Freddy's Return: The New Nightmare

Finally! here's the next bit, sorry it took so long. 🙂

Paige reviewed the information she had just taken in over and over. Her head ached and her brain seemed tight and cranky. Her and the fourteen year-old boy Sean sat in the entertainment room exchanging nightmares and other such useful information. Sean was very helpful. It turned out this dream stalker's name was Freddy Krueger. He was child killer before he died freed on a technicality. But after he died, he became something much, much worse. The un-happy parents of Elm Street tracked him down and found him in one of his old, abondoned boiler room's where he use to take his kids. They through cocktail's set alite through the dusty and grimy windows. Then they watched the rusted hell-hole go up in flames, while hearing the screams of the sick and twisted murderer. But in order to get his revenge Freddy came back in the dreams of teenagers. It was meant to be the children of the parents that killed him, but those little b@stards were all dead now. So to have his fun Freddy just went after any horny, pimple-faced teenager who had too much dream-time on thier hands. "Where'd you learn all of this?" Paige asked.
"I told him." answered a voice. The voice bellonged to another teenage girl around the same age as Paige and Sean. She had long jet-black hair with jade-green eyes. "Paige, this is Jade." Sean introduced them both. Weather Jade's real name was Jade or just a nickname Paige didn't know.

Sorry it's short, more tomorrow!

Okay,look forward to more!

Sorry Slasher, I would have posted it yesterday just my step-mum needed to use the comp right when I was halfway through. But here's the next bit!

Paige was introduced to more of Springwood's troubled teens. There was Sean, Eric, Kyle and Selena, all of which suffered the same terrible dreams. They sat in the corner of the entertainment room exchanging their nightmares. "He killed my brothers and sisters!" piped in Kyle.
"He killed my brother then got me in here by making it look like I tried to commit suicide!" Paige cried in outrage. Darkness soon fell and the patients of Roaming Meadows Institute were all intructed to see the Medicine desk. They all formed a line and were given something one by one. When it was Paige's turn she identified it as a small blue pill with the words 'Hypnocil' etched along the side. "Don't swallow it." Eric whispered from behind. Paige took her small cup of water, stuck the pill in her mouth and gulped it down, making sure the pill stayed in her mouth. She left the line and spat her pill into the bin when no one was looking.

Nobody talked much as the evening progressed. All of Paige's new friends look exhausted. They had explained to her thier theory that those pills were dangerous and also that they couldn't fall asleep or they may not wake up. When it was time for bed Sean issued the words "Whatever you do, don't fall asleep." he said slowly. It was very difficult for the young girl, Paige lay in her nice soft, comfy institute bed sketching on her drawing block. With the artistic talent she had been given, she had drew the old Elm Street house she saw in her nightmares, all boarded up and creepy looking. Her eye lids began to grow extremly heavy, but she tried her best to stay awake. "Mustn't fall asleep..." she whispered to herself peacefully. A playful giggle echoed out in the hallway. Paige bolted up in bed, she entered the hallway and saw right at the very end of it a girl no older then five. She was dressed in her finest white satin party dress. No girls dressed like this anymore, it looked like something out of a photograph. In her little fingertips she carried a bright, round ball. She giggled more and scrambeled from sight. "Wait, little girl!" Paige cried. She sprinted down the halls looking for the strange little girl. It suddenly dawned on her that the hallways had become old and decrepit. She reached and old wooden door with two narrow windows to the side of it. She realised where she was instantly. She spun around and saw the old staircase and the entrance to the living room. Paige was surely in the old Elm Street house. "Hehe...." a soft voice giggled some more from the door to the basement. "It's okay, relax......" Paige told herself as she descended the stairs. She reached the bottom and found the little girl bouncing her ball next to an old, rusty, iron furnace. The old room traced Paige's eyes to a dark hallway, it reminded her of something from a midevil castle. "One, two Freddy's coming for you...." the girl sang. The sound of footsteps sunk through the floor and down to the basement. "Run." the girl instructed. A shadow loomed over the face of the girl, Paige twirled around. "Krueger!" she screamed. But it wasn't the Freddy she knew. He had morphed himself into a great, big, burnt spider. It's drolling fangs ready to pierce Paige's skin. She spun around, the girl was gone. The Freddy-Spider crawled after her, Paige screamed and ran as fast as she could, the scuttiling sound of the spider drawing nearer..........

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Thanks, more probably tonight! but if not then tomorrow.

Here's the next bit!

Paige sprinted bare feet through the neverending tunnel. It was dark, damp and very rocky, but she didn't dare slow down. She could hear Freddy's snarls and all of his eight legs from not far behind. Just when Paige was about to give up hope she reached a small opening in the wall. Without hesitating, the young girl clambered in through the opening. It was very dark and small, but Paige keeped shuffling as far away from the nightmarish-spider as she could. A bubbling sound echoed through the opening, Paige turned and saw the Freddy-spider melting! no, not melting, morphing! his skin bubbled and dripped like candle wax, his legs evaperated and his many eyes gurgled into two narrow eyes with red slits for the pupil. Using his possesive power power, Freddy had turned himself into a gigantic, long, burnt snake. Spikes had erupted from it's blistered back and giant fangs had slipped out from it's gums. Slowly and sleekly, the snake squeezed itself into the opening. Paige screamed and carried on, she could hear the dirty great brute slithering along behind her. After a couple of seconds Paige reached another opening. A dull moonlight filtered the inclosed tunnel. Paige peeked her head out and her jaw dropped open. She must be millions of feet up high. All Paige could see was a few puffy clouds, and a dull, muddy ground far below which seemed to stretch out for all enternity. Paige looked back and saw the snake closing in, she made her choice. She jumped out and plumeted thousands of feet, the wind howled in her ears and blew back her long brown hair. She needed help, she shut her eyes tight and opened her mouth wide. "SEAN!!!!!" she screamed. Back in reality, Sean lay snoozing peacefully under his blankets. But the mattress gave way and he fell right into Paiges nightmare. The two teenagers fell side-by-side. Paige reached out and grabbed Eric's hand. Both were reaching the ground with increasing speed. Far below them, giant spikes emerged from the ground, Freddy stood between them smiling, his sharp, yellow teeth bared. "Paige if you pulled me in then pull us both out now!" Sean commanded. Paige shut her eyes once more and concentrated on her room. Both Paige and Sean disintigrated in a whisp of smoke, right as a pike pierced Sean's skin by a millimeter. "Noooooo!" Freddy cried. "They're mine! I had them both! it's not fair!" he howled. Sean woke up back in his hospital bed, shaking and covered in sweat. He examined his stomach and saw a small bloody spot were the spike had pierced it back in the nightmare.

"Have you done that before? called somebody into your dreams?" Sean sat down next to Paige in the cafeteria. In was a sunny morning and both the two had refused to get back to sleep after last night's events. "When I was a little girl, around six, whenever I had a nightmare I would pull in my Dad and get him to help me......"
"You did!?" asked Sean, shocked that this was real, but then again, someone trying to kill him in his dreams wasn't any weirder. "Yeah, but then my Dad died and my Mom re-married." Paige said, this was true, the Dad at her home on Elm Street was only her step-father. "That's really amazing." Sean complemented.
"Thanks, but what are we going to do about Freddy?" she asked.
"I have a plan, but I warn you, it's quiet dangerous." Sean warned...........

I love the Freddy spider.

Thanks. It was orginally just going to be a snake but then I thought 'Hey, a spider can be more scarier' so I made it both.
More tonight!

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Sorry I've taken so long, I've been really busy. But here's the next bit!

It turned out that Sean's plan wasn't as spectacular as Paige had hoped. Infact, it seemed like quiet a stupid and dangerous idea. He recommended Paige going to sleep then try and pull everybody else into her dream. "Someone could get really hurt!" Paige yelled.
"Hey calm down! you can pull us out, remember!?" Sean replied.
"What's the point of going in anyway?"
"To defeat him!"
Paige sighed. There was just no getting through to Sean, in her few days at Roaming Meadows Institute Paige had come to the conculsion that Sean was the most stubborn of the lot. But without hesitation, Kyle, Eric, Jade and Selena had agreed. They were all fasinated when they found out that Paige could pull people into her dreams.
That night Paige headed off to bed earlier then the others. The plan was that she was first to head off, then pull in the others regardless of if they were awake or not. "Just remember,' Sean said to Paige as she headed to her room, 'pull us in as soon as your dream begins."
"But I haven't been able to do that since I was a little girl." Paige warned. "You can do this, you did it last night." Sean tried to comfort her.

Paige snuggled down in her bed, the sheets so warm and comfy. She hated the fact that her dreams were now putting her in physical danger. She loved to dream, well at least she use to anyway.......DRIP, DRIP
It seemed there was a dripping pipe somewhere near Paige. She sat up in bed to listen more closely. Hang on, she wasn't in bed anymore. She laid on a stone-cold metal ramp. Leaky pipes and pounding machinary surrounded the poor girl. It was the boiler room again. Paige slowly descended the ladder close to hear, she kept an ear open for any sign or movement. She found herself quickly infront of a giant, iron door. SSSSSCCCCCRRRREEEEEEEEECCCCCCHHHHH!! this was it. Paige focused on all of her friends and shouted thier name's one by one. "Sean! Eric! Kyle! Selena! Jade! help me please!" It seemed these new 'dream warriors' had not entered Paige's dream like they thought they would. Most of them crashed through rusty pipes or spilled out of boilers. "Owe, my ass......" Kyle joked.
"Sh! he's behind this door." Paige pointed.
"Lets open it." Jade ordered. They all worked together and pushed as hard as they could. The rusty door opened slowly as bits of rust fell off. The doors gave way and showed them a gigantic stadium-sized chamber. It had pillars which had been carved into demon-like faces which rose to support a ceiling lost in darkness. Great big puddles littered the ground. In the middle sat a huge murky pool, the water stirred and throthed. Paige could tell from the look on Sean's face that he regreted the plan he had formulated. A long figure erupted from the waters, making all of the teenagers jump. The creature bared it's razor fangs and roared. It wasn't a normal Freddy. Once again he had transformed himself into a gigantic snake, he had bulging spikes on his back and the top of his head, burnt marks were scattered all over his horrible snout. "It's time to finish what he started." Eric said.
The kids gritted thier teeth, determination was spread over all of thier faces.

(This isn't the end of the story by the way, not by a long shot.)

More coming soon, I'm just doing a movie poster for the story, that's why I'm taking awhile. Sorry.

I'd like to see where this is going.....
I love a good showdown.

Sorry I haven't posted the next bit 🙁

It will come tomorrow! since it's friday I'll have more time to write it! 😊

But I do know where it's going.

Here's the next piece!

