakly.

Harry nodded solemnly, shutting his eyes once more. What he would not give to be somebody else. Somewhere else. Anything would have been better than his situation now.

"Wait, Harry. Where'd it go?" Ron burst out suddenly. His voice sounded rushed, almost urgent.

He then heard somebody gasp. What was wrong?

"Harry, wh--where's your scar?"

great last page hun and most probable to 😎

"and as Harry gazed at himself in the mirror, his tearfilled eyes widened in amazement, for upon his forehead between his locks of hair, there was no scar."

This is the one from JKR's mugglenet chat transcript and it seems kinda real. 😄

Harry looked down at the lifeless body, He was a murderer. He has been assured by everyone that murder was the right thing to do, but what would they say if they could see him now?. He had taken a life, no matter how repulsive a life it was. "It had to be done" came a high voice, almost like a drawn breath. "He was a threat"

"Yes" sighed harry, he turned away and looked up into the snakelike eyes of voldemort, who winked. Harry and voldemort walked away, but harry couldnt resist one last look at the dead body of his old headmaster.

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Something that I'm thinking though.... Didn't JK say somewhere that there wouldn't be any need for any more books after the 7th? I love all these endings, especially hotsauces, because it seems like something that would def. happen. But I feel like it still leaves us wondering what will happen to them afterwards.... or is that just me? Like what each of them does after school... and whether ron and hermione get together 😍. But I think these are great, so keep them coming!!!!!

very true but i think if she did make ne more afat 7 it would be dragging it to far

agreed 😊

*keep the endings coming* 😄

Originally posted by Darth Sauron
Harry looked down at the lifeless body, He was a murderer. He has been assured by everyone that murder was the right thing to do, but what would they say if they could see him now?. He had taken a life, no matter how repulsive a life it was. "It had to be done" came a high voice, almost like a drawn breath. "He was a threat"

"Yes" sighed harry, he turned away and looked up into the snakelike eyes of voldemort, who winked. Harry and voldemort walked away, but harry couldnt resist one last look at the dead body of his old headmaster.

😑 Where's the word 'Scar'? !!

he was being funny........

Originally posted by Darth Sauron
Harry looked down at the lifeless body, He was a murderer. He has been assured by everyone that murder was the right thing to do, but what would they say if they could see him now?. He had taken a life, no matter how repulsive a life it was. "It had to be done" came a high voice, almost like a drawn breath. "He was a threat"

"Yes" sighed harry, he turned away and looked up into the snakelike eyes of voldemort, who winked. Harry and voldemort walked away, but harry couldnt resist one last look at the dead body of his old headmaster. Who had a peculiar scar.

happy?

HA! That's really good. I hope JK uses that one.... 😛

Lol! 😄

😂 I love how you can be such a brilliant and serious story teller, and yet still be unintentionally funny. lol. I'm your first and biggest fan Darth Sauron! Please write some more! hehe.

BTW, I like the part where it said "but now wasnt the time to worry if that was the reason all the weasleys looked the same," followed by the "Voldemort was gone." ---THAT REALLY, TOTALLY CRACKED ME UP. LOL! 😆

Originally posted by Darth Sauron
"Blimey" said Ron, "who would have thought subjecting Lord Voldemort to numerous vewings of the lion king would ultimately defeat him"

"yes" replied hermione quite irritated by rons apparent obsession with her "stop touching my leg ron, i told you about that, im with lucious now, and your with ginny"

Harry still coulnt believe ron was dating his own sister, but now wasnt the time to worry if that was the reason all the weasleys looked the same, voldemort was gone, He looked up and smiled "well, i dont think he could handle just how evil that one lion was...what was his name?"

Rom looked up, still clearly hurt by what Hermione had said, and wondering if ginny was the one for him said "Oh, i think it was.....Scar"

"Thats right" said harry "scar"

Last line:

*As they were riding back with Hogwarts Express, the memories started to flow as a river; Harry was standing in front of Voldermort, furiuse about the death of Dumbleldore... the sparks, the jets of green lights... the dead bodies of Voldermort and Harry..as if they couldn't live without eachother and they had to die together*

cho was crying, she couldn't keep her tears from falling she was blaming her self. A first year entered the compound, looked curiously at her, he must have though "why would a seven year cry when she just finished school", because he asked her: " Why are you crying for?". then cho replied: "about the boy with a scar"

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Originally posted by Darth Sauron
Harry looked down at the lifeless body, He was a murderer. He has been assured by everyone that murder was the right thing to do, but what would they say if they could see him now?. He had taken a life, no matter how repulsive a life it was. "It had to be done" came a high voice, almost like a drawn breath. "He was a threat"

"Yes" sighed harry, he turned away and looked up into the snakelike eyes of voldemort, who winked. Harry and voldemort walked away, but harry couldnt resist one last look at the dead body of his old headmaster. Who had a very peculiar scar.

😂 i know it's not funny but I cracked up anyway!

And I cracked up at the one with but now wasn't the time to worry if that was the reason all the weasleys looked the same.

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Nice ending Unicor! I'll write another in a few days...once more are posted. 😄