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Originally posted by HockeyHorror
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is that a thumbs up to my song? If it is thanks yo. Thanks to everyone who's liked it.

dude. its amazing. i have finally found someone else on this forum who hates bush. everything in that song i have used somewhere arguing with someone.

Dude, there are many anti-bush people here. You just need to go to the General Discussion Forum and look at the Bush thread. It's a heated debate. 😬

Originally posted by Spicy_Mchaggis
dude. its amazing. i have finally found someone else on this forum who hates bush. everything in that song i have used somewhere arguing with someone.

Thanks yo, i appreciate it.

you guys all hate bush huh well im intrested has anybody heard that demecrats are trying to bring back the draft and kerry does not even plan on pulling out of iraq for another four years after this election in four years we will be electing another president and then kerry could get elected useing the same platform he used in this election

check out this link to read more about it
http://www.house.gov/mcdermott/pr_draft.shtml

also now back to the song what is your goal in music to make music or get your message across ?
i think it should allways be the music first
if you have a message it should be criptic and people would have to work for it
you would get alot more people to hear your view that way. some people would see your song as an anti-bush protest and then pass it over
but if it was not so blatent then they might not pass it up and give the music a chance and then they would hear what you have to say

i was reading through your lyrics again and i also think they controdict them selves

But we'll always be here, the poor, the demorat, the liberal, the left

Destroy the streets, destroy the block, destory the cops, destroy his lock
on this mighty mighty democracy, we got it in our palm, now that we're pressing on
Destroy the state, destroy this place, destroy the presidential race

now you say that you are are the left the democrat and that you have mighty democracy but then you also say to destroy the presidential race
now if we had no race the it would not be a democracy

now with some of your coments you seem anti war and gun but then you say you would rape and impregnat his wife wile shes sleeping
so that he could belive in abortion

i'll tell you one thing i'll democracize your wife's pussy while she's sleeping
make her have my baby then say your the father
make you turn your head around and wish we had abortions now

thats like saying war is wrong but rape and killing unborn babies is ok

i did like this part

Apparently the man who claims to rule us all will wage a war in the name of god
We might as well be ruled by osama who dropped the towers in the name of allah

and this part also was set up well

Police beatings, senseless
Protesters words, worthless
All i know is it got witnessed
Cry'in out, pointless
Sea of blue, endless
when will they start protecting the ones they be fighting
So i'll break myself off, i'll run down this block
i'll purchase no right, to fight for this cause
I'll fight for true freedom, and know what it means
But they'll strip it away from you then from me

Originally posted by loserib
you guys all hate bush huh well im intrested has anybody heard that demecrats are trying to bring back the draft and kerry does not even plan on pulling out of iraq for another four years after this election in four years we will be electing another president and then kerry could get elected useing the same platform he used in this election

check out this link to read more about it
http://www.house.gov/mcdermott/pr_draft.shtml

umm...that's not hte draft. It's mandatory military service for EVERYONE like they have in many other countries. Also, the bill is dead in the water. Not to mention one of the reasons they brought the bill up is to increase public opinion against the current unjustified war in Iraq

Originally posted by loserib
i was reading through your lyrics again and i also think they controdict them selves

now you say that you are are the left the democrat and that you have mighty democracy but then you also say to destroy the presidential race
now if we had no race the it would not be a democracy

now with some of your coments you seem anti war and gun but then you say you would rape and impregnat his wife wile shes sleeping
so that he could belive in abortion

thats like saying war is wrong but rape and killing unborn babies is ok

i did like this part

and this part also was set up well

ok first off i appreciate any critizism, so thanks for critiqueing my song i can definetly make it better....but on the democracy part... said "destory the presidential race" and i meant that figurativly...as in "destory it by voting" don't let it come down to a supreme court decision who wins again....maybe i should change the wording...something like "overtake the presidential race" something along those lines...as for the rest i was trying to be vulgar/explicit....it was meant to show how angry i am at him, so yeah it seems kinda violent at parts, but it's not hypocritical, it's not liek i'd actually rape his wife.

umm...that's not hte draft. It's mandatory military service for EVERYONE like they have in many other countries. Also, the bill is dead in the water. Not to mention one of the reasons they brought the bill up is to increase public opinion against the current unjustified war in Iraq

so to help stop the war they are trying to pass a bill to send more peopple over there and on top of that people who have no want to fight for their country

lets look at it like this lets say someone gets called in for duty that does not support our goverment and then we train them to kill use weapons explosives and other such things then you will have someone who does not support our country that knows alll this deadly shit whats to stop them from becomming a terrorist

Hey, fellas, this is the Music Forum. 😬