The five teenagers stood thier ground, ready to attack. Freddy swished his massive tail, ready to let them make the first move. "On my signal.'
Sean whispered. "3........2...........-"
"I'm sorry!" Jade cried. She ran towards the wall and sat down, tears streaming from her eyes, her head in her hands. "COWARD!" Selena roared. Unfortunatly none of them were paying any attention to what Freddy was doing. He took his chance and swiped his tail towards the end of the row. His tail collided with Selena's rib, the momentum sent her hurtling into Eric who went flying into the next person. Like dominos, they were all thrown to the cold ground. Paige leaped up and ran at Freddy, she dug her finger-nails into his skin, hacking and slashing violently, burnt flesh clung to her finger-nails. The monster roared in horrible pain, the little brat had damaged one of his eyes and blinded him. Blood poured out of the wound and splashed onto Paige. Now she was going to pay, Freddy swished his tail once more and sent the young girl flying into the wall, rendering her unconcious. "Paige!!" Sean cried. Freddy slithered towards the remaining threesome. Sean acted with the stupidest decision yet, he ran towards Freddy and crawled up on his back, grabbing onto the dirty spikes which flooded his back. Selena covered her ears with her hands, blocking out the cries that surrounded her. This was all just a dream, just a horrible dream. All she wanted to do was wake up back in her bed, safe and sound. Freddy did everything he could to get Sean off his back, but this little $hit was obviously the strongest of the bunch. "Help me!" Sean cried, pulling spikes from Freddy's back and throwing them to the ground far below, blood dribbled everywhere. Eric didn't hesitate, he ran fourth flailing his fists madly into Freddy's body. Eric fought tooth, nail, fists and legs. Freddy howled his beastial rage, trying desperatly to beat these new dream-teens who were actually stupid enough to think they could beat him. "If you can't stand the heat, get off my back!" he laughed. Sean's hands began to tingle, to burn. Steam issued from the demons back. Sean cried in pain and gave up, he fell towards the ground with increasing speed, when him and the ground met the chamber echoed with a sickening crunch. Sean lay, gasping for breath. Eric still did all he could to hold up against Freddy. But Freddy had been doing this sought of thing for a long time, he had killed many strong teenagers before and none of these ones were any different. Even if they did manage to beat him he would find a way back from Hell. He was contagious, like a virus, there was no getting rid of him. Sure he came across a few exceptions every now and then, some kid who had mastered the techniques of Freddy's world, but everytime some smart-mouth b!tch did kill him, he always found a way back. The evil snake picked a screaming Eric up in his mouth, drool covered the poor boy as he became lodge in Freddy's razor fangs, only to match were the blades that sat on the 'normal' Freddy's blistered fingers. The teeth pierced the teenagers skin, warm blood oozed down Freddy's throat. Just as he began devouring the boy something surprisingly heavy collided with side of Freddy's snout, the object fell to the floor and crumbeled into countless pieces. It was a rock. "Hey! ugly!" it seemed that Paige was up and kicking, aswell as sporting a few wounds. Freddy knew who he wanted, the girl, she was the ring-leader, bring one down, bring em' all down. He dropped Eric from his mouth, he fell to the floor covered in blood and as motionless as death, a giant tooth which had un-lodged itself from Freddy's gums lay beside him. Freddy slithered towards Paige, his fangs bared and ready to attack. She braced herself, thinking up a back-up plan incase anything went wrong. Any second now, her plan would come into action.........he was getting closer........closer.......NOW! Paige withdrew two spikes from behind her back and through them like spears at the sick, dream freak. Her aim was perfect, the spikes jabbed thier way through his skin, blood covered the rocky ground, the room was filled with his cries. But it wasn't over yet. Freddy began to take on a form easier to use. His snake image began to shrink until he was finally the man they all knew, the disfigured man with a dark-brown hat, red and green sweater and razor-fingers. "Ahhhh.......that's better." he grumbeled. He snapped his fingers and room melted into something just as familiar, the boiler room. Sean grabbed an abandoned pipe which lay near a boiler, he snuck up behind him ready to attack. With all his might, Sean swung the pipe like a baseball bat. Freddy spun around with perfect timing and grabbed the pipe in his hands. "I've been in this game a long time a$$hole!" he smacked Sean across the face with his ordinary hand, Sean went flying up against the wall, blood trickling down his forehead. "No!!" Paige cried. In a whisp of smoke, Freddy evaporated and re-appeared behind her. He grabbed her by her night-shirt and through her into Sean, both of them lay together on the floor. "Awww.........how sweet" he mocked. His shadow looming over them, he raised his deadly glove. Just when he was ready to bring it down on them he was impaled with a rusty old spike. He turned his neck ever so slightly and saw the other girl.......Jade. "Thank you Jade.........." Paige whispered. "Don't try b!tch!" Freddy swore. He grabbed the spike which ran through his back and out the other end and yanked it out. Jade was next, his knives cut into her stomach like butter, blood poured from her pyajamas. "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!" Paige cried. Selena gasped for air until she vanished into a puff of smoke, she was dead. The rest of the four woke up back in bed with a jolt. "Jade, no!" Paige yelled throughout the darkness of her room. Selena, Sean, and Paige were afraid of what the nurses would find when they went to wake up Jade. Eric was hopefully okay.

More later.

You did a great job capturing Freddy's attitude!

Thanks, sorry I haven't posted anything in like a month, I thought you had stopped reading. I'll try and add some more as soon as I can, I just have exams but they end in a couple of days, so I'll post it then.

hey,i'm back.Sorry it's been a while since we talked.Can't wait for the next bit!

Woah! a lot of this has slipped my mind and I've forgot about it! It's the holidays down here and I'm at my cousins house in the South Island (I live in the North Island). I'll post some when I go back home in a couple of days, I'll post the movie poster too! 😉