Originally posted by Victor Von Doom
I liked Coldfire's one, but...it's not actually in poetic form. It's more like formatted prose.
I agree, it's really good. It might sound like a back-handed compliment, but I'm actually really surprised she wrote it...
I don't like the last two lines, though. Oh, and Fëanor's made me laugh.
As for the winner; good choice. However, I'm worried the result was affected by him being really, really good-looking. It would be a shame if being aesthetically pleasing somehow influenced the judges vote, but I hope this wasn't the case.
*bows*
Originally posted by Fëanor
I WON!!! I WON!!!! I WON THIRD PLACE!!!!! 😱omg! Ambie Bambie got second! I so proud of ya's! 😊 Krunk! ya gitty bastard ya are!
Originally posted by Victor Von Doom
I liked Coldfire's one, but...it's not actually in poetic form. It's more like formatted prose.
Originally posted by Ya Krunk'd Floo
I agree, it's really good. It might sound like a back-handed compliment, but I'm actually really surprised she wrote it...I don't like the last two lines, though. Oh, and Fëanor's made me laugh.
As for the winner; good choice. However, I'm worried the result was affected by him being really, really good-looking. It would be a shame if being aesthetically pleasing somehow influenced the judges vote, but I hope this wasn't the case.
*bows*
I don't like the last lines either... they're thrown on and all blehh... yeah I'm gonna fix them, just don't know what to as of yet.
Originally posted by Ya Krunk'd Floo
I agree, it's really good. It might sound like a back-handed compliment, but I'm actually really surprised she wrote it...I don't like the last two lines, though. Oh, and Fëanor's made me laugh.
As for the winner; good choice. However, I'm worried the result was affected by him being really, really good-looking. It would be a shame if being aesthetically pleasing somehow influenced the judges vote, but I hope this wasn't the case.
*bows*
I suppose your 'back-handed' compliment could also be perceived as high praise, because of your surprise; perhaps you've realised she's capable of much more than you've given her credit for in the past? 😛
But the judges were blissfully unaware of who submitted which poem, you know. I'll admit, with most of the poems submitted for the last contest it was easier to figure out who wrote them. But not this time. So don't worry yourself, we had no idea 😆
Originally posted by Syren
I suppose your 'back-handed' compliment could also be perceived as high praise, because of your surprise; perhaps you've realised she's capable of much more than you've given her credit for in the past? 😛
Admittedly, I haven't read that much of her recent poetry, but it shows a great leap from the stuff I read before. Good job again, Coldfire.
Originally posted by Syren
But the judges were blissfully unaware of who submitted which poem, you know. I'll admit, with most of the poems submitted for the last contest it was easier to figure out who wrote them. But not this time. So don't worry yourself, we had no idea 😆
Phew. The poetic integrity of KMC's Poetry Corner is intact!
Originally posted by Victor Von Doom
Hmm.I knew which one YKF wrote. I'm sure (I hope) the judges were able to recognise particular styles in that manner as well.
Not this time... as I said, we were sure last time. This time I can say we had an inkling but weren't certain. Not that it matters, at least the judging was completely unbiased, right?
Originally posted by Ya Krunk'd Floo
Admittedly, I haven't read that much of her recent poetry, but it shows a great leap from the stuff I read before. Good job again, Coldfire.Phew. The poetic integrity of KMC's Poetry Corner is intact!
Originally posted by Ou Be Low hoo
From reading your poems, it would appear that you have some self-confidence issues and more than a hint of paranoia...I recommend a weekly dose of physical recreation with your peers to run concurrently with a bit of poetry-related cold turkey...
Originally posted by Victor Von Doom
Well, it's interesting because it suggests you should write prose style instead. Any particular reason you like to write them as 'poems'